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Report, edit, etc...Posted by HolySin on 2005-10-17 at 23:53:01
Ambiguity, for those who don't know, is unclarity of the text, which allows you to make your own interpretation, beginning, ending, etc. I'm aware that there's already some threads about stories like the "3 wort" or simply telling stories. This time, I will say a story, and I'm interested in seeing how others will think it will end. Here is the first story:

Little Jimmy wakes up at 1:00 AM of March 1 to the piercing noise of water drops falling on a pan. He rubs his eyes with his hands, blinks, and begins to adjust to the light of night. Jimmy peers over at the side of the bed to see if anything will come out from under, for Jimmy is young, not any older than the age of eight. After twenty seconds of anxiety rising from staring at the floor, he is confident that nothing is under the bed. He leaps to the center of the carpeted floor of his room, just to be safe. He steps into the hallway. The shadows trick his eyes into thinking theres beings moving about on the other side of the long, cold, tiled hallway, but he takes a deep breath, closes his eyes, and takes steps towards the kitchen, which is located at the end of the hallway. Jimmy is at the kitchen door and hears the annoying water droplets that echo from within, but Jimmy is close enough to hear something else. He opens the door ever so slightly as to not be noticed. Jimmy is then horrified and takes too many steps back, and causes a loud thump against the wall.

It is now up for you to decide what will happen to little Jimmy.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-10-18 at 02:57:56
[center]Probably belongs in lit/writing/whatever.
Little Jimmy: "OH GOD NO! NUKE'S IN MY KITCHEN BANGIN' MY MOM!"
*Suicides*
Nuke: "What? I was just eating all your pie..."
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2005-10-18 at 17:17:46
Hahahaha
I extend the 711 lot over jimmys house and he exits the room and is in my lot...
Enough said
Report, edit, etc...Posted by warhammer40000 on 2005-10-19 at 18:57:58
He is gutted like a fish by a demon, torn in half, turned inside out, and eaten.
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