Report, edit, etc...Posted by r[s]t on 2006-01-12 at 22:01:17
found a bug.... cant pick up last c4 and corsairs dont die.
oh and sergeants dont swear and call u shiz head like that. there not suppose to. IN battle and movies its different.
and they dont walk to one guy at the top then all the way to the bottom then back... they walk to the guy on the left (in your case, the next guy below and all the way back)
so he'd start at top left, to bottom, then top right and down. (the play were he talks about where your from)
oh and sergeants dont swear and call u shiz head like that. there not suppose to. IN battle and movies its different.
and they dont walk to one guy at the top then all the way to the bottom then back... they walk to the guy on the left (in your case, the next guy below and all the way back)
so he'd start at top left, to bottom, then top right and down. (the play were he talks about where your from)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-12 at 22:18:48
This is based off movie impressions of Boot Camps anyway. I've never been to one. You've probably been to many, because you seem like you live there.
ADDITION:
As for the glitch, I found that after I released the demo. 5 other glitches found too, but they're pretty minor.
ADDITION:
As for the glitch, I found that after I released the demo. 5 other glitches found too, but they're pretty minor.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDaddy0420 on 2006-01-12 at 23:31:46
Well I think it would sound a bit more authentic and I would personally take this map more seriously if you added in (even fake) unit tags. Like have your leader shout out "Alright Fox company listen up!!"
Something like that.
Also soldiers don't swear too much in battle, well the leaders don't at least. I mean they might yell "Get your butt(censor) up the beach private, we got men dieing out there!"
If you got time I would make the sarge more comic then insulting. Like:
"How tall are you private!?!" *6-1 SIR!* "Jeez I didn't know they stacked poo(censor) that high!"
And are you going to use the wav. I sent you? Its prefect for back round music for the beach landing. OR when you come out of being shell shock.
Something like that.
Also soldiers don't swear too much in battle, well the leaders don't at least. I mean they might yell "Get your butt(censor) up the beach private, we got men dieing out there!"
If you got time I would make the sarge more comic then insulting. Like:
"How tall are you private!?!" *6-1 SIR!* "Jeez I didn't know they stacked poo(censor) that high!"
And are you going to use the wav. I sent you? Its prefect for back round music for the beach landing. OR when you come out of being shell shock.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-13 at 15:21:53
Um, that's all going to be in "Chapter 2". I really don't know why you're telling me this... Anyway I didn't like your .wav too much, because it was just taken from Saving Private Ryan. I got better .wavs anyway. Thanks anyway! 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Urmom(U) on 2006-01-13 at 17:14:19
Hmm the demo wasn't too bad but I glitched up the Stargate system. It wouldn't remove the units I was building. You might want to fix that. You should also do a bit more for the ammo system instead of just subtracting 2 bullets each time. Try randomizing the amount.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-13 at 17:23:05
It will be explained why I remove that certain amount in Chapter Two while your on the ship.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDaddy0420 on 2006-01-13 at 18:42:07
QUOTE(Dark_lunatic_K @ Jan 13 2006, 12:21 PM)
Um, that's all going to be in "Chapter 2". I really don't know why you're telling me this... Anyway I didn't like your .wav too much, because it was just taken from Saving Private Ryan. I got better .wavs anyway. Thanks anyway!
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actually it wasn't taken from saving private ryan
I custem made it from a lot of different effects, including my own voice that you hear in the begining which is a sort of distant yell....
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ryu on 2006-01-13 at 19:53:37
QUOTE(Dark_lunatic_K @ Nov 20 2005, 04:30 PM)
Yoshi said I steal maps so he banned me but now I'm back and you guys seem to be way more mature.
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i don't blame him, considering u stole the 28 days thing from Marines Halo Map, and i dunno how much bs u did in MM-Guild, wit shad0w , rommel, and rune.
i'm sorry i can't say the same for ur maturity...
anyway gj on getting the 1 fan lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDarkAvenger on 2006-01-13 at 20:02:29
QUOTE(Dark_lunatic_K @ Jan 12 2006, 06:08 PM)
Lol, WOW! Never knew there was someone out there to respect my hard work. I don't know why more peopke haven't downloaded the demo, it's probably because of the negative comments sent in about me being such a "bad" person. Oh well, I'll finish this map for the fans (such as you, bud!). People please try out demo and give me some feedback, it's definately a great map. 
