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Hello to the person reading this post. This game is called Story Telling. This is what you do you make a story and interesting as you can possibly and people wlil respond saying, "good job", "love it", "your the best" etc.

Anyways I thought this could be fun BUT REMEMBER It has to be a random story out of your head it cant be a planned story. Hope it will live forever on sen
but dont be mean if u dont like it just dont respond



Ill go first.


Once upon a time there were 3 people. Jack, Bob, Sarah. It was 2124 A.D. and Sarah was getting maried in a church. Jack was 30, Bob was Jack's little brother he was 17 and Sarah was 31. It was saturday, when the car finally came. She came out stroding in her way inside. When she opened the door. To her horror. Noone was there but 1 man lay sitting in the chair. The man looked old, around 50's and was creepy. He slowly twisted his head to look at Sarah. When he turned his head was decapitated. He looked as if he was a dead ghost. Then a white lightning struck the church and Sarah's vision went Blank.



2 Days Later



Jack just arived from school, he was buff, happy, and funny. He loved life but hated school a lot. He opened the door to meet his brother, Bob. Bob was cool, nice and tall. He had the same resemblence as his brother.

Jack said, "hi". Then bob said in a friendly manner "Dude do you know what happened to Sarah." Jack replied "What the hell are you talking about... I saw her like 2 days ago?" Jack said, "I was walking and I saw this poster. It said she was missing..." Bob said, "DUDE ARE U SERIOUS, LAST TIME I TALKED TO HER SHE SAID WAS GOING TO THIS CHURCH TO MARRY JAMES?" bob said "...."


Later that night Jack urged bob to come with him to find sarah. But they couldn't because they were grounded. Later that night the 2 brothers were dreaming. It was picture by picture shooting out fast with a white light at the background. First picture was, A church, A man, A castle, A portal, then Sarah. Then the backgruond turned red and he saw his brother... Bob. But it wasnt a friendly picture of his brother it was a twisted picture, Eyes green skin black and it froze to that picture until later he woke up. It was 1:00 AM. He got out of the bed, purvusively sweating. Then he heard a voice... Sarah's. She was saying 4 words. Help, me now "1689" Then a white lignting struck jack's house and then he saw a blue portal in his room. He walked closer and closer and closer to it. Then he decided to touch it.

To be Continued...
HOPE U Enjoy!!!!

Jack Sucks. Good story anyway.








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Have you ever killed a man with your bare hands!?!

I have... Back in Nami, a grenade went off and killed Norman, i started firing my M4 like mad, everywhere, there was some friendly fire, but i got the little *! Then all of the sudden someone sniped out my leg(i was moving)! I turned around and fired at him. Nothing happened. It ended up that i was out of bullets! I took out my pistol and fired at the little *! I wasted all 8 bullets. I then took out my battle knife and charge up the hill he was on, dodging every shot. When i got near him i stabbed his left arm, he screamed. Loudly. "*************!!!!!!!!!" Then he whiped me with his rifle, i dropped the knife down the hill, but i stole the rifle and bashed his head with it. I then pionted it at his head, but he pulled a kung-fo, and kicked it and it went flying. I then jumped on him and started beating him to death. My allies were obviously accompanied by enemy fire at the nearby river, so it was me and him. I then took his head and bashed it against the ground 7 times, until he grabbed my throat. I grabbed his throat too. Then, i got up with him on me, and jumped off the hill. We rolled around beating each other until we fell in the river and we serperated. He then took a huge stone and launched it at me. I luckily dodged it and sacked him. I punched his face at least 23 times until i got up and started kicking him. Then, i was shot from behind, right in my hip. Luckily it hadnt gotten too deep. I quickly took the probably dead body and used him as a human sheild against the charging enemy with an AK. He ended up firing masses of bullets in the human sheild. U then took the human sheild and threw it at the nearby enemy. He fell. I then jumped on him and choked him to death. Then i went in search for my squad. After about 30 minutes of searching, i found Joey, and he was lost, and slightly wounded. We finally found half of our squad in a huge firefight, we assisted them. In the end, it seemed there were 5 men including me and Joey left in our squad. We then called for a chopper, and left.

But then out of nowhere, while over a huge lake, an Anti-air gun hit the copter and we fell down-fast. I had to get out fast, so i jumped out. I survived with a broken leg, and a fractured arm. Suddenly, Joey, my best friend, no–brother, came out of the water. But there was something wrong. The chopper, it was.. gonna blow. I tried to get Joey loose, but he was stuck to a blade in the chopper (the downed chopper was in a fairly shalllow place) But the chopper started making noises, and i had to leave. Then... i watched my comrade... burn up... into ashes... Then... After a month of being standed in Vietnam, i was rescued by a chopper.

To this day i want to beat that son of a * to death...

So i ask you once again,
Have YOU ever killed a man with your bare hands!?!



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I made a topic with this in it awhile ago, but yoshi deleted it due to having NO sense of humor.

ok here's mine...

Once upon a time...The end.

Good story, Warhammer, but I thought your leg was sniped off? And the Anti-flood thing on the shoutbox is weird. I shouted 3 times about an hour ago, and it won't let me shout again, because no one else has shouted since. Hmmm...

