Report, edit, etc...Posted by acev on 2005-07-23 at 22:54:28
Well, I submitted this to the site but I'm not sure it will work because it is protected.
So, this is a map about what happens when Samus has been captured. Team Bravo goes on a mission to save her. But the Space Pirates have been expecting them. How will the story unfold?
This is Episode 1 of a 7 episode series. Episode 2 is at it's second demo, and Episode 3 has barely begun.
Well, I hope you enjoy!
Map Created by:Hyper_Tails(me), hyper_ashrua, and hypersupersonic.
(Remember, the map is protected. XD)
So, this is a map about what happens when Samus has been captured. Team Bravo goes on a mission to save her. But the Space Pirates have been expecting them. How will the story unfold?
This is Episode 1 of a 7 episode series. Episode 2 is at it's second demo, and Episode 3 has barely begun.
Well, I hope you enjoy!
Map Created by:Hyper_Tails(me), hyper_ashrua, and hypersupersonic.
(Remember, the map is protected. XD)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by purple100 on 2005-07-26 at 00:53:17
Looks decent..
*There are several spelling errors that should be dealt with. Any instance of "Phanzon" should be replaced with "Phazon".
*I would suggest reducing the damage that Phazon Elites do because the Magma suit upgrade doesn't hurt them much more than the Sniper (because of their size and firebat's damage type). The Magma suit actually makes it more difficult to fight them.
*The "Zerg Beacon" should be renamed to "Teleporter" or something similar. Likewise for "Terran Beacon".
*Instead of giving the players a Terran Science Vessel when they reach Dark Samus, try a Protoss Observer (they are smaller and less obtrusive). That, or make a trigger that continuously sets Dark Samus' energy to 0 so that she can't cloak.
*There are several spelling errors that should be dealt with. Any instance of "Phanzon" should be replaced with "Phazon".
*I would suggest reducing the damage that Phazon Elites do because the Magma suit upgrade doesn't hurt them much more than the Sniper (because of their size and firebat's damage type). The Magma suit actually makes it more difficult to fight them.
*The "Zerg Beacon" should be renamed to "Teleporter" or something similar. Likewise for "Terran Beacon".
*Instead of giving the players a Terran Science Vessel when they reach Dark Samus, try a Protoss Observer (they are smaller and less obtrusive). That, or make a trigger that continuously sets Dark Samus' energy to 0 so that she can't cloak.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by acev on 2005-07-26 at 04:10:04
Well, I figured i'd fix it and i took some of your advice. Here is the new one that i hope everyone will enjoy!
I always have a backup just incase i need to change something
EDIT* I fixed some of the glitches and some more.
I always have a backup just incase i need to change something
EDIT* I fixed some of the glitches and some more.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by iamandragon on 2005-07-30 at 01:40:11
Erm...mind a few crit?
The sotryline needs more thinking...From the briefing a saw there's a girl who popped from no where, and encountered some space pirates who for no damn reason at all captured her...I mean...since when bad guys are THAT stupid?
My suggestions: Try make the space pirates look mean, and give the girl a mission. Say... Samus is on a space exploreation mission and she met some space pirates who decides to 'have fun' with her...You can even give a time limit for the players before Samus gets killed!
Team Bravo can't be a name. Alpha Bravo Delta Echo Fox...Maybe be give them a formal name and nickname them team brovo?
Also the units...if you really want them to look real, lower their hp, and take out words like 'upgraded' 'level'. Simply saying 'magma suit' or 'Jim' would make it look more realistic. Also your units are a bit too strong. A sniper enduring hits after hits from a zealot and are still living. All the players do is attack-move, sit back and watch. If you lower the player's life point they'll be forced to micro their units, to prepare to move back/run/heal
Just a thought.
The sotryline needs more thinking...From the briefing a saw there's a girl who popped from no where, and encountered some space pirates who for no damn reason at all captured her...I mean...since when bad guys are THAT stupid?
My suggestions: Try make the space pirates look mean, and give the girl a mission. Say... Samus is on a space exploreation mission and she met some space pirates who decides to 'have fun' with her...You can even give a time limit for the players before Samus gets killed!
Team Bravo can't be a name. Alpha Bravo Delta Echo Fox...Maybe be give them a formal name and nickname them team brovo?
Also the units...if you really want them to look real, lower their hp, and take out words like 'upgraded' 'level'. Simply saying 'magma suit' or 'Jim' would make it look more realistic. Also your units are a bit too strong. A sniper enduring hits after hits from a zealot and are still living. All the players do is attack-move, sit back and watch. If you lower the player's life point they'll be forced to micro their units, to prepare to move back/run/heal
Just a thought.