so, I saw this for some other guy, and I was wondering what you guys think of my incomplete "book."
Five Steps to a Revolutionthat's technically the prologue to my main story, but it's optional reading and can be read alone at well. It is an account of the people of Shivia's revolt against the corrupted Shivian Republic.
Blue: Ultimatum, Chapter One Blue Ultimatum takes place about two hundred years after the revolution in Shivia. The Blue Assassins, a syndicate that was found during the revolution, is under persecution for "murdering" many people.
Butterfly Technology: Chapter 1 A group of scientists have figured out away to control a popular theory called "The Butterfly Effect" and raw chaos itself. When sixteen year old Damon Carter stumbles across a hidden community created for the one purpose of letting the Butterfly Technology take hold of humanity on a higher level, he swears to stop at nothing to put an end to the madness