Don't spam.

As he touched the portal he felt as it he was weightless. Then he looked down to reveal he wasnt in his home he was outside a castle floating. Then he droped to the floor. Jack standed up after the impact and looked infront of him.


Infront of him was a castle. As he walked to the castle, pebble by pebble. Something wuold happend. As he reached the last pebble to the castle. It started thundering and raining. He knocked on the door and waited for someone to open it.


1 minute later

Noone came so he knocked again except this time the door opened. He fully opened the door and stepped inside. When he looked up he was in shock and horror to what he saw. He saw... Sarah. He ran and ran (slow motion) but as the closer he came to her, he realized it wasnt sarah. And when he finally reached the person it was a little girl. He asked her, "Excusme do you know where I am and what is going on?"

She didnt reply but looked at him intensively.

He got scared after a while and he ran out the door. Then as he looked behind him the door closed without anyone touching it...

When he came back he saw something he didnt notice before. A green portal, he touched it hoping something would happend. But it just shocked him with little electricity and pain. He wondered what the hell happened and where he was. He decided to go out 1 mile to look around.

When he walked 1 mile he came to a city. The city looked old he saw a sign and on the sign it said 1689. Either he was crazy or this was a joke. Then he saw a temple. He walked calmly in the temple. The temple looked forbidden and abandoned. Above the temple was a stoned shaped monkey. When Jack finally walked inside the temple the Monkey's eyes turned green. and the Templed started shaking. He was about to run outside when he saw a guy. He taped the guy on the back and he turned around. It turned out that the guy was Bob. Then jack said, "BOb dude what the hell is happening thank gosh ur hear."

then bob said, "Who are you" then 5 seconds later they were silent and bob changed skin, it became black and his eyes turned a dark evilish green. Out of panick Jack started walking backwords then he hit something. He turned around and he hit a artifact. The artifact was shatered and he saw a scrool inside it. He decided to grab the scroll. Then he remembed the temple was shaking so he ran outside. When he went up the hill he looked down and the temple collasped.

He came back to the green portal and decided to touch it again. Then he felt weightless like when he touched the blue portal. He started floating up he looked at his scrool and the scrool was glowing red. It started burning so he droped it. The scrool sucked in the green portal and then lightning hit the portal and he teleported into a dark hole in space. He moved at rapid speed in space to a white hole. He came closer and closer and closer and then he went inside the white hole

To be Continued...


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How soon is it coming, Toa5555
Im not a great storyteller myself, sadly

lolz nice story toa 555

gj nice story but can u post in here

Story I wrote fro school last year in a 5 hour type-athon. It took that long because I didn't ever do a rough draft to work off of. Enjoy!
DARK TROPICS


Chapter One: Arrival

Eww, I thought, airline food. I looked out the window, searching for some thing easier on the eyes than that sloppy mass of... something. But sadly, I was blasted with blinding whiteness. We were still in the cloud layer. I snapped the shutter down and looked for a decent magazine. Even though I was hungry, I didn't dare have even a bite of the meaty paste in front of me. I imagined it glowing green and crawling away, making slurping noises as it went. "Issac, you need to eat," said my mom. She was wearing a Hawaiian flower shirt, rolled up jeans, sunglasses, and a disposable camera on a string around her neck. A typical tourist. "But mom," I complained, "I don't even know if it's meat, vegetable or genetically engineered tofu!"
"EAT!" she whispered as loud and strict as she possibly could. I groaned and picked up my spork. Just as the disgusting goop had almost reached my mouth, a flight attendant came by with a trash can and took my tray. "This is your captain speaking, I have turned on the fasten seat belts light for landing in the beautiful Bermuda islands," blared the intercom. "Oh no! it seems that due to a slight miscalculation, we're in the middle of the Bermuda triangle!" said the captain. "Don't panic, I was just joking."
Okay, I thought, bad joke. I opened the window shutter to see turquoise, almost artificial looking water, sandy beaches dotted with pink, and pastel colored green, pink, and yellow houses. It was so colorful, from the sandy beige of the coast, to the deep forest green of the inland hills, to the light colored houses. Getting closer... closer... touchdown! I thought as the small plane shook with recoil. A horrible pain shot through my ears. We slowed to a halt, and the pain in my ears stopped. "It's currently 3:07 local time, have a nice trip!" said the intercom cheerfully. I felt my stomach growl as I stepped off the plane.
Chapter Two: Taking the dive

