Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2005-11-30 at 23:59:12
I've been considered by my peers a "Helpless Romantic", though some could say "Hopeless", I don't know, but here it is of my childhood friend...
We were children when we met
Memories of you I have kept
A long time- years it's been
I don't remember exactly when
But I remember the girl with which I napped
And the moment my shoulder was gently tapped
It was you and I was glad
The memories of that day we had...
I wonder if you remember me-
Wonder where you are and might you be
Do you remember what you said?
In that kindergarten, on that bed?
It was not the best children could do
But it was alright because it was you
If only I could see you once again...
Under the sun... or under the rain?
Wrote it sometime back, thought I'd try to get myself to writ again
We were children when we met
Memories of you I have kept
A long time- years it's been
I don't remember exactly when
But I remember the girl with which I napped
And the moment my shoulder was gently tapped
It was you and I was glad
The memories of that day we had...
I wonder if you remember me-
Wonder where you are and might you be
Do you remember what you said?
In that kindergarten, on that bed?
It was not the best children could do
But it was alright because it was you
If only I could see you once again...
Under the sun... or under the rain?
Wrote it sometime back, thought I'd try to get myself to writ again
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2005-12-01 at 00:50:21
I have heard that poem before elsewhere.
I am kind of gorwing a little skeptical of this literatary work you have displayed.
I will come back if you have stolen this. If it isn't, then you have a great talent.
I am kind of gorwing a little skeptical of this literatary work you have displayed.
I will come back if you have stolen this. If it isn't, then you have a great talent.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2005-12-01 at 01:34:57
Well,I've also posted this at DeviantArt as fadingmemories47 (now i'm fm47 for short), you can see it at
http://fadingmemories47.deviantart.com/gallery/
Most of one I posted there are here too
In fact, I just made up a story on the Story Time post
http://www.staredit.net/index.php?showtopi...51&#entry368751
It was really fun
http://fadingmemories47.deviantart.com/gallery/
Most of one I posted there are here too
In fact, I just made up a story on the Story Time post
http://www.staredit.net/index.php?showtopi...51&#entry368751
It was really fun