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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-11-11 at 22:00:35
I didn't write this. Ironically, a girl named Anna wrote it. She's a friend of mine. And she wants views from all sorts of people, and I figured gamers are a race their own. So here's the poem:

Love like no one can describe
I feel for you
And these words try to hide
But its so true

I know these lyrics are cheesy,
And I know the rhythm sounds bad
Just lie down and take it easy
Let's talk about the fun we've had.

They're across the street, 'been up since four
They're across the ocean, 'fighting in some war
They're across the country, 'learn something more
But I'll remember though my heart is painfully sore
They'll always be here inside my heart, in my core.

I have no other way for me to recite
And this is no more than a cheap cliche
But if you are alright and well tonight
Would you mind coming my way?

They're across the street, 'been up since four
They're across the ocean, fighting in some war
They're across the country, to learn some more
But I'll remember though my heart is painfully sore
They'll always be here inside my heart, in my core.

I love you and I'll say it again
I love you and I'll say it again
I love you and I'll say it again...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-11-11 at 22:11:02
QUOTE(Persephone @ Nov 11 2005, 08:00 PM)
…people, and I figured gamers are in a league of their own…[right][snapback]353646[/snapback][/right]

[center]Fixed.

Anyways... Good poem/song/whatever you wanna call it. Who/what is it about?
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kame on 2005-11-11 at 22:12:52
I love Mandy says:
who/what is it about?
I love Candy says:
huh?
I love Mandy says:
your poem...
I love Candy says:
OH RIGHT!
I love Candy says:
People and stuff.


well there you have it. She's I love Candy and I'm I love Mandy.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-11-11 at 22:15:18
[center]"People and stuff." Interesting...
Could use some more verses, but meh. Good enough as it is.
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2005-12-01 at 02:06:35
Lol as I was reading it, a beat came to me and I almost started singing it. It sounds kinda like would make a good hiphop song. The beginning sounds like she would be saying it, then the singing begins because then the rhythm would work with each other better

ugh, choir has changed me -_-
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