Report, edit, etc...Posted by LegacyWeapon on 2005-09-10 at 21:06:34
I actually wrote this for school:
http://members.cox.net/dwfirebolt99/life.htm
http://members.cox.net/dwfirebolt99/life.htm
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Slyence on 2005-09-10 at 21:09:36
Nice work Legacy, Very sad. If I were to rate it on how it good it owuld be for school, I would have to say... 8.5/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-09-10 at 21:11:53
[center]Jeez, are you spying on me or something?
The grammar could be cleaned up a bit, but it's still pretty good.[/center]
The grammar could be cleaned up a bit, but it's still pretty good.[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by guardien on 2005-09-10 at 23:18:24
Wow, thats great, I cant do a short story, only long stories, but i never have the patience to finish it. My farthest was chapter 3. But i find they are great ideas though. I have one that keeps on playing outin my mind, far longer than the others. I'll save that, or should I write it now?
Swords of wars
A young man is promoted to Commander of an army after a lengthy battle. But his alligences change once he knows what dreaded things his superiors do to captured woman.
Swords of wars
A young man is promoted to Commander of an army after a lengthy battle. But his alligences change once he knows what dreaded things his superiors do to captured woman.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by warhammer40000 on 2005-09-14 at 19:26:28
Wow, that was pretty good... Too bad i couldnt steal it from you for school cause i write disgusting. =P
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Felagund on 2005-09-15 at 13:48:53
The grammar makes me shudder. It's almost as if the little boy wrote all the setences. I guess the moral of the story is decent enough, but the execution is pretty flawed. No offense, but you wrote that for school?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-15 at 13:57:40
Is it about you? 