I nearly choked on my first breath of Bermuda air. It was so humid; I was surprised to find out the people who live here don't have water filling their lungs. As I walked down the portable staircase that was pulled up to the plane, I flipped open my GPC (General Purpose Console) and checked the Bermudian weather frequencies. The same forecast was displayed for every day of the week: Lows in the high 70's, highs in the mid 90's, and sunny with a chance of a very short downpour. Oh, well that's very specific, I thought sarcastically. I tuned out the noise of the airport and played a few games of Pong. By the time I was done, I was outside with my bags. While my mom tried to figure out how to hail a cab, I checked the map. Bermuda was shaped like a hook, with a few small rocks around it. I switched off my GPC, and then I realized how heavy my bag was. I open it up, and out toppled a soaked Charles Munkson. But he goes by Chip. "Fancy meeting you here..." he said nervously, giving an innocent smile.
"Am I in trouble?"
"Chip," I said, "I know that were best friends and all, but do you have to go everywhere that I do? And how did you get an excuse for being gone for two weeks?"
"I said that I was going on an all expenses paid trip to summer camp."
His parents are just as smart as he is, I thought, and that's not good. “Sorry about your stuff...” he said, “I brought a water bottle and it blew up.”
“Great,” complained my mom, “another 13-year-old boy to feed and take care of.”
Now she looked and me and hissed, “You’re lucky that your father is on a business trip.”
I winced and my orangish yellow hair started to droop. My gel was leaking down my forehead from all the humidity.
“Issac! Your hair is crying white tears! Did you hurt it? Or get it cut lately?”
“It’s not crying, you moron My gel is leaking from the humidity.”
“Oh.”
“Yeah… Chip, you might want to take a break from thinking, we wouldn’t want you to strain your brain while you’re on vacation.”
“Shut up, Issac.”
***
The next day, we headed off to the beach on mopeds. We didn’t go very fast, but whenever the wind blew in my face while we were riding, my eyes watered. We finally arrived at the beach; the speed limits are so low here you could probably get across the island faster just by running. The sand was heavily dotted with pink, and the sky was blue, with barely any clouds. It was a peaceful scene... until I returned to reality and realized how loud and crowded the beach was. Chip and I raced to the water and dove in as soon as it was deep enough. I spotted something pulsing bright blue light on the bottom. I signaled Chip to come look at it as I dove deeper into the water. We both touched the light at the same time, and then something strange happened. It felt like I was being pushed from behind and pulled from the front. But at the same time, it felt like I was being torn apart then put back together again somewhere else. But then, I felt blood rushing to my head and then I finally blacked out.

When I woke up, Chip was still lying on the ground; he was out cold. I stood up and looked around. We were in a jungle, and it appeared to be lifeless. There was a great stone temple near us, completely overgrown with vines and shrubs. I checked my pocket and amazingly enough, my GPC was inside. I just noticed that we were in different clothes, too. I was wearing thick leather boots and gloves, blue cloth pants under a blue tunic (a tunic is like a kilt, but not plaid and not as tacky), a yellow half-cape pinned to my left shoulder and metal shoulder guard strapped to my right. I noticed all the large extra pouches on my belt, and an empty sheath hanging off my left hip. I checked the GPC map. But instead of showing the normal Bermuda hook, there was a bumpy oval in its place. “Vesperia...” I whispered to my self, reading the map. “Where are we...?”

Chapter Three: Sacredly evil

I dragged Chip into some ferns, and hid him with some big leaves. I switched on his GPC’s vibrate function and left the message: ‘Meet Issac in temple. URGENT!’ I ventured out of the bushes and walked bravely up the temple steps. I heard a beetle smash under my foot… or so I thought. My GPC started rumbling insanely and beeping. I opened it up and the screen said: ‘Fighter beetle challenges. You hold first strike.’ I wondered what it meant by ‘You hold first strike.’, as the beetle buzzed into the air. I put my fists up, ready to block whatever came at me. But no attack came. I checked my GPC again. Instead of what it said before, there was a green bar at the top of the screen that was labeled: 100/100, and three squares, the first one labeled fight, the second labeled run, and the third labeled stats. Oh, I thought, I get it now. This is just like a video… game… Uh-oh. If its anything like the ones at home, if I die it’s game over…oh no… I began to panic. And if it’s a lot like the ones at home, it could overheat and leave me in suspended animation… forever.

