Please rate and give me comments!
If you like this ill put it into a map
This isnt about halo just so you know
its RvB but in starcraft way.
SC : ReD vs BluE
-Episode 1- "Jinks!"
-Red Base-
Red Soldier : Captain, I hope we defeat the blue.
Red Captain : Shut up! You'll jinks us! The maker can
hear you!
FierceMapMaker : So they think they'll win huh? Ill do
something to kill them all! Plus it'll be hilarious!
FierceMapMaker : First ill put these warthogs here, and
glitch them up. Ahah! There! Hehehe!
Red Soldier 2 : Um.. WHAT THE.. WHERE'D THAT WARTHOG
COME FROM?!
Red Captain : Well, ummz. They reinforcements did soldier.
Red Soldier 2 : Really?
Red Soldier : No, now shut up!
-Blue Base-
Blue Soldier : Um captain ima go through the telporter and try to
flank the red team.
Blue Captain : Alright. First, I'll krunchatize you!
Blue Soldier 2 : KRUNCHATIZE ME CAPT'N!
Blue Captain : ...
Blue Soldier : ...
Blue Soldier 2 : What? Can a woman have a dream?
Blue Captain : But your a man.. Arn't you?
Blue Soldier 2 : *Sings girls just wanna have fun!*
Blue Captain : Ok...
...

ADDITION:

Make a movie out of this, (obviously with more episodes.) random, good.
I missed the part where this has anything to do with StarCraft.
its just text i didnt want to say,
Blue Marine Captain :
Blue Ghost Soldier :
etc, etc. I want to make a movie of this, such as using starcraft units
and they are saying the things.
I think it would be better if you but like 5 episodes in one map, bucause the one in the DB was to short for me, but one you thought of was great.

hey stfu i made that

meh mine sucked... i give you permission to continue with the series fierce.. (why am i posting this?)
and also, this shouldn't be in the Creative forum (lol)
*EDIT* Nvm, i just realised your script doesnt have anything extremely unique either..
i like it its very funny lol. but u should put like a zergling is a bunny and then one of the soldiers goes up to it and says "HEY LOOK A BUNNY!!! ITS SO CUTE!!! I AM GOING TO PET THE BUNNY WABBIT!!!" then the bunny turns into a monster or something [ultra] and kills him or something