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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2005-10-26 at 12:13:30

throw some candy on the ground!!!
watch the children gather round!!!
lock and load your M-16!!!
light 'em up and hear 'em scream!!!
throw some sweets down on the street!!!
watch the kids come out to eat!!!
put a belt in your mark 19!!!
launch your nades and watch the blood stream!!!


A-10, A-10 flying high!!!
double load of napalm at your side!!!
see the children by the lake!!!
drop your napalm watch'em bake!!!

A-10, A-10 strafing low!!!
double load of napalm ain't for show!!!
see those children by the river!!!
drop your napalm watch 'em quiver!!!

A-10, A-10 soaring quick!!!
drop a double napalm stick!!!
see those children by the stream!!!
drop your napalm, watch them steam!!!


Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-10-26 at 12:42:34
[center]A few typos, but still funny.
Sounds like my halloween plans.
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2005-11-07 at 21:27:05
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Poems, Some Kids may cry...


i cried...

more like laughed tongue.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-11-07 at 22:44:58
meaningless violence? brilliant!

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I didn't like it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Felagund on 2005-11-07 at 23:09:18
Poems = The Devil's Handicraft

Remember that kids, and you'll do just fine.

Fiction, dear beloved Fiction, embrace me my love...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2005-11-11 at 15:14:03
QUOTE(Felagund @ Nov 7 2005, 10:09 PM)
Poems = The Devil's Handicraft

Remember that kids, and you'll do just fine.

Fiction, dear beloved Fiction, embrace me my love...
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Poetry doesn't HAVE to be about anything, but of course it "my world" it's all whatever you say right? Good job smart guy.

I liked the humour of it, I actually thought it was going to be something serious so I was slightly disapointed, but it was a nice little.... rhyme.... Took me awhile to find out it had no real purpose haha, just explains that you're mischevious and kinda disturbing, nice work tho.

~Tdnfthe1
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2005-12-01 at 02:10:33
For some reason, the first thing I thought was eminem, lol, though he's not quite so angry.. or is he.

oh no, I spoke of a music group/band/person, it's SO forum taboo -_-
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