I gulped and pressed the box labeled ‘Fight’. Another screen appeared and gave me more options. Now, there were four squares, each one, again having a label, but this time there was a picture to go with. The first box was captioned ‘Fast attack’, and the illustration was a small man running with a sword. The second box was captioned ‘Strong attack’. The illustration was a more buff man swinging a sword with all his might. The third box was called ‘Magic’, and there was a picture of a small man holding up his arms, and a red fireball forming between his hands. The last was labeled ‘Defensive maneuvers’. It’s picture was of a small man with a shield up and a sword ready in his back hand. I selected fast attack and pressed on the word jab under a picture of a fist. After I pressed the jab button, words appeared on the screen. They said ‘Remember, you can use the headset function instead of pressing everything to make the battle smoother. Or you can just switch to free mode where there’s no turns or battle damage meters, so it’s a plain fight.’ Well, there’s an idea, I thought. I switched to free battle and the battlefield got bigger, warping the surroundings. The beetle launched itself at me, no longer held back by old turn based battle programming. I nimbly dodged the slow flying insect and grabbed it in my hand. I opened my hand and looked at the beetle. It was still alive. Or it looked like it was still alive. It dissolved into to small pieces and flew up into the sky, like water evaporating put into fast forward. The staircase shrunk back to normal, the stair I was on was no longer a giant platform. Then some words appeared in front of me in midair, and there was a small red gem under the words. I plucked the gem out of the air and looked at it for a moment, before reading the words. ‘15 experience gained ’ they said. Now a small blank bar popped up where the gem had once been. The gem dissolved, like the beetle, but instead the small blank bar absorbed the small, red shards and filled half way up. The words and bar disappeared, and I continued into the dark, dank, temple. It was pitch black and cold inside the overgrown monastery. I switched on my GPC’s flashlight and waved it around. There was something shining in the middle of the room. I shined my flashlight on it and… I don’t believe it, I thought, I can’t believe it. Because in the middle of the room there was a sword and an axe stuck in pedestals with their handles up. “Hey, Issac,” said a voice. I whirled around, ready to fight. “Relax, dude. It’s just me, Chip.” I put my fists down and shined the flashlight on him. He was wearing an orange version of my outfit, only no shoulder guard, no cape, and there was a belt with leather straps on his back and around his torso.
“Hey Chip,” I said, “Check this out. It’s really weird.” I swung the flashlight beam from him to the sword and axe.
“Cool ” he yelled. “I call sword ”
“Shut up and no, I get sword because I found it.”
“No ”
“Fine, you can don’t not don’t not not don’t not have the sword.”
“Uh… okay.”
“Okay, thanks for the sword, Chip!”
“Oh, no proble- Hey!”
“Gotcha!” I said, laughing. I love doing that, I thought cheerfully. Chip and I walked slowly up to the pedestals, and we put our hands on the handles of our weapon.
“Okay,” I said shakily, “on the count of three. One… two… two and a half… three!”
We both yanked our weapons out of the stone at the same time. We fell over backward. Suddenly, dark beams blasted out of our weapons and met above the pedestals, creating a dark warp rift. A foul creature’s head appeared from within the warp rift and said, “Fools! I knew someone would release me from that prison someday, and I’ve been waiting for that day for centuries. So greatly stupid adventurers…” it cackled. “thank you.” It retreated into the darkness. What have I done?
Chapter four: The first step

We rushed outside to see what was happening. We looked up to see dark skies, thunder clouds, and groups of giant, menacing winged creatures patrolling the clouds, and occasionally, blasting the ground with some kind of unknown energy.
“This looks bad,” said Chip, wielding his axe. “Very bad.”
“Yeah, and it’s all because we had to have these weapons, these weapons that are cursed by that thing they were holding back. And now that thing has broken loose.” Now I pulled out my sword and said, “Let’s go.”
I leapt off the stairs and tore off, racing down the jungle path and slicing down all the vines and bushes that got in my way. I started to slow down. Getting tired, I slowed to a walk. But I had slowed down all too soon. A small red imp ambushed me and sank it’s teeth into my leg. Luckily for me, it was not very powerful and it’s fangs were tiny. I took five damage as the battle started. I used a basic horizontal quick slash, and Chip leapt into the air and swung his axe down with all his might. My attack hit dead on, dealing a total of seven damage. Unfortunately, the little monster was ready for Chip’s attack, so his axe only grazed his arm, dealing three damage. Two thirds of it’s life meter were reddened from our attacks. Now, it launched itself at Chip. The imp’s tiny horns were flying at Chip. He countered the flying creatures attack by catching it with the broad side of his axe, and smashing the tiny creature to the ground. The imp dissolved as soon as it hit the dirt. Our experience meters filled up twice with the defeating of the imp. At level three I gained the ability to illuminate the area or temporarily blind an enemy, the ability to create walls of stone, and I could summon animated stone figures to do my biding. Chip could now shoot small flares from his axe and create walls of fire. He could also summon flare bees, also known as living fireballs to light up the battle. I could also use the attack ‘Lightning slash’ to hit enemies so fast that they can’t dodge, along with giving them a little surge of electricity. Chip could now use his ‘Flaming Axe’ attack to light enemies like candles, along with a new attack that uses the broad side of his axe like a war hammer to smash things. “Is it just me, or is it getting warmer?” said Chip, starting to sweat. “It’s not just you, it is getting warmer.” I said. Wait a minute, I thought, it’s just like I thought!
“"Listen to me, Chip” I said seriously, “remember how the game froze up when we were fighting the last boss back at home?”
“Yeah, why?”
“Well, that’s because the game overheats. And if we don’t get outta here, and fast, we could be frozen just like in the game. The hotter it gets, the less time we have to escape.” “Oh no, I don’t wanna be a warm popsicle forever! We gotta get outta here!”
So, with being sizzling, but never melting ice cubes on our minds, we set off in search of a better, actually-in-our-dimension-and-still-alive tomorrow.