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WOW oh wow, wow for how big of an ego you have! Your map demo is garbage, I really thought even someone of your inability could see the sarcasm in what I wrote, PATHETIC! Here, since you're so impaired between thought and sight, I edited the post just for you, and by the way when I referred crap as a term that was too good for your map, I thought you caught on. The only serious part was the WOW, I was wowed cuz I have never seen such a pathetic excuse of a demo, of course you'll try to say "It's just a demo" but demo's should reflect the map in at least 50% quality! If that's 50% or even 10%, you need to work a lil harder and stop with your ranting about how awesome you are, if I never read and saw how cocky and worthless you were, I wouldn't be pointing out how horrible ur demo was, but anyway I was serious when I said WOW never have I been held in such awe as to be brought near death by a game... Goodluck, hope many others love being wowed as much as I did!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-13 at 21:24:19
Reporting both of you.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by r[s]t on 2006-01-13 at 21:33:47
OH no! hes reporting u both.
-dark avenger, ur critism needs better work (mine had typos)
-Dark lunatic k, its the internet, lighten up, plus i wasnt dissing ur map.
-Yes, i have been to boot camp
-U might wanna fix what i suggested. It add realism
-stealing maps aint cool
-stars-chris, thats what i said beofre.
-techno really doesnt fit in. Try classical.
-dark avenger, ur critism needs better work (mine had typos)
-Dark lunatic k, its the internet, lighten up, plus i wasnt dissing ur map.
-Yes, i have been to boot camp
-U might wanna fix what i suggested. It add realism
-stealing maps aint cool
-stars-chris, thats what i said beofre.
-techno really doesnt fit in. Try classical.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-13 at 22:21:22
It's like a classical techno. I never stole a map in my life. Hey you guys know what. You say one more thing like that I'm reporting anyone who says I steal maps. If you can prove I steal maps then say w/e the hell you want, otherwise I don't want any of this BS. Please stop it, I know some of you guys are jealous. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by r[s]t on 2006-01-14 at 00:05:59
Classical Techno?
Techno is actually quite new in the music industry.
I'm not saying dont use techno, im saying it does not fit.
Why would anyone be jealous? Being cocky isnt the best way to make friends. You put a lot of work in your map, but the triggers i've seen in that map isnt hard to make as long as u know what your doing.. It juts time consuming tirggers and new ideas. Nothing really revolutionary, just creative. You do need to work on Army-life real-ness. But this is starcraft, so the best you can do is improve the dialouge (thats all i could think of right now).
Does the deflier sniper actually do anything?
Techno is actually quite new in the music industry.
I'm not saying dont use techno, im saying it does not fit.
Why would anyone be jealous? Being cocky isnt the best way to make friends. You put a lot of work in your map, but the triggers i've seen in that map isnt hard to make as long as u know what your doing.. It juts time consuming tirggers and new ideas. Nothing really revolutionary, just creative. You do need to work on Army-life real-ness. But this is starcraft, so the best you can do is improve the dialouge (thats all i could think of right now).
Does the deflier sniper actually do anything?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2006-01-14 at 18:50:54
QUOTE(r[s]t @ Jan 13 2006, 11:05 PM)
Classical Techno?
Techno is actually quite new in the music industry.
I'm not saying dont use techno, im saying it does not fit.
Why would anyone be jealous? Being cocky isnt the best way to make friends. You put a lot of work in your map, but the triggers i've seen in that map isnt hard to make as long as u know what your doing.. It juts time consuming tirggers and new ideas. Nothing really revolutionary, just creative. You do need to work on Army-life real-ness. But this is starcraft, so the best you can do is improve the dialouge (thats all i could think of right now).
Does the deflier sniper actually do anything?
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Techno is actually quite new in the music industry.
I'm not saying dont use techno, im saying it does not fit.
