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Report, edit, etc...Posted by ABCDEFG on 2006-06-10 at 11:41:58
HOPEFULLY MY MOM WONT TRASH THIS STORY !!!

Taco Boy

orriginally got this from a guy you prob. know but he didnt wright it he just gave me the idea... its a good story actually and its kind of not random when i get to the middle its actually a surprising conclusion. Its a sad story too =(

Preview : In a small town where you have to eat to survive, he sold Tacos on the corner and the mob wanted in... "I dont know this guy but I want him and his tacos dead out and I want his Stand!" "Listen to me these are my tacos" The only solution was to fight back...
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We lived on the line that divides Mexico and the US. Yes it is extremely hot and uncivilized there. Im Shei from Mexico and I used to 0help Arnold Swarchenegger with his taco stand. We make good profit making tacos, people all around the US and Mexico beg for our tacos because thats how good they are with their tasty chewy delicious spicy burn to the tung makes you want to eat it over and over again somehow... But thats not all, I'm luckily still alive today making Burritos at a US store. Along time ago when the Taco Stand was still in place Arnold's live changed forever...
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Chapter 1# Arnold
Arnold was a young man, he was strong, actually so strong that when he nudged his friend it leaded into his arm in a cassas. So he never used any term of violence ever again. "All in a days work my friend" Calvin said to Arnold. "Yeah, we made 230 mesos today!" Arnold said in his weird yet sexy acent. "Wait who are those people over there?" "Where Arnold?" They both looked north about 230.402213 yards away. "Oh no, a mob" There was a mob in the border between Mexico and US called the Fine Flirds. They like to carry weapons with them all the time and that is what they were doing. One of the gang members pointed a pistol at Arnolds head. "Listen to me, these are my tacos." "Yeah, and listen to me this is my gun pointing at ur head. Get away from the taco stand and run like little girls to your mommy." Arnold wasn't scared he carefully reached for his back and got his knife. Calvin was so freaked out he nearly fainted but was on the ground begging for mercy. Arnold then suddenly got his knife swiftly stabbed the man on the stomach and punched his parner in the face then stabbed him.
The police came in about five minutes and took the men away and gave Arnold an award of taco sauce for killing those two wanted gang members. "Why did they want our tacos" Calvin Asked "Forget that." Arnold Replied. When Arnold got to his house he saw his brother, Shei. "Whats with the look?" Shei asked. "Don't asked." Arnold Swarchenegger went to his room and he saw his brother walking in. "Don't tell me your taco sauce spilled all over the place again!" "No its worse, I killed two people today, they were looking for it. And I bet there will be more looking for it." "Why don't you just put it somewhere else?" "Where?" "In a Bank or something?" "The people will see that I have it and will keep it for themselves everyone wants it, now that the a gang knows... I'm going to have to kill more people."


To be continued (mom please dont throw this away)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)7-7 on 2006-06-10 at 11:52:44
What do you mean mom dont trash this and hopefully my mom doest trash this story. From you saying to be continued I am guessing that you have more than just one chapter that you are going to post here!

P.S. Did you get my sig that I gave you?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by ABCDEFG on 2006-06-10 at 12:47:13
yeah i did, well i am writing down this all in a piece of paper and my mom threw it away so i decided to make a new story yeah -.-
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-10 at 14:15:47
What, you just decided to watch comedy central then try to write a story based on a scenerio a comedian said?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by ABCDEFG on 2006-06-10 at 15:39:32
Sad story no comedy at all.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-11 at 23:05:49
I was referring to the comedy stand up of Pablo Franisco...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by A_of_s_t on 2006-06-14 at 02:18:49
COMEDY STYLINGS OF PABLO FRANSISCO!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT GUY!!!!
And then I read ur story....

In the city, u must fight to survive.

He sold tortillas on the corner, but the mob wanted it...


"I dont know who this guy is, but I want him and his tortilaas dead!"

He had only one solution, and that solution was to FIGHT BACK!.....

---Pablo Fransico

You ruined a great skit... I expected ur story to be funny....
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-06-14 at 04:30:18
Seriously, alphabets, I personally do not agree this being literature. It's like a conversation of some random made-up scenerio as you talk to your friends, except you're the only adding on to the scenerio...

"And then this happened, (YEAH, LOL)"
"Then THIS would happen (ROFLMLSAFMO)"
"Oh oh, let's make him do this...."

Except all those people are... you.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2006-06-22 at 16:23:29
Don't post 'to be continued'. I recommend you actually type the ENTIRE thing first and THEN POST IT, because if you DON'T post a second chapter, you'll be getting people to hope false hopes.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by ABCDEFG on 2006-06-22 at 20:31:56
yeah your right its closed because my mom freaking wasted it again. She thought it was junk when she was cleaning my room omg well the next one i type and write ill make sure I keep it in a safe spot sorry guys it was going to be halarious too.
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