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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2005-11-29 at 22:51:12
I dont beleive in god
dont beleive in myself
dont beleive that the stars
are as far as they'll tell
i dont care enough to live
dont care enough to die
dont care if you laugh
dont care if you cry
I dont see the point in trying
dont see the joy in earth
dont see why careless mothers
continue giving birth
i dont know the meaning of life
dont know what i should do
dont know why i'm even here
saying all this to you..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by NerdyTerdy on 2005-11-30 at 19:04:28
That's sort of disturbing/cool. Better than I could do smile.gif.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2005-11-30 at 22:25:41
Thats a pretty good Poem / Story type thing but you could have made it a little longer and it would be better
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Arbitrary on 2005-11-30 at 22:30:06
Bling. Nihilism. Fits the meter almost perfectly too.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2005-11-30 at 23:51:12
Quick post, make it as I go with a view in mind happy.gif

A curse but a gift
One you cannot lift...
Heavy it is indeed
But..
Love is all you need smile.gif

ugh, too sleepy to try to continue from there.

I do not believe in God, so who is he to me? Why would I state such a thing? If I do not believe in him, he then is nothing to me, therefore shouldn't affect me at all... that's like feeling like I'm missing something when I stop believing in the boogieman.

You don't care... but others might- about them or you. You may not care enough to live, what about others? You may not care about anyone else, what about others?

Don't care enough to live? Suicide is a conceited act. It doesn't care who will be affected by such an action.
Don't care enough to care? There are more out there than you, so I guess it doesn't make a difference...

Don't care to live, but rather not die? Then you're hangin' on to something buddy, you're feeling like life can't just be like this, there is something else and you want to find it... so go look for it!!!

SIP (just made that up, rofl) Search, Identify, Pursue your dreams!!!
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