Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mr.Camo on 2006-05-07 at 00:59:23
Hollow sea
Here is the face
Of the sheer drop,
Where the weeds cannot
Seize the sliding slope.
Here is the sea
That cuts the soil,
Here is the wind
That breaks the bind.
Here is the hollow
Of the smell and the seep,
Where the rocks roll
And the seaweed sleeps.
Here is the core of the broken wave;
Here is the bay of the beating breath;
Here is the water of the still slumber.
Here is the face
Of the sheer drop,
Where the weeds cannot
Seize the sliding slope.
Here is the sea
That cuts the soil,
Here is the wind
That breaks the bind.
Here is the hollow
Of the smell and the seep,
Where the rocks roll
And the seaweed sleeps.
Here is the core of the broken wave;
Here is the bay of the beating breath;
Here is the water of the still slumber.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rabid_Wolf_101 on 2006-05-25 at 12:25:10
Short... but very touching.... you have to read it twice or thrice to get the heart of the story, all in all i give it an 8/10 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by A_of_s_t on 2006-05-25 at 23:11:12
Very compeling. 9/10. Its nicely written. Gj,