Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-05-23 at 16:53:25
what do you think?
Edit: i removed the backround music
Edit: i removed the backround music
Report, edit, etc...Posted by MindArchon on 2004-05-23 at 16:58:52
Looks pretty good. Show me it when your done 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-05-23 at 16:59:15
thanks mind 
i will
i willReport, edit, etc...Posted by Mr.Camo on 2004-05-23 at 17:05:07
I would but I'm working on my forums. I'll test it when you're done 
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Did you do my pawn shop idea?
.Did you do my pawn shop idea?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pinecone on 2004-05-23 at 19:36:47
Unless your asking for help on a map, this is in the wrong forum.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yoshi da Sniper on 2004-05-23 at 20:10:52
Moved to General Staredit forum.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-05-23 at 20:40:56
i wonder who voted i hate it
*looks at yoshi*
*looks at yoshi*
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Yoshi da Sniper on 2004-05-23 at 21:24:08
I didn't vote at all.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Pinecone on 2004-05-23 at 22:17:02
There are so many grammitcal errors the dialogue is hard to read. Half does not mean Have. The intro can be spiced up with some explosion to represent the virus spreading. There is a hyper wait between each pause for each intro segment, and it wouldnt hurt to do some capitalizations. If you added some dialoague in the intro [Even a cheap scream from a cop would work] then it would be much better then just zealots and kerrigans killing cops.
When the Swat guy said to the civilians you have light armor on, that dosnt make sense since the civilians have 5 armor, to the Raynor with 1. In the briefings you said there was no cure, but the swat guys said you must go to the hospital to find the beta cure [Which is partially a cure, but that just dosnt make sense] and when l walked up to a dead body, my civilian was transported to the top right of the map for some reason, lol. That was random. I know your not done, but for start, it just dosnt seem so good. Sorry.
When the Swat guy said to the civilians you have light armor on, that dosnt make sense since the civilians have 5 armor, to the Raynor with 1. In the briefings you said there was no cure, but the swat guys said you must go to the hospital to find the beta cure [Which is partially a cure, but that just dosnt make sense] and when l walked up to a dead body, my civilian was transported to the top right of the map for some reason, lol. That was random. I know your not done, but for start, it just dosnt seem so good. Sorry.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-05-24 at 10:56:59
QUOTE(Yoshi da Sniper @ May 23 2004, 08:24 PM)
I didn't vote at all.
oh sorry yoshi, im just use to it lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by (U)Bolt_Head on 2004-05-24 at 12:23:07
Zombie could you please not continue your topic-post / polls from the title.
The title is something extra intended to separate your topic and allow people to know what its about before reading it.
Think of a thread as a book. The title needs to be descriptive. Readers do not open a book to the first page and read"Peter Pan Once upon a Time" as one sentence.
Hope you get what i'm saying. I feel like i'm not being too clear but on the other hand you might know exactly what i mean after reading the first sentence.
The title is something extra intended to separate your topic and allow people to know what its about before reading it.
Think of a thread as a book. The title needs to be descriptive. Readers do not open a book to the first page and read"Peter Pan Once upon a Time" as one sentence.
Hope you get what i'm saying. I feel like i'm not being too clear but on the other hand you might know exactly what i mean after reading the first sentence.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by .Coko[CK] on 2004-05-24 at 15:34:52
Sigh, i hope you take this in, and do not feel attacked, everyone here is just giving advice, nothing more nothing less, and don't insinuate that someone would purposely be abusive towards you. Yoshi isn't like that.