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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Eskimo Bob on 2005-09-30 at 02:30:46
Here is my story so far...I will add more as it goes on... enjoy.. ( Not for the people who dont like blood...I think?)

A Murderous Joke
By : Toa5555

When I was a kid, I knew I would NEVER kill anybody in my entire life, well, I was wrong, the events that follow…Are what I thought Wouldn’t happen but, I guess not…


It all started one day when I was reading a book, right as I finished the book it disappeared into a puff of red smoke and I felt a Slash of paint right through my body, I woke up that next day and turned on the news, a murder had happened, just a few blocks away from my house, I was scared… but I also thought about the pain and red smoke from last night… Well, I got up and went out side, I was walking to a coffee shop when somebody yelled out “HEY Vrat!”, I Turned around to see it was my friend Jive, he said to me “Did you hear about the murder today!?” , “Yes” I said a bit nervous. “ I’m sure the murder wont find us!” He said. “ Whatever...Lets just… Get some coffee or…something… “ I said .

Chp2 : I’m…Not…Scared?

We got our coffee and had it, later that night, we went to Jives house, I was bored, there was nothing to do at my house, so then I told him, “ Ummm…What’s up with u dissing my Friends lately?”. “ Dissing your friends?” He said a little bit sarcastically. “You know, being mean and stuff, you’ve noticed that…Haven’t you? “ , “ …Are you jealous of how good I am??” He said. “What the …?” I said. “Well, there’s nothing I can do to help you now” Jive said hysterically, “… What’s so funny?” I said with an evil chuckle… He didn’t know what was coming to him, but the second he turned around, a loud sound went off, blood filled the air, and I , Disappeared.


Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-09-30 at 09:59:21
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