Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-11 at 16:05:23
Post some haikus here all! (haiku's are 3 lined poems. the first and last line have 5 vowels and the second has 7 vowels) Here are some of mine(keep in mid that im in grade 9)
Eternal darkness,
Haunting the mind and the soul,
daylight brakes the curse.
Lost deep in the woods,
Nature is the obstacle,
I'll find my way out.
Falling from the sky,
There's no where to go but down,
Journey ends in death.
I will take your soul,
You will obey and serve me,
You will kill for me.
Government controls,
Nothing seems right in this world,
We must fight the power.
I guard hell's large gates,
I bring you too your fiery grave,
Get ready to die again.
There you have em. Write your own and please resist the urge to diss mine..
Eternal darkness,
Haunting the mind and the soul,
daylight brakes the curse.
Lost deep in the woods,
Nature is the obstacle,
I'll find my way out.
Falling from the sky,
There's no where to go but down,
Journey ends in death.
I will take your soul,
You will obey and serve me,
You will kill for me.
Government controls,
Nothing seems right in this world,
We must fight the power.
I guard hell's large gates,
I bring you too your fiery grave,
Get ready to die again.
There you have em. Write your own and please resist the urge to diss mine..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by n2o-SiMpSoNs on 2005-09-11 at 22:04:54
nice poems lol ill post one i wrote in 4th grade tomorrow!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by warhammer40000 on 2005-09-11 at 22:10:12
"Does anyone else find this weird?
I mean, we're looking down on Wayne's basement..
only that's not Wayne's basement..."
I mean, we're looking down on Wayne's basement..
only that's not Wayne's basement..."
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mini Moose 2707 on 2005-09-11 at 22:18:43
I dislike haiku.
The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-09-11 at 22:54:50
haikus are not only 5-7-5, ya'll know.
I don't want to write out all that I should say about it. Click here instead.
I don't want to write out all that I should say about it. Click here instead.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Fronter on 2005-09-11 at 23:13:34
QUOTE(Mini Moose 2707 @ Sep 11 2005, 08:18 PM)
I dislike haiku.
The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
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Agreed.The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
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I also consider Haikus not to be poems, becaue they do not take as much thought as a normal one.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-11 at 23:38:17
Well, it takes a different type of skill. Rhymes are easy but then again, so are haikus...And yeah i know there are different forms of haikus but this was the first form i was taught in school..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by guardien on 2005-09-12 at 15:36:21
I never liked Haiku's, they just never felt....complete. Maybe I've just been around my poems too long....
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.ZeALoT.oO on 2005-09-13 at 17:02:12
T-MaStAA's Haiku's are gothik
This is my gay haiku
I will end it on this line.
This is my gay haiku
I will end it on this line.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2005-09-13 at 17:10:16
I agree with moose,
The structure is confining
I just copied moose
The structure is confining
I just copied moose
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-13 at 22:25:11
Nice. at least people are participating. you can get more inspiration lisening to goth than rap i guess 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rantent on 2005-09-14 at 01:39:00
My haiku is lame.
Every line sounds the same.
Please read it again.
OMG!! |337 5p34/<!!
\/\/4+(|-| /\/\3 R0x0r '/0|_|r 80x0rZ!!
|\/|3 kr4zY GoSu!1!!1!!one!
Every line sounds the same.
Please read it again.
OMG!! |337 5p34/<!!
\/\/4+(|-| /\/\3 R0x0r '/0|_|r 80x0rZ!!
|\/|3 kr4zY GoSu!1!!1!!one!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2005-09-14 at 19:18:06
I am very bored
I make haikus when i'm bored
I am always bored
I make haikus when i'm bored
I am always bored
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-09-14 at 23:43:02
QUOTE(guardien @ Sep 12 2005, 12:36 PM)
I never liked Haiku's, they just never felt....complete. Maybe I've just been around my poems too long....
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I think that is part of the point. If you look at Japanese culture, most of it is sort of like that; incomplete thoughts and such. Confuciusism, while it started in China had a major impact on Japan; it was pretty much written in riddles, which are not complete. Taoism is based around that Tao-- a nameless object, much like the Jewish belief that YWH [sp?] has no name. Shintoism is a belief that different communities have spirits that watch over them, but the figures of the spirits is hardly defined.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2005-09-15 at 00:06:46
Haikus have no value. They have arbitrary rules. What is gained from them?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PCFredZ on 2005-09-15 at 17:11:09
QUOTE(Mini Moose 2707 @ Sep 11 2005, 10:18 PM)
I dislike haiku.
The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
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The structure is confining.
It also bores me.
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Any moron can
Write haikus just stop at the
Seventeenth sylab
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-15 at 17:25:18
QUOTE
Any moron can
Write haikus just stop at the
Seventeenth sylab
Write haikus just stop at the
Seventeenth sylab
Yeah but they wont make sence: example
Here is a haiku
I like cheese and i also
See it doesnt make
QUOTE
Haikus have no value. They have arbitrary rules. What is gained from them?
What is gained from any song or poem?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PCFredZ on 2005-09-15 at 17:41:54
QUOTE(T-MaStAA @ Sep 15 2005, 05:25 PM)
What is gained from any song or poem?
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An abstract, ambiguous, concrete thought, idea, feeling; a peer, gaze, glimpse into the window of one's mind, soul, heart.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-09-15 at 22:07:05
And why can't you do that with a haiku? Some haikus are outstanding 0.0
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-15 at 23:07:10
yeah really. just not mine
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2005-09-15 at 23:09:25
Mine either way sucks
I still make them more and more
Why do i do this?
I still make them more and more
Why do i do this?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PCFredZ on 2005-09-16 at 15:28:28
QUOTE(Kame da Sniper @ Sep 15 2005, 10:07 PM)
And why can't you do that with a haiku? Some haikus are outstanding 0.0
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Amateurs ruin everything, that applies to other things too.
Haikus are like limericks, the latter which is more flexible syllable-wise.
Poems in general are one of those things that one'd either get or not, but that does not mean one shouldn't try them.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2005-09-16 at 23:02:10
QUOTE(PCFredZ @ Sep 15 2005, 03:41 PM)
An abstract, ambiguous, concrete thought, idea, feeling; a peer, gaze, glimpse into the window of one's mind, soul, heart.
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Ugh... Theres no need to try and sound poetic when answering that. I guess if you get off to other people's (often fake) personal feelings, then haikus/poems are for you.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Hitl1r1 on 2005-09-17 at 14:46:44
Starcraft enjoys me
I play it more and more but,
It can be boring
I play it more and more but,
It can be boring