Chapter five: The Coliseum

We walked along the path, feeling extremely bored as we hiked along the path. Getting slowly warmer and warmer, we longed for a stream to take a dunk in and get a drink from. And a little bit further along the trail, we found a clearing, with fresh what looked like apple trees, and...
“YEAH! A STREAM!” yelled Chip, drowning his red (not ‘red hair’ red, but the red you see in the rainbow but a little darker) hair in the pool.
“ MY stream!” said a deep, stupid sounding voice. A huge troll appeared holding a very long- it looked about nine feet- two ended harpoon, with a slightly large fish on the end.
“I is the river troll of this clearing and I want you three out!”
“There’s only two of us.”
“Well, I is not grood with ariteetics.”
“You mean good and arithmetic?”
“ROAR! Smarty pants short people bother and confuzle river troll!” The huge ogre launched it self at us. I barely summoned a stone platform in time to hit the river troll in mid flight. It lay on the ground, dazed and confused. The river troll took ten damage from my counter-attack. I took the opportunity to attack while the troll was recovering. I used the new ‘Lightning slash’ attack, and since it was a river troll, it took extra damage from the electrical shock. And since I attacked so fast, I still had time for another fast strike. I kicked off the stone wall I had made and swung down with my sword. The troll came out of it’s daze and thrust it’s harpoon up to block. Then it used my own momentum against me and used it’s harpoon to catapult me into the trunk of a nearby tree. I lay at the base of the tree, my back hurting. The words appeared in front of me, ‘20 damage taken you, have 175 of 300 life left. You are paralyzed for the turn.’
“Now it’s time for me to do some damage!” yelled Chip, charging at the river troll. He jumped and sliced down. The monster tried to block with his harpoon, but the harpoon was sliced perfectly in two. Chip swung his axe again and hit it’s leg. The creature took 15 damage. I stood back up and watched as the troll attacked. It only had 19 of 52 life left, if they both did light damage attacks, the troll would be down. It thrust it’s two harpoon points at Chip. Chip grabbed the wood part just below the metal tips, mimicking the troll and using it’s own momentum against it and hurling the troll into some nearby trees. The small trees fell with a crash, and the troll disintegrated when it hit the ground. Luckily, it’s harpoon halves and fish were left over. We each took half a harpoon, and Chip summoned a flare bee to cook the fish on. We each ate half the fish, and an apple, so our life was restored to full.
“That was cool, what you did back there,” I remarked, “how’d you do it?”
“Didn’t I tell you? When I leveled up, I discovered that I can throw things almost twice my size! How’s that for a good power- up?” I got some water in each of the pouches on my belt, in case we needed it for later. As soon as we had our harpoons securely attached to our belts, we stood up and started walking again. Suddenly, there was a blue flash of light and the next thing we know, we’re inside a huge stadium.
“Welcome,” said a evil and familiar voice, “To the Doom Coliseum.”

Chapter Six: Entry and Doom

I recognized the voice as the demon’s that we freed by pulling out the weapons. “I’m giving you two the chance of a lifetime.” It said. “If you can defeat my head guard in combat, I will give you the chance to fight me.”
“No problem,” I retorted, “we can defeat your guard no matter what rank he is!”
“Well, then do it now!!”
The guard appeared on a horse with a lance and a sword at the other end of the stadium. The horse charged and the guard put out his lance. I easily tripped the horse with some stones coming out of the ground. The rider went flying, and Chip caught him. Chip spun around and sent the guard sailing into the stands. There was a dusty explosion and the guard dissolved, bringing both me and Chip up to level five.
“Fine,” said the demon, obviously angered. “You win... for now.”
We were suddenly taken to a new place, the top floor of a dark tower lit by torches. I finally got a good look at the demon we had released. It was big, and had what looked like greenish gray armor plates on gray-blue skin. It’s eyes were sunset orange around the edges, and yellow-white in the center. It had radiant gems that like its eyes on it’s forehead, wrists, and ankles, and it had a broad, spiny tail. Not exactly what I’d call a glamorous villain, I thought. “Prepare to feel the pain I have for years!” screeched the demon. It blasted a dark beam at me. I tried to block with a triple thick stone wall, but the blast was too powerful. I was knocked backward, and I lost 175 life. Yes, I said 175. The demon was level 30, way too powerful for me. I had 325 life of 500 already. Two more hits like that and I’d be down. I jumped up and used my lightning slash ability, but he blocked with one of his wrist jewels. I was suspended in the air for a moment, as sparks flew out of the sword. I was blasted back again, this time taking 25 damage. Chip charged, letting out a battle cry as he went. He leapt into the air and tried to use his flaming axe ability, but the demon only had to raise his hand to stop him. Chip’s axe clattered to the ground as vines sprung up from the floor and constricted his entire body. The demon caught me in a bubble of dark energy and slammed me against the wall.
“Ha,” he said, “You are tiny. You are nothing!”
“It’s not the size of the dog in the fight,” I rasped. I stood up and charged.
“It’s the size of the fight in the dog!”
Then something happened. I leapt into the air and swung down with all the will and force left in my body. My sword shined brightly as I hit the jewel on it’s arm. The gem shattered from the force of my sword. The demon screeched in agony as the stone shattered. I used my ability to flash light to blind the demon. Then, I finally summoned three powered-up rock people to destroy the other wrist jewel and the ankle jewels. I let out a loud battle cry and plunged my sword into the forehead gem. The demon screamed and dissolved slowly. In it’s last moments undissolved, it swore vengeance on me and Chip, then it dissolved completely. It was getting unbearably hot, and I could see the landscape of Vesperia slowly stopping completely. I sliced the vines holding Chip and my sword created a warp rift. I poured the water I had saved on my head, picked up Chip, and ran through the rift, as the island of Vesperia stopped completely behind me.

