Report, edit, etc...Posted by n2o-SiMpSoNs on 2006-03-01 at 18:37:08
Poem I wrote in my creative writing class. I'm not much of a writer but, I think I'm going to submit some poems i do during this class.
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Also, The reason I wrote a poem about this is because the activity was to write a secret down. and we put them in a pile and picked someone else secret and wrote as if it was our secret or wrote as if we were a person with the secret. (of course we didnt know whose secret we got.
hehe Click HERE to seeeee
Also, The reason I wrote a poem about this is because the activity was to write a secret down. and we put them in a pile and picked someone else secret and wrote as if it was our secret or wrote as if we were a person with the secret. (of course we didnt know whose secret we got.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by n2o-SiMpSoNs on 2006-03-08 at 20:46:13
loved all the comments ^_^
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-03-11 at 03:03:20
I think it's a pretty cool perspective. I've never been good with poems that don't rhyme... I mean, are you just breaking up sentenses or is there an actual rhythm to it? Oftentimes, only the writer knows.
I did start to get a feel for it, but I think it can be polished more. Keep it up!
I did start to get a feel for it, but I think it can be polished more. Keep it up!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by n2o-SiMpSoNs on 2006-03-11 at 10:29:54
Good free verse poems have rhythm. However I'm not a good poet 
But, thanks for your comment !!! ^_^
But, thanks for your comment !!! ^_^Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-03-12 at 01:16:16
Whoa whoa whoa, let's not saying "good" or "bad" here.. rather, let's see it as "do your skills satisfy you?" And usually it never does, and that's why you press forward, push harder to the next level.
Keep it up, I really would like to see it polished and if possible, slightly extended
Keep it up, I really would like to see it polished and if possible, slightly extended