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Hey! this is my newest work.. tell me what u think about it

Not bad, i like it.

The space where you put high and low terrain is a bit of a waste of space.
I think the bottom expansions a re a bit close, you should change the terrain a bit.
If a player gets hold of the middle expansion, it would be very hard for the other player to take control of the bottom expansions without pushing straight through with brute force.
The expansion on the bottom middle can be protected very easily with tanks. think it through, how would a player get units through that choke, and up a ramp?
This is very symmetrical, right down the center. not necesarily bad thing though, but it just looks a bit odd.

There are plenty things you did right though, minerals, expansions terrain advantages, etc.

Hmmm here's a modified version. I changed the middle, ( removed the geyser ), added 2 islands, some doodads.. I think it looks prettier now.

I think it looks much better, and you solved one of the things i was worried about. Good job.

Like yenku said, i think the bottom portion of the map could become obsolete, but maybe not. ANd personally, i dont think personal expos should have gas, just like in that one Dahila or w/e it's called map.

Other than that, i dont see much discrepancies in side balances so i guess this map is cool

Normally, I would agree that personal nats shouldnt have gas as well. However, the other expansions are kinda far apart, so that might be justified.

And just a suggestion, but I think that high temple ground near the bottom of the map should be ground leveled, to give some more room in the middle.

I know that personal nats shouldnt have gas, but on this map, i dont see much of a problem, both bases have it, its not very unbalanced by doing that.
And yes, Dhalia is the correct name.

whoa the map looks neat, and its actually Dahlia of Jungle

it is nothing like dahlia

Wesmic, i meant Dahlia is it, i know its dahlia of jungle, nevermind.

Ihatett, he is just reffereing to the personal mineral only expansions. Yes i agree the rest of the map is nothing like it.

I wasn't saying it was anything like Dahlia, its just that Yenku spelled it Dhalia or somethign instead of Dahlia, man... im confused..

lol oh yea, i did spell it wrong. im also pretty confused at this conversation.

Wierd moments....

Mass Confusion.... Just like Father's Day in Harlem...

lol

That's a great joke... some people don't get it... think about it though...

By the way... I'm not racist.... i gotta color TV

We should probably stop this conversation.
Ah hell, no one moderates this anyway. =D

Yes, I think you are right... I haven't ever seen a moderator in here. O.O

oooh, now that i've seen dahila, i need to say something about that map...

I think gas is a problem on Dahila so races like zerg would have a little more difficulty than other races.

Should i let the middle like this ? As some1 suggested.

It looks better than the previous one you posted.

So yes you should.

Yes thats better, maybe you should add a gas in the middle expansion though.

The expansions towards the middle of the map below the cliffs would really make the action move towards the top of the map. I think that if you moved those to below the cliffs in the bottom half of the map and turned the parabola shaped cliff in the middle upside down then you could really balance the playing of both top and bottom.

i dont see what your saying, sorry.

You want him to take the expansion in the middle (right?), and flip it upside down?
If that is so, i disagree. Its fine how it is, plus tanks could seige it from the other cliffs.