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Report, edit, etc...Posted by T-MaStAA on 2005-11-18 at 13:25:30
Ok here I wrote this song in english just to scare the teacher.

Eyes of wrath
The beast is on your back
Razorblade slice your neck
Slowly tear you down
Takes another life
To feed his bloody lust
Random crime spree attack
There's no random at all

Dead city nights
Another daughter's done
Another victim of circumstance
Took the wrong way home
Can you hear the screams
The music of the dead
A ritual of broken flesh
Annoints the silver blade

No one lives forever
There is no forever
And I'll tell you why
Rage, Rage soothes the pain
Pain, Pain soothes the rage
Lash out in anger
that never will chance
I can never escape
Rage, Rage Soothes the pain
Pain, Pain Soothes the rage
Rage, Pain


Took me a long time to write and I didnt get the best mark cry.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by warhammer40000 on 2005-11-18 at 15:56:46
Thats pretty cool. I mean, I wouldn't call it grotesque in my book, but its pretty good.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-11-18 at 20:52:42
[center]Go ask someone in Music & Sound to write some music for that, I'd like to hear it as a song.[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Merrell on 2005-11-19 at 11:14:26
I saw that at this site:
http://lyrics.rockmagic.net/lyrics/testame...ering_1999.html
and
http://lyrical.nl/song/4949
and
http://lyrics.duble.com/T/testamentlyrics/...wrathlyrics.htm

I wouldn't exactly call it yours :\
Unless you suppositively submitted it to the 15 sites I found closedeyes.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by KrAzY on 2005-11-19 at 11:25:42
MrrLL, that's pwnage! My stuff won't be searched in google unless it has to do with me or my old name. shifty.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by notnuclearrabbit on 2005-11-19 at 18:15:16
[center]Pwnt by Merrell. Stealing work diserves punishment...[/center]
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