The all important epilogue

So, it turns out that whenever I dissolved something in Vesperia, it just would pop up somewhere else to bother someone else. Except for that Demon. He was returned to that jail he was talking about. And the really cool part is, that to ensure that he would never come out again, I got to keep the sword and pedestal. And even if I do pull the sword out, only half of him could come, and luckily the laws of physics don’t allow that. So I’m guessing that your thinking that we’ll all go straight home and donate the sword to charity. Well, if you think that then.... YOUR TOTALLY WRONG! Actually, I got a concealed weapons permit, and I carry the sword around whenever possible. And, I just relaxed the rest of my vacation, and then packed Chip back into my back as we got on the plane leaving the dark tropics.

god damn man why don't you write a book lol

lol so you guys want to hear pt .3 of my STORY

Guys hear is pt 3 (EDIT)


As he rapidly sped into a white hole he saw a burning fire. He was in the future. Yet did he know. He looked around. The world blankly sipped into debvious fires and chaos. Demons were roaming the earth and the Earth looked as if it was in The apocalypse. All the sudden he looked behind him to see the White hole had gone and left him here to ponder.

He looked down on the floor and the scroll was near his feet. He grabbed it and putted it in his pouch, Then started walking. He walked and walked and walked with no sign of inhabitant life he began to doubt that someone was here. About 2 minutes Later, He saw a woman turned back against her face. He approached her and tapped her on the back. She turned around and it was Sarah.

Jack Said, "Sarah holy crap its you"
Then Sarah said, "Is that you Jack????"
"Yes... obviously " said Jack
Sarah then said " You were missing for 20 years what the hell happened???"
"Well you we..."
"Forget about it tell me later we have no time HURRY!" Said Sarah

Then they walked. Right as they were walking Jack heard a moan and turned around. Then Sarah turned around out of curiosity of what Jack was looking at. Behind them was a creature, monster, beast. It was big red and a Gigantic worm type creature. It Started charging really fast at them.


They ran. Finally they outran the creature hiding behind a trashcan. As they were behind a trashcan Jack saw a poster. It had bob's face but with the Twisted Picture he forecasted earlier. Under it in red bold words it said, "Welcome to 3031, and welcome to my world"

The poster ended there. Jack decided to talk to Sarah about what in the world he just saw. When all the Sudden it started raining. Sarah said, "dam rain..."


Jack asked what and then Sarah replied anxiously "The Creature can see Human tempature in the rain. Ever since Bob programmed them. Dammit dam Mother Fuc....
Bob said, "Ok Ok ill stop you there" Then they laughed and fell silent.

They ran away from the city in the rain and as they rain hit them. Jack said 4 words. Sarah I love you.


Sarah Said, "Please talk about this later I mean..." she stopped and looked at him.
They both stopped at the rain then Sarah said, "I love you to, I mean after the romantic things you did, the help, the friendship I grew to love you... But I cant not now" Then Jack said, "Come On"

And when they were about to kiss and hug they heard a rippling noise. They looked down they Freeway. And saw the creature and it was coming Toward them. dam was Jacks thought as they ran.

Then all the sudden. Sarah said, "Take this" and give him a necklace with a green incrusted jewel smothered with a symbol" Please take it


Then she said, "Bye" and all the sudden she ran to the creature to stall time.
Jack protested cursed in his mind but was nothing he could do. The only way to help the world, Help Sarah, Help bob, Change the past was to Face his destiny. It was the only way to regain the worlds strength and to recover... He had to face his destiny.....

To Be Continued (Only 3 More stories Hopefully )

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Error 404 and a half
By: Toa5555

Well, I was always into computers, but I hated that Error 404, I never knew exactly why it was so important, so I went to check it out. I had looked through source code and it all, but I still couldn’t find it out, until I found a particular link on a Error 404 page. I went to the page and it said Error 404 And a half Then my computer went off and my monitor did to. I was scared. So I just went to bed until tomorrow…. The next day I woke up and I saw that my computer was ruined! So was my monitor! I had no recollection of that happening, I was even more scared. So after that I walked outside and drove to the cyber café for a little. Later that day I came back to my house and my computer and monitor, was all fixed? How could this be? I had to find out, so I turned on my computer and…

(To be continued in same post)

AHH!! i need to know

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And so the Story Continues... From just a small little inhabitied friendly town. To the future and a fate.


PT. 4
Tittle : The Destiny Adventure


Sarah ran to the monster. Jack was mortified. Stunned Speechless, hopeless. The monster intacted with Sarah, but before Jack saw what happened to her, he crossed the street and was blocked by a building. He snapped out of it.


The rain was getting harder and harder. Every minute, every second. A lighting would now and then strike. The Monster then came in view behind Jack and started charging at him. Jack ran the fastest he could, but inevidiably he knew he was going to die. The mosnter was about to attack Jack with its claws. When... he Saw a portal.

