Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-03-25 at 02:12:12
Many have wondered what Love is. Well, first off, love is what we define it given we are true to ourselves. Once that is achieved, in reality, no one is to justify otherwise unless that justification is forced upon....
The philosophy of me
Love is the Ultimate Sin.
Love brings Pride. Proud because I am the happiest person Existance has seen. None else can be happier.
Love makes Greed. I want you to myself, none else.
Love evokes Wrath. That guy better leave you alone next time....
Love is Lust. I want to comb my fingers through your hair, to caress those lips with mine, and to explore your entire body.
Love supports Gluttony. Let's go out to eat tonight.
And Love promotes Sloth. After dinner, we'll just cuddle under the star-lit light.
What is love? The Ultimate Sin.
Sigh, I think I really could have written that better... but She just got online >_< she has been for the past few weeks on fridays... which is when she's out with her friends.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
v>_<v
The philosophy of me
Love is the Ultimate Sin.
Love brings Pride. Proud because I am the happiest person Existance has seen. None else can be happier.
Love makes Greed. I want you to myself, none else.
Love evokes Wrath. That guy better leave you alone next time....
Love is Lust. I want to comb my fingers through your hair, to caress those lips with mine, and to explore your entire body.
Love supports Gluttony. Let's go out to eat tonight.
And Love promotes Sloth. After dinner, we'll just cuddle under the star-lit light.
What is love? The Ultimate Sin.
Sigh, I think I really could have written that better... but She just got online >_< she has been for the past few weeks on fridays... which is when she's out with her friends.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
v>_<v
Report, edit, etc...Posted by KrAzY on 2006-03-25 at 22:34:09
If this was a poem, you should try and make it look like:
Also, I would rate it five out of ten by the way it's written and how you describe love.
QUOTE
Love is the Ultimate Sin.
Love brings Pride. Proud
because I am the happiest
person Existance has seen.
None else can be happier.
Love makes Greed. I want
you to myself, none else.
Love evokes Wrath. That
guy better leave you alone
next time....
Love is Lust. I want to comb
my fingers through your hair,
to caress those lips with mine,
and to explore your entire body.
Love supports Gluttony. Let's
go out to eat tonight.
And Love promotes Sloth.
After dinner, we'll just cuddle
under the star-lit light.
What is love? The Ultimate Sin.
Love brings Pride. Proud
because I am the happiest
person Existance has seen.
None else can be happier.
Love makes Greed. I want
you to myself, none else.
Love evokes Wrath. That
guy better leave you alone
next time....
Love is Lust. I want to comb
my fingers through your hair,
to caress those lips with mine,
and to explore your entire body.
Love supports Gluttony. Let's
go out to eat tonight.
And Love promotes Sloth.
After dinner, we'll just cuddle
under the star-lit light.
What is love? The Ultimate Sin.
Also, I would rate it five out of ten by the way it's written and how you describe love.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Blu on 2006-03-26 at 00:44:57
I see. Your inlove? 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-03-26 at 06:39:02
Lol, it wasn't meant to be a poem, I just tried to list it out as I went. I was more of a message I guess.
Love? She's married now. L O L jk jk
I'm not really involved right now... aiya -_-
Krazy, I've noticed the posts you've posted. I appreciate the criticism (omg it's 4:30 freaking AM, I cant spell), but there are somethings you might not be understanding.
1) If you look, hardly anyone is posting in the literature section (sadly), and lately, it's mostly been me, blu, and screwed. The Holy God of the Literature forum should be glad anyone's even posting.
2) We're not writing poems cause it's the fad, but it's what we all do and enjoy. It's short and can be typed up in a few minutes. Stories go on and on and isn't something you just click "New Thread" and start typing... most of the times, anyway, because it would take too long and change is so often. Sometimes you get an urge to write, and you write, and those sometimes are the origin of these poems (in reality, i'm speaking for myself here), because they are convenient.
3) There isn't exactly a "too short to be a poem". The shortest poem, if I remember right, is 2 words. A poem is what the poet wants it to be and then it goes through the testings. What kind of audiences is it directed to? Did it achieve its purpose (i.e. to send a message)? Then the intended audience decide if it's art or junk.
So far, most of the people here have art or at least an idea. An idea is an idea, someone may not present it Hollywood quality, but the concept of the idea exists within the person who thought of it (or modified something to it).
Btw, I've noticed that u just dissected my lines of words into little lines of words... for my own benefit, how does that help it better?
Love? She's married now. L O L jk jk
I'm not really involved right now... aiya -_-
Krazy, I've noticed the posts you've posted. I appreciate the criticism (omg it's 4:30 freaking AM, I cant spell), but there are somethings you might not be understanding.
1) If you look, hardly anyone is posting in the literature section (sadly), and lately, it's mostly been me, blu, and screwed. The Holy God of the Literature forum should be glad anyone's even posting.
2) We're not writing poems cause it's the fad, but it's what we all do and enjoy. It's short and can be typed up in a few minutes. Stories go on and on and isn't something you just click "New Thread" and start typing... most of the times, anyway, because it would take too long and change is so often. Sometimes you get an urge to write, and you write, and those sometimes are the origin of these poems (in reality, i'm speaking for myself here), because they are convenient.
3) There isn't exactly a "too short to be a poem". The shortest poem, if I remember right, is 2 words. A poem is what the poet wants it to be and then it goes through the testings. What kind of audiences is it directed to? Did it achieve its purpose (i.e. to send a message)? Then the intended audience decide if it's art or junk.
So far, most of the people here have art or at least an idea. An idea is an idea, someone may not present it Hollywood quality, but the concept of the idea exists within the person who thought of it (or modified something to it).
Btw, I've noticed that u just dissected my lines of words into little lines of words... for my own benefit, how does that help it better?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Blu on 2006-03-27 at 17:38:49
Beutiful fm47, just beutiful!! 