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Corruption RPG
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In a vast world of toture, hatred, and destruction lives a city...a city different than them all. But what is so different about this city? This city is of good...something so different in these times...However a huge war breaks out and they must send troops into it. A few brave men step up and offer to go. Out of the millions who volunteered, only a couple hundred go. They fight for a long time, and pretty soon most of them are wipped out. A few remaining soldiers make it back to a transport plane and return safely where they learn that the city has turned even. The force of evil known as The Corrupted make its way from place to place corrupting all that goes, and this one was in its path. Back from the war, the soldiers realize that they have to fight another war...this one though...could change their lives forever.

Map Info:
- Join forces with up to 6 people
- 11 Missions which will take you all across the map
- Camps around the map for you to help
- Terrain = Platform
- Size = 256 x 256
- Also Making Map is MillenniumArmy
- Upgrades and Abilities

Created By: Dragoon-elf and MillenniumArmy

You might wanna rename the RPG since they're already alot of Corruption RPGs. Also, try improving your sentence structuce and clarity.

I've never seen nor heard of a Corruption RPG...and as of my sentence structure thank you...but I don't care about it enough...people get the idea

People aren't going to play your map if you write like this "The knights of old times ran around, they barely survived, killing dragons for food, then, out of nowhere, came a giant lizard who vanquished some of them, but they managed to survive by eating food."

People aren't gonna judge a map by its intro unless people like u come in here and give what you think is an opinion that makes you appear smarter. The point of writing that was to get people to see it. I think the map will turn out great no matter what I write in its order.

Apparently you took my comment as trying to improve your grammar and overall sentence structure as an insult. Even though you got your point across, it's better to get it across in a more orderly fashion to show people that isn't a typical battle.net map that's unbalanced, stupid and all massive amount of enemies attacking you. Appearance can be a very strong tool, and if you don't show good appearance, then people aren't going to see the point. English probably isn't your native language, so I gave you some slack, but you don't have to take it as an insult, it was something you could to do to improve your map. I didn't try to insult you personally, since that would of been disrespectful. I can sense your bitterness in your words though.



Now tell me, which reply are you going to take more seriously and actually read?

Apparently, there's no need for any aggresive attitudes acted upon each other. All dragoon-elf is trying to do is just posting what our corruption rpg is going to be like. It doesn't have to be a well-thought out introduction since we really haven't started making it yet. And yet you're bashing on him for no apparent reason by telling him to make his introduction better. It's like you're slapping a calculus book in front an 8 year old and expecting him to learn all of that stuff instantaneously.

Apparently, people take me too seriously. All I told him it would it be wise to try and improve his sentence structure and clarity, from what I read from the introduction, it just doesn't sound right.


Hardly, I told him that it would be wise for him to improve it. I didn't insult him, I never said his map sucked, I said his grammar could use some work. If you people can't take some critism about your map, don't bother posting in here, seriously, just keep the map to yourself. He acted agressive to me, and I simply replied in defense, I didn't insult him.


A quite true analogy, but does not apply to this situtation. It'd be more like me telling someone to brush up on their math if they write an equation like this x+x+x+x+x+x+x+x instead of 8X, which are both correct, but 8X is the better way to go.

Alright, thats cool. Now lets stop our digression

Platform Terrain rpg eh? This should be interesting, since there are few Platform Terrain rpg's if any at all. Your map Dragoon-elf I can vision on what you are trying to say in your intro. That is pretty cool. So what all are you going to add into your map you guys? Are you going to have a Real time combat, Turn Based Combat or the Final Fantasy Combat battle system? I think the best battle system is the Turn Based Combat because it gives you more options on strategy then the other battle systems do. And also are you going to have the Item Dropship system for you to use items from unloading a unit from a dropship? And will you be making spells for you hero to cast? Just some questions that I wanted to ask ya'.

There must be a reason why people take you too seriously, is it the way you word you sentences? You should try rewording yours. You could have also explained why he should have improved anything. One reason could have been you didn't understand it or whatever. You didn't give any explanation or feedback about the idea at all.

Plus it doesn't even matter at all at this point, omfg it's one paragraph giving vague detailing about his idea. It's like an outline before you write a first draft, you don't go and correct every single error trying to make it final right away. Sure you would do this if the map was actually being made, but not if it's just an idea.



I've seen a corruption RPG before.

That does sound cool... keep it up..

but yeh change the name

Hm, we've already settled it devilesk. No need for you to go in here trying to start an arguement, which is what you are clearly doing. I didn't have real thoughts on it since I've seen a Corruption RPG, and a vague story doesn't inspire me to read and feedback.

not to go off topic here but Ultimo wtf! lmao whats with your avatar and signature! lol

You are wrong, it's not clearly what I was trying to do at all. Plus Ultimo hasn't replied yet to your comments or mill's comments so just because YOU say it's over doesn't mean he doesn't have anything else to say, I was just continuing to post my opinion on the issue before he makes his reply.

That whole post I made btw was all towards Ultimo.

Umm devilesk..... you know that that's not Devlin you quoted right?

I'm DevliN you fool!