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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Felagund on 2005-09-15 at 13:52:58
Well, that girl I had my eye on seems to hate me now, and I have no wish to explain the complicated failure that is my own. Anyway, I wrote this for her a while ago upon request, to put into words the situation of how she goes to college 3 hours away. Hopefully that helps this make sense.

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    What cruelty was poured against the passion he called his own, the indefiable force of time against the imperishable light of his life. Love was the fuel of his strength, and patience his last grasp of sanity. Each mile cried out to be pushed aside, but they could not be forgotten. Each caring word burnt like cold steel and healed like salve.
    Each image lay scorched in his mind, a picture never to be lost to time.
    As the end of his known life gave birth to the next, he realized with a faint hope that time was not to be his end. It was undefiable, but it governed with only the rules he allowed it. He was a simple author, a weaver of fanciful tales. In what had become the beginning, he realized that his life was but another tale to weave, but his tale was not one he wished to weave alone, for it would be woven better with another.


Do I still care about her? Yes, but I think I have to move on.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-09-15 at 13:59:04
Nice one. I guess i like it.

(woot first post)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Slyence on 2005-09-15 at 14:06:28
Yeah, I like it alot good job smile.gif

And T, we are not retarted... We know who has the first post.
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