He ran to the portal and took out his scroll just incase it was needed. As he touched it. The portal swirled. From One side to the other, the setting changed into the regular world. He didnt know what year it was, so he looked around. Finally he gave up and he decieded to ask someone.


"Excuse me, Do you know what time it is?" said Jack
Then the guy replied, "Why, yes certianlly it is 2124 A.D."

Jack thanked him for the help and ran to his home to see if everything was normal.
When he went in his home. He opened the door. And he saw a girl. Like the girl he saw in 1689 (pt 2.). The door closed behind him and the girl turned around and looked at jack. Jack was about to run outside when, he felt a pain. He couldn't move. he felt paralyzed.

The girl came closer and closer to him and was about to kill him. When Out of the blue his brother bob appeared. Bob tackled down Jack just in time. They both recovered and focused to what just happened. Bob said," NO TIME GO!"

and Bob gave him a time travel watch (remember this took place in 2124 A.D.) Jack had no time to talk when bob pushed the time travel button and he felt wizzy. Jack saw the girl come in the room and touched Bob. Bob tried to fight but was to late. Bob slowly transfered his Eyes became green and his skin turned into black.

Then the time travel watch acted and it teleported Jack to a street. He reconized the street was the street were he found sarah and ran from the monster. Then he saw himself kissing Sarah on the other side of the road. It was raining like before then all the sudden. Jack saw a monster down the road. He figured out almost instantly that the time travel watch. Traveled him to the time where Sarah was going to die. The Monster was charging to Sarah and what looked like to be himself. Sarah ran to the monster and the person that looked like him ran down the street.

Jack reacted almost instantly looking at his surroundings. Time was running out. He saw a big rock on the ground and picked it up. He threw it at the monster and it started chasing Jack. Sarah puzzled and confused chased the monster.

Jack was cornered behind the dumpster and the monster was creeping on him when all the sudden lightning stroke the monster and it evaported to thin black spots. Jack was supprised. He knew it was nearly impossible for that to happened to him. But he rejoinced and jumped in glee. Then Sarah came and saw Jack. Sarah incredibly puzzled (again) said werent you running away..

Jack said, "Im from the future but I have no idea wha.."

He stopped and he teleported to 1689. He realized where he was the castle... (pt 2 of story) He ran to the castle and went inside... He tried to find the girl and try to kill her, so it would change what had happened to his brother... He looked around the castle.


But the castle was incredibly huge, I mean ennourmsly huge. He walked down the halllway. When a row of torch fires lit instantly. Like wood and chalk. He walked down the hallway and saw 2 big doors. He opened it and a white light blinded his eyes. He closed the doors immidiatly after that. And turned back when he saw the girl ahead of him in the path. The fire torches then greatly lid to a big fire. He was stuck in the hallway with this girl. They glared and exchanged stares. Then she came close to Jack with evil eyes. Jack knew he was going to die. But what could he do... He was trapped with a crazy ass girl and there was no way to escape....


To be Continued !! (omfg)

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Here is a sample of my insanity (as in mentally ill for those who aren't sure). Seriously, this story actually was based on a dream. I will only post the introduction because it would take about 16 posts to put the whole thing in. And I'm pretty sure after this one, you would have enough and never want to see my writing again.

0 NB

I wake up, cold, head aching in the manila room of a hospital. I wipe my eyes to get a better view of the dimmed room. There are other people asleep, probably in a coma. What happened? I sit upright on my bed and look at the nearby window, it is covered by gray drapes. I go to take a step off my bed, but collapse. It is clear that my muscles have not been at use for a long time. Just a mistake, I continue and stretch my arm towards the drapes to see where I am. Just two inches closer and I'll be able to see. Suddenly, the door opens and I look back. A nurse stands at the doorway, but quickly rushes over to assist me back onto the bed. Maybe I'll have another chance to see what lies beyond the drapes.
"I'll be back in a minute," says the nurse as she rushes out of the room.
I sigh and wait. The nurse returns with a male doctor who looked to be around his fifties.
"Glad to see that another coma patient has awoken," says the doctor.
"Glad to be awake," I reply. I become thirsty and make a request for water. The nurse leaves.
"Tell me, do you recall the last thing that happened before you fell into your coma?" Inquired the doctor.
I reply with a simple no, but I realize I don't remember anything as the doctor proceeds with questions of my past. I can only remember my name.
"I know it's unlikely you'll be able to answer this, but how long do you think you have been in your previous state of being?"
"I don't know, maybe a couple years?"
He furrowed his eyebrows and was ready to reveal the answer, but to my surprise, I was in another state before my coma.
"Eight years since you found me frozen? This doesn't make sense. I don't remember."
"You don't remember anything, you suffer from amnesia."
He was right.
"Unfortunately, we were unable to determine how long you have been frozen."
"Aren't there ways to determine how long I've been frozen?"
"Yes, but the number that appeared and reappeared was obviously flawed."
I stop and concentrate.
"Sir, what year is it?"
"It's the year 2006."
He said 2006. It looked like 2006. It didn't feel like 2006. The questions eventually put me into a deep sleep.

Pretty good HolySin, kinda inconclusive though.

