Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kellodood on 2006-05-07 at 00:51:31
Anger
Neglection
Graduating
Unforgetful
Indescribible
Surreal
Hatred
Neglection
Graduating
Unforgetful
Indescribible
Surreal
Hatred
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Daedalus on 2006-05-07 at 15:42:25
Hm, moderate. These kinds of poems are extreemly difficult, but if they succeed they use to be really good. I don't know but it doesn't do anything special with me.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Falcon_A on 2006-05-07 at 21:22:57
For a second there, I didn't even notice it was the word anguish vertically. The last 3 words hit me too much for me to even look for a pattern.
That feeling you get when the one thing on your mind is to take the closest thing to you and smash it, destroy it, or yourself, speed things up so you never feel that way again, and perhaps the hate is toward your be-- nevermind.
I'll stop now.
But the only word I think isn't as good as the rest is 'graduating'...I think you mean like escalating or growing, and it does work, but there might be a word that doesn't give me the feeling of high school ;P (though that involves plenty of hate)
That feeling you get when the one thing on your mind is to take the closest thing to you and smash it, destroy it, or yourself, speed things up so you never feel that way again, and perhaps the hate is toward your be-- nevermind.
I'll stop now.
But the only word I think isn't as good as the rest is 'graduating'...I think you mean like escalating or growing, and it does work, but there might be a word that doesn't give me the feeling of high school ;P (though that involves plenty of hate)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kellodood on 2006-05-08 at 00:47:20
Yeah.. Graduating was a poor choice there, lol. But I was on my way to plasterland, and just pulled it out of my ass, hehe. Here is another 
Living
Onward
Vivid
Eternall
Living
Onward
Vivid
Eternall
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-05-08 at 07:39:14
What
The
F***
?!
These are always weird to me. What I have to say towards them are simply opinions. On such "poems", I think that too often people just find relative words and stick them in there.
Luscious
Orgasms
Vague
Emotions
I mean... you know (ironically, it appears that that's how most teens today see "Love").
In fact, I would have to say this little example of mine works as something a "poem" in this style that really says somthing.
If I didn't use it as an example, it would display how the author feels about "Love".
I mean, for "Anguish", you could list any "sad" word that starts with an "A", "N", "G".. so forth.
Anticipating
Neglection
Gathering
Unhappiness
Intensive
Sad
Heart
What's ANGUISH? Well? It's Anticipating Neglection as you're Gathering Unhappiness and ultimately have an Intensive Sad Heart.
Not the best example, but you get the point (I hope). (The "anticipating neglection" is based on perspective, so)
The
F***
?!
These are always weird to me. What I have to say towards them are simply opinions. On such "poems", I think that too often people just find relative words and stick them in there.
Luscious
Orgasms
Vague
Emotions
I mean... you know (ironically, it appears that that's how most teens today see "Love").
In fact, I would have to say this little example of mine works as something a "poem" in this style that really says somthing.
If I didn't use it as an example, it would display how the author feels about "Love".
I mean, for "Anguish", you could list any "sad" word that starts with an "A", "N", "G".. so forth.
Anticipating
Neglection
Gathering
Unhappiness
Intensive
Sad
Heart
What's ANGUISH? Well? It's Anticipating Neglection as you're Gathering Unhappiness and ultimately have an Intensive Sad Heart.
Not the best example, but you get the point (I hope). (The "anticipating neglection" is based on perspective, so
)