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there should be a sen rap contest . where you like have to submit 3 verses of rhymes and be like a prize (not like monthly or anything just like once) i think itd be fun.

Bunny Rabbit In The Field
He Know He Gonna End Up Killed
Coz The Farmer Is A Big Fat Meanie
But Looks Like A Smelly Beanie

Encore Encore i know (the real ones would be longer then this by far as youd know)

but w.e anything will be fine and if enough people join my Rap Contest i might.. dare i say it -- MAKE A PRIZE

If there is, lemme hit ya wit dis:

To make a change of scenery
To make it all new to me
To have a feeling so beautifuly
It all makes sense
But that aint gonna pay the rent
Philosophy
Not buisness but a hobby
But id give anything to do what i love
To feed both the pocket and the soul
And make a new mold
To upgrade the standards
Make the number and percentage go down
On the demanders

To kill what hunts me
To solve what puzzles me
To make plain what was complex
Seems like im standing in an empty complex
A scene with all most everything the same
Use the words in a comination sticks and stone
Add in some tactics a military genius
Let them observe from the high ground and
Make their plans to control man
But in the end its instinct
Not what they think
Thatll win the war

To make what was uncreated
To redo that which was broken
To take the shot to make it all stop
I have a shell of outter cold
Never to let inside what was
Created inside that mold because
Im getting so old and so cold
From what we would call
Needing a stamp of approval on this
Show some back bone
Never take it for granted
And skill hone
Inclose on my talents
The new masters of
Unmesurable talents
Shifting the balance
Twoards those of us
With a counsious of
Malice.....

-DB

nice how long did that take you too write :0 i wanna see more so i can rate so far ur rated #1 because ur the only entry

Ahh rap battles, I used to do these on a myspace group I was the king I'll post back with my drop.

ADDITION:
Yo yo yo its inspektah-deck on the set, burnin yo ass like a bc's jets
im hard like a medusa turn ya ass to a statuette//

Never been to Maui but I bring represent the streets of kaui
drivin by SENitches havent even hit em and they already cryin "owwie"

Ill bring the ruckus to any weak Darkblood(MC), a light fool cant cop a single rhyme looked you up in a dictionary and you were the victim of someone wasting time//

inspektah deck needs to inