Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-09-21 at 19:44:27
[sub]Well heres my third. Ive been working on it for the alst hour and it still has alot of work to be done. I really like how it looks though.
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by pekkel_the_duck on 2005-09-21 at 19:53:00
I'd say that there isn't enough open space for flanking and moving units and such. Also, terran can put tanks in the middle of the naturals and siege to protect both expanions. I would like to see a more definate path to the other base, but that might not be a problem. But it looks like an interesting map.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yenku on 2005-09-21 at 19:55:03
Wow, 200% improvement.
Still there are some small things that great maps cant have that is here..
Work on your mineral placement
I know everybody likes natural environments but keep the terrain close to symmetrical.
I see almost no real imbalances for any matchups, consider switching the gas from the nat to the second expo.
ADDITION:
pekkel, you beat me, lol
anywho, about the name, its up to you. evrybody has thier own style, some name them after songs, phrases, the environment, actual places, etc.
Still there are some small things that great maps cant have that is here..
Work on your mineral placement
I know everybody likes natural environments but keep the terrain close to symmetrical.
I see almost no real imbalances for any matchups, consider switching the gas from the nat to the second expo.
ADDITION:
pekkel, you beat me, lol
anywho, about the name, its up to you. evrybody has thier own style, some name them after songs, phrases, the environment, actual places, etc.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-09-21 at 19:58:34
[sub]So, would you say im getting better? As for the name, making creative names is what drives me away from UMS. I was thinking 2 Kingdoms or Eastside Westside. Ill make some more open space and update the picture asap. Anything else you suggest?[/sub]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yenku on 2005-09-21 at 20:04:21
I dont know if you do, but dont protect melee maps.
If that is your style, try it, its not very oringinal but whatever.
Speaking of map names, if anyone knows trcc, he has the craziest names for his maps yet i like them.
If that is your style, try it, its not very oringinal but whatever.
Speaking of map names, if anyone knows trcc, he has the craziest names for his maps yet i like them.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-09-21 at 20:06:06
[sub]I dont protect any of my maps. As long as I know I made it, its fine with me.
What are you talking about? Also, updated the map.[/sub]
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If that is your style, try it, its not very oringinal but whatever.
What are you talking about? Also, updated the map.[/sub]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yenku on 2005-09-21 at 20:08:24
Oh my bad, I was referring to your map name.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-09-21 at 20:10:45
[sub]I have decided to name it. "Twilight Crab"[/sub]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yenku on 2005-09-21 at 20:12:37
Your mineral placement is still odd, look at a pro map for correct placement then when you become more experienced make your own, also, the right mains minerals seem farther away from the edge than the left mains.
Make sure tanks cant seige either natural.
Make sure tanks cant seige either natural.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Valug on 2005-09-21 at 21:42:26
[sub]It looks that way, but I checked it and its not. Weird.
Ill cahnge the minerals later, im tired now.[/sub]
Ill cahnge the minerals later, im tired now.[/sub]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Volcove99 on 2005-09-22 at 19:49:16
You must call it:
KEY OF THE TWILIGHT
pwnage name, plus the center reminds me of a key... in the twilight! Plus it sounds origional
KEY OF THE TWILIGHT
pwnage name, plus the center reminds me of a key... in the twilight! Plus it sounds origional
Report, edit, etc...Posted by eom[Dark_Lord] on 2005-09-22 at 20:01:51
Now you muct call it
LAND OF TWILIGHT
LAND OF TWILIGHT
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yenku on 2005-09-22 at 20:04:38
ugh those names are lame.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Volcove99 on 2005-09-23 at 15:38:43
No they're not. Land of the twilight is a bit generic but not bad.
Sides, he already decided on twilight crab. BAAD idea... although I think I mentioned it at one point.
Sides, he already decided on twilight crab. BAAD idea... although I think I mentioned it at one point.