Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2005-11-11 at 15:09:24
The Missing
16 years and I still can't cope with this feeling, can't cope with these losses, can't cope with this feeling...
Can't cope with the distance that seperates your presence from minde, can't deal with the fact that death has no present, future, or past.
Can't handle the sound of your voice on the phone, can't understand why your words choose NOW to come out and take a hold.
Can't quite explain this feeling of loss, don't think I'll ever get over knowing that you're forever gone. Can't live without you, your friendship, your love. Can't live without him, his guidance, wisdom, and love.
They want me to get over it, move on. But I can't, I'm too weak - JUST NOT STRONG ENOUGH!
I gotta have you, right here, by my side,
I want him back here, forever, crackin jokes-forever on everyone's line, as long as he's still alive.
16 Years and I still can't cope with this feeling
When I feel so lost and alone, I just these things that are missing...
Just something worth sharing, I'm also welcome to comments or anything of that sort, thanks for reading it.
~Tdnfthe1
16 years and I still can't cope with this feeling, can't cope with these losses, can't cope with this feeling...
Can't cope with the distance that seperates your presence from minde, can't deal with the fact that death has no present, future, or past.
Can't handle the sound of your voice on the phone, can't understand why your words choose NOW to come out and take a hold.
Can't quite explain this feeling of loss, don't think I'll ever get over knowing that you're forever gone. Can't live without you, your friendship, your love. Can't live without him, his guidance, wisdom, and love.
They want me to get over it, move on. But I can't, I'm too weak - JUST NOT STRONG ENOUGH!
I gotta have you, right here, by my side,
I want him back here, forever, crackin jokes-forever on everyone's line, as long as he's still alive.
16 Years and I still can't cope with this feeling
When I feel so lost and alone, I just these things that are missing...
Just something worth sharing, I'm also welcome to comments or anything of that sort, thanks for reading it.
~Tdnfthe1
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-11-11 at 21:20:17
[center]Wow. Is this about something personal?
I loved it.[/center]
I loved it.[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2005-11-13 at 12:01:15
QUOTE(nuclearrabbit @ Nov 11 2005, 08:20 PM)
[center]Wow. Is this about something personal?
I loved it.[/center]
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I loved it.[/center]
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Yeah it is, by the way thanks for being the only one to reply to it in like 4 days
.Thanks alot for the input on it, and yes it was about personal things of course.
~Tdnfthe1
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Felagund on 2005-11-13 at 12:19:53
Well I'm sure we've all felt what you described so vividly at one point or another.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Tdnfthe1 on 2005-11-13 at 14:47:29
QUOTE(Felagund @ Nov 13 2005, 11:19 AM)
Well I'm sure we've all felt what you described so vividly at one point or another.
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lol this kind of spammish but, Thanks for the reply and comment. Does anyone else right pieces of poetry in this forum?
~Tdnfthe1