So tempting to take one of the 50 page partial books that some of my friends have written and paste them here

Waking up was normally a good experience for Sarah, she was generally asleep before 9:00, and awake around 5:00, giving her an hour or so where she was free to wander through the park, browse the internet or simply write. But she quickly realized that those things were impossible when she awoke in a different bed.

That isn't going anyplace I think I want it to go, I'll try again later.
I have a really good short poetic story, but everyone has been telling me that it's really good and I should try to get it published.
I'll post it after I succeed or fail, and after I send it to someone special.

It's meant to be inconclusive, after all, It's only an introduction.

Holy great job, as obvioslly your supreme grammer is helpful

( Holysin, dont forget to use big grammer when im on sc )

gj

I'll give a synopsis:

Adam wakes up to a different yet familiar place. The people say it's 2006, but it doesn't look like 2006. Maps have the same names of cities but looks nothing like Earth. Technology isn't more advanced, but more convenient. Cities and transportation are ruled by magnetics. Cities are islands of illumination. People are odd, they're secretive, they're afraid. 0 NB is the start of their era, however, it is the most avoided subject of this world. Something happened at 0 NB. Adam seeks the origin of his problems, 0 NB and can only be solved through a disturbed woman, Ren. What happened at 0 NB?

And no, the name Ren isn't coming from Ren and Stimpy. It's actually one of my friend's nicknames. That being said, Ren's full name is Lauren. And as I said before, I'll only post the introduction since I know that my writing does bore a lot of people.

Pt: 5 Saga
This is second to last saga, I've made it finalized the story will end here, hopefully not the topic but the story will end here... This is pt. 5

All the sudden the small minature pond swayed, the pond was under the glass floor, where Jack and the girl standed. The pond went up and down 1 row slice by slice. Then the last pond hit and fire bursted.

The girl looked at jack and then said, "You'll never succeed" and with the flicker of words she walked even closer to him. The girl had black hair, she looked evil, pure white she felt cold and it looked like she was wet.

Then the door right behind Jack opened as he touched it again. The bright light shuned again and then the door closed.

The girl had her stable vision again and when she looked up Jack was gone.

Whilei the light had blinded the girl Jack was swimming in the wavy pond, he was swimming in the wav pond and he looked at his surroundings, the wall that blocked the river looked like it was made from mahagony shiny and pure. Jack was gasping for the quench of the breath and saw the girl standing there. He was scared of him seeing her but he couldn't do anything.


Then the girl's eyes turned red and a ball of flame exploded behind him in the pond. Agains section by secion the fire was going up. Just 2 more tiles before the fire would touch him. Then all the sudden he saw a hole in the ground of the water. He went through the hole.

The longer and deeper he went in the hole. The bigger the hole would be. Then the wall turned to invisible wall with colors. He saw a light. He was nearing the end of the hole. Then with 1 more second of air to live he went in the light.

Just then he was on a hill. He was walking and walking and he saw a castle. He was walking so he could go inside and 2 minutes later he came out with a scrool. The scrool was red and hot with fire then he walked across the road to get to the castle to the other side. Right as he was on the road a truck almost hit him but missed a log, the long toppled overm jumping. It barely jumped over Jack but to go behind him. Jack turned around to see the log tople and right as he turned back the girl was there and shot a colorful blend of moving power it hit jack and Jack died.


Then a blurry sphere of pictures with a block middle went out and out to a distance. It was a vision. Jack awoke he was inside a secret dark room. The dark room was made of the same mahagony, it looked old. But to Jacks suprise the girl was there, Jack then tried to punch the girl. It missed the girl and he hit the wall. Then the girl went inside Jack then out the other way. Jack collasped but not without one last struggle, he took out his scrool and made it touch the girl. The girl felt it and without a seconds notice she burned. Jack then collasped.

His surroundings changed to a beat-up old mahagony room slowly transfixing feet by feet fastly to his room, then the final master piece-picture to his bed. He awoke the next day, he was so gleefully happy. He went around his house. Bob was sleeping but best of all he was there, his mom and dad was there. He was so happy but lastly he checked on Sarah. He called her, it was 5:00 PM. It rang and rang and rang and it was on the answering-machine. Then the phone picked up and Sarah was there. They talked for hours and hours. Noone remembered a single thing. He was so incredibly happy he decided to sleep, he was aching and tired and he started to dream.

He was on a hill. He was walking and walking and he saw a castle. He was walking so he could go inside and 2 minutes later he came out with a scrool. The scrool was red and hot with fire then he walked across the road to get to the castle to the other side. Right as he was on the road a truck almost hit him but missed a log, the long toppled overm jumping. It barely jumped over Jack but to go behind him. Jack turned around to see the log tople and hit a canon then water spilled and a ball topled from a frissbee and touched the ignition. He turned back the girl was there and shot a colorful blend of moving power this time jack bended down 35 degrees and took out his scrool. But the rainbow still hit jack and he died.

This time he awoke to be on a hill and sitting right next to him was a scrool, howcome the dreams were getting stronger, why did he awake on this hill, and didn't he kill her???

To be Continued.... The ending to the saga draws near.

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