Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-05-08 at 19:29:29
Hey guys, I haven't been talking for a while i'll be suprised if anyone still remembers me lol. Anyway i'm working on this story, obviously it has some startcraft stuff in it, i'm hoping to get it published when it's done and stuff. Please dont take credit for it, I tried my best to write this.
hoping the file attachment will work lol
hoping the file attachment will work lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Reever on 2004-05-08 at 20:53:49
ok story better than wht i could write
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-05-08 at 21:21:42
QUOTE(Reever @ May 8 2004, 07:53 PM)
ok story better than wht i could write
Well what can I say, I try lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EzDay281 on 2004-05-08 at 21:44:51
First off, I like it.
Second off, it's "Zerg", not "Zergs".
Err... sorry, I made that "I like it" opinion before I read the 2nd paragraph of Chapter 3. And, by "I like it", I mean not counting all your spelling and punctuation errors.
One last thing... the gloves sound kind of stupid. I suggest that instead, you use Energy Blades that were given to the U.E.D. by the Protoss as a sort of "Alliance Gift" or something like that... as for the Katana... well, in a war against Zerg, a Katana will not do effing
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Second off, it's "Zerg", not "Zergs".
Err... sorry, I made that "I like it" opinion before I read the 2nd paragraph of Chapter 3. And, by "I like it", I mean not counting all your spelling and punctuation errors.
One last thing... the gloves sound kind of stupid. I suggest that instead, you use Energy Blades that were given to the U.E.D. by the Protoss as a sort of "Alliance Gift" or something like that... as for the Katana... well, in a war against Zerg, a Katana will not do effing
...Report, edit, etc...Posted by -black-death- on 2004-05-08 at 22:53:44
I'd write it in the 3rd person, but that's just me. 
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-05-09 at 13:37:05
QUOTE(EzDay2 @ May 8 2004, 08:44 PM)
First off, I like it.
Second off, it's "Zerg", not "Zergs".
Err... sorry, I made that "I like it" opinion before I read the 2nd paragraph of Chapter 3. And, by "I like it", I mean not counting all your spelling and punctuation errors.
One last thing... the gloves sound kind of stupid. I suggest that instead, you use Energy Blades that were given to the U.E.D. by the Protoss as a sort of "Alliance Gift" or something like that... as for the Katana... well, in a war against Zerg, a Katana will not do effing ...
Second off, it's "Zerg", not "Zergs".
Err... sorry, I made that "I like it" opinion before I read the 2nd paragraph of Chapter 3. And, by "I like it", I mean not counting all your spelling and punctuation errors.
One last thing... the gloves sound kind of stupid. I suggest that instead, you use Energy Blades that were given to the U.E.D. by the Protoss as a sort of "Alliance Gift" or something like that... as for the Katana... well, in a war against Zerg, a Katana will not do effing
... Actually I was thinking of putting in energy blades but I thought it would be a bit to...Advanced for them. But the gloves I thought could of come in handy, and the katana, well..maybe I could switch it with something..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EzDay281 on 2004-05-09 at 18:05:58
Reue, the gloves would be useful...
if you found a way to have them distort, bend, and break your hand in hundreds of different ways, while also connecting pieces that aren't supposed to be attached to each other, painlessly and without any ill-effects, also be able to return your hand to normal under the same conditions, and modifiy your wrist to be able to support hitting something with a metal hand with the force of a large hammer hitting a stone wall.
Energy blades too advanced? Whado you mean?
"well..maybe I could switch it with something.."
YES, DO THAT.
EDIT: OMG I saw your sig, and you're one of the few people to get the quote right, while most people say "You called down the thunder, now reap the whirlwind."
if you found a way to have them distort, bend, and break your hand in hundreds of different ways, while also connecting pieces that aren't supposed to be attached to each other, painlessly and without any ill-effects, also be able to return your hand to normal under the same conditions, and modifiy your wrist to be able to support hitting something with a metal hand with the force of a large hammer hitting a stone wall.
Energy blades too advanced? Whado you mean?
"well..maybe I could switch it with something.."
YES, DO THAT.
EDIT: OMG I saw your sig, and you're one of the few people to get the quote right, while most people say "You called down the thunder, now reap the whirlwind."
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mr.Camo on 2004-05-09 at 20:33:09
I talk in third person at school alot .
.Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-05-09 at 22:25:46
QUOTE(EzDay2 @ May 9 2004, 05:05 PM)
Reue, the gloves would be useful...
if you found a way to have them distort, bend, and break your hand in hundreds of different ways, while also connecting pieces that aren't supposed to be attached to each other, painlessly and without any ill-effects, also be able to return your hand to normal under the same conditions, and modifiy your wrist to be able to support hitting something with a metal hand with the force of a large hammer hitting a stone wall.
Energy blades too advanced? Whado you mean?
"well..maybe I could switch it with something.."
YES, DO THAT.
EDIT: OMG I saw your sig, and you're one of the few people to get the quote right, while most people say "You called down the thunder, now reap the whirlwind."
if you found a way to have them distort, bend, and break your hand in hundreds of different ways, while also connecting pieces that aren't supposed to be attached to each other, painlessly and without any ill-effects, also be able to return your hand to normal under the same conditions, and modifiy your wrist to be able to support hitting something with a metal hand with the force of a large hammer hitting a stone wall.
Energy blades too advanced? Whado you mean?
"well..maybe I could switch it with something.."
YES, DO THAT.
EDIT: OMG I saw your sig, and you're one of the few people to get the quote right, while most people say "You called down the thunder, now reap the whirlwind."
Well thanks on the quote thing, and on the energy blades I was hoping of putting in a war between all three races then having the protoss being an allie later on in the story. And yes, I will switch it..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-05-09 at 23:04:18
3 tolally spys
i noticed, i have seem that gay show so many times!
thats were you got the names and discription
things from it:
the name jerry
gadgets
and the name gadgets
its a good story... keep it up
i noticed, i have seem that gay show so many times!
thats were you got the names and discription
things from it:
the name jerry
gadgets
and the name gadgets
its a good story... keep it up
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EzDay281 on 2004-05-10 at 01:22:33
Well, then it could be gauntlets that project a high-energy field around them, which, although quitte energy costly, would pack quitea punch.
Plus it would make more sense, and Terrans at that time'd probably be able to make that.
Even if it were thermal energy.
Plus it would make more sense, and Terrans at that time'd probably be able to make that.
Even if it were thermal energy.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-05-10 at 06:41:00
QUOTE(Zombie @ May 9 2004, 10:04 PM)
3 tolally spys
i noticed, i have seem that gay show so many times!
thats were you got the names and discription
things from it:
the name jerry
gadgets
and the name gadgets
its a good story... keep it up
i noticed, i have seem that gay show so many times!
thats were you got the names and discription
things from it:
the name jerry
gadgets
and the name gadgets
its a good story... keep it up
Actually I haven't seen that show, if it's only family channel or something I only get channels up to 28