Why would anyone be jealous? Being cocky isnt the best way to make friends. You put a lot of work in your map, but the triggers i've seen in that map isnt hard to make as long as u know what your doing.. It juts time consuming tirggers and new ideas. Nothing really revolutionary, just creative. You do need to work on Army-life real-ness. But this is starcraft, so the best you can do is improve the dialouge (thats all i could think of right now).
Does the deflier sniper actually do anything?
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LOL he deleted like 2 posts, that's hilarious. I agree with everything that other dude said(the 1 who did the sarcasm crap, forgot his name). The demo was really dull and was nothing spectacular. I've seen better average b.net players make better, and like he said if you wern't so cocky, people wouldn't give you negative feedback, they'd just help you fix what they dont like about the game.
LOL, if anyone is jealous of your map, it's because they don't know how to do it... which only... everyone knows how to do. Well goodluck, and I hope you WOW tons more of people!
P.S.
Oh yeah I wanted to wait till I actually saw an example of ur lil game before posting this, unlike some people.
QUOTE(Dark_Lunatic_K)
I don't see anything new in this, it's all a mix of old things put into fancy words.
Aw have more faith in your own map! It's... better than what a baby could make right?
By the way, there were some glitches with c4 and you really need to let up with the text explanations and side notes, goodluck with finishing.
~Tdnfthe1
Report, edit, etc...Posted by HorroR on 2006-01-14 at 22:13:41
I played the demo. I liked it. No glitches came to me. Hurry up and finish..I wanna play this!1!1q!1MoreQ
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pyro_Maniak14 on 2006-01-14 at 22:53:56
Well the demo was ok but I thought it was too long... especially when you were in the barracks and the Sargeant was talking to everyone. Another thing... Dark... I remember you saying something on the Biohazard thread... OH YES... here it is! Near the middle of the page is says "You guys need to learn to make maps. Those screenshots are awful. Swearing like immature retards in a map isn't going to make your clan popular, you fools." I hope to GOD you were kidding. If they were swearing like "immature retards" then what was all that swearing in the demo from the Sargeant? Second... You dont have any screenshots for this game and if they came out I don't think they would be any good anyway. THIRD... their demo is alot... ALOT better than yours... I think YOUR the immature retard... And I remember somewhere you said that you could help someone with a map because you were a "professional map-maker"... HAHAHA!! Don't make me laugh... Sure Im not that good a map maker but your DEFINENTLY not pro...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by WoodenFire on 2006-01-14 at 23:35:48
Don't be hate'n sir DLK...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Septhiroth on 2006-01-15 at 03:13:25
Hmmmmm The Demo wasen't that spetacular. Even though it just a Demo it should be at least be enjoyable. What you should do is add more realisim to the game.
Example:
When you train to plant all those C4's and walk through an Artillery Field you should be training with other troops as well than just yourself.
You should also be able to learn how to train on the beach landings as well. Seargents don't swear and call other's names as well. Was kinda boring.............. Even though this is only in Chapter 1 but it should still have some exicitment for people so they can grow the suspence when they land on the beaches.
Oh yea how are you going to make the Beaches anyways? All the Beaches i've seen to be honest were actually extremly horrible. Except for Day of Days. Are you just gonna making a simple one? or a extremly complex one that consist of several levels that troops can advance like ramps. Or...... are you going to make it a very steep cliff where you have to climb up with ropes!, It deppends what Sector of the Beaches you really are on . But what worries me is that how you'll make the intense action on the Beaches. It's difficult to give the player this kind of experince and about none of the WW II maps have succesfully made the insane actions on the beaches properly. Anyways GL
Example:
When you train to plant all those C4's and walk through an Artillery Field you should be training with other troops as well than just yourself.
You should also be able to learn how to train on the beach landings as well. Seargents don't swear and call other's names as well. Was kinda boring.............. Even though this is only in Chapter 1 but it should still have some exicitment for people so they can grow the suspence when they land on the beaches.
