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[sub]With my first era of maps finished, im now making maps again. Heres my first, been working on it for a few days now. Thanks to starparty for the ramps.

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Maybe widen some places up for more walking room. Looks intersting, but kinda reminds me of this map called Dark Sauron.

I can playest it with you if you want. Just PM me.
http://www.panschk.de/mappage/darksauron.j...bc9fb95e9a67ca2

[sub]Where do I need to widen paths?[/sub]

The middle of the highland part perhaps. Wanna play a game on it?

[sub]Theres accually alot of room there, I was thinking about that when I made it, it was alot smaller in my first verson. And if you want to game on it, sure, im in op sen now.[/sub]

nice map, i think i can play on this map.

[sub]Why couldent you?[/sub]

Hmm, playing left vs right would suck, not much moving room on that highground.

[sub]Im telling you theres plenty of room there! Fine, ill make it bigger.[/sub]

ADDITION:
[sub]Picture updated.[/sub]

Just get rid of those mini lakes in the middle of the high ground.

[sub]Ok, updated again, the paths are even bigger now. Im not going to make them any larger. Is there anything else that needs to be fixed now?[/sub]

Apparently you misunderstood the phrase "remove"

Get rid of the lwater in the high ground completely, and use some low ground to split it up.

[sub]I don't want to remove it. Its big enough, please don't bring it up again. Is there anything else besides the middle that needs fixed?[/sub]

2v2 left vs right would be interesting / fun.

Seems wide enough to me -_-

Very nicely done. The tight "ramps" might pose a problem, but I'm probably just being paranoid. We must play on this -_-

The bottom expos seems slightly smaller than the top expos...

[sub]Ill assure you they are not, the map is 100% symmetric. The postion of the ramp just gives that illusion.[/sub]

w/e its your map, but imo it favors terran.

Nice map, but I think the position of the ramps leading to expos matters. I would rather that the expo came before the ramp in both cases. I think it works out better that way.

I dislike the kind of asymmetricalness you have in the middle, consider taking out the expos or putting them somewhere else. Get rid of that wall too..

Otherwise I think its fine and you are ever persistent to improve.

[sub]Updated, going to go try and fix Space Frog now, expect that shortly.[/sub]

Wow, much better now.

Also a suggestion: Move the gas from the cliff to the nat.

Looks way better, since the area is widened in the center

[sub]Updated again.[/sub]