Oh yea how are you going to make the Beaches anyways? All the Beaches i've seen to be honest were actually extremly horrible. Except for Day of Days. Are you just gonna making a simple one? or a extremly complex one that consist of several levels that troops can advance like ramps. Or...... are you going to make it a very steep cliff where you have to climb up with ropes!, It deppends what Sector of the Beaches you really are on . But what worries me is that how you'll make the intense action on the Beaches. It's difficult to give the player this kind of experince and about none of the WW II maps have succesfully made the insane actions on the beaches properly. Anyways GL
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-15 at 12:28:40
The demo is definately nothing special, I never said it was. I said the actual beach landing would be something special. Hey you know what, you guys talk so much shiz, I want to see any of you make a map. Over 90% of the maps in production are finished by new map makers, the rest are not finished at all. Respect the fact that I can achieve things and you can't. Whatever, this discussion is over.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Ice_Inferno_X3 on 2006-01-15 at 12:29:33
QUOTE(Dark_lunatic_K @ Nov 20 2005, 06:30 PM)
Okay, first off: The deleted scenes are just some scenes that were in theory but didn't make it into the map. Another person is doing both the game trailers and game demos, because they're for his maps. It's like advertising being introduced into a map for the first time ever (revolutionary). As for realism, check my Preview so you can see the effects in that that will be put into the game. dumbducky, don't ever say "You stole my idea!", because I never steal anything, in fact you are probably the worst map maker of all time and have never made a map in your life wanghead. And to answer your questions: Each chapter will be at a good speed depending on how fast you go through the map, like say you stay in one area for a bit and observe terrain and unit names before going to the next area, that would extend gameplay time. It's multiplayer, 6 players in fact. Realism answers itself if you know English and have a brain. The above questions of yours ARE the revolutionary things, but there'll be some more that I haven't stated yet and I probably won't just to surprise you. Everyone give props to WoodenFire for bringing me to SEN, I came here before, but Yoshi said I steal maps so he banned me without giving proof and shiz like that. Sure I was pissed, but now I'm back and you guys seem to be way more mature.
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the map looks good so far dark
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Snipe on 2006-01-15 at 12:52:28
Very interesting map indeed man. I love seeing Rpg like maps going around and this 1 seems pretty awsome. Good luck on finishing it and go for some originality! woo!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDaddy0420 on 2006-01-15 at 13:33:43
Yea this map is going to be great. Just work on the dialogue a little bit maybe and you will be fine! I have full confidence in you that you will finish this map becuase you have finished like 20 other ones so yeah.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Dark_lunatic_K on 2006-01-15 at 17:41:27
Finally some positive feedback... What a relief... 
Anyway, I've got additions to the story line which I will use during the game's many cinematics. I've also made a decision to have Beach Landing training, but it's going to be all talking, no participating (you'll see what happens in the game). I've also made a decision to have everyone start off in a Cruiser and then hop into a boat. The last decision I made is that I'm going to have a "Party" system in this, so that you can pick up people to form one big squad. I know most of you hate that techno song, but it's going to be played everytime a party member dies. More updates coming soon!
Anyway, I've got additions to the story line which I will use during the game's many cinematics. I've also made a decision to have Beach Landing training, but it's going to be all talking, no participating (you'll see what happens in the game). I've also made a decision to have everyone start off in a Cruiser and then hop into a boat. The last decision I made is that I'm going to have a "Party" system in this, so that you can pick up people to form one big squad. I know most of you hate that techno song, but it's going to be played everytime a party member dies. More updates coming soon!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by HorroR on 2006-01-15 at 17:47:54
Damn I liked it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Septhiroth on 2006-01-15 at 18:26:22
QUOTE(Dark_lunatic_K @ Jan 15 2006, 11:28 AM)
The demo is definately nothing special, I never said it was. I said the actual beach landing would be something special. Hey you know what, you guys talk so much shiz, I want to see any of you make a map. Over 90% of the maps in production are finished by new map makers, the rest are not finished at all. Respect the fact that I can achieve things and you can't. Whatever, this discussion is over.
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These aren't negative feedback these are feedback that People try to give to you to help you improve your map. Of course I'm not saying your horrible at mapmaking or anything all i'm saying is that there are some parts that are missing with realism. I totally support your Map but i'm just saying It needs some more excitment and realism to it. Your idea is like any Basic and usual Maps I've seen and I hope you give me further information on the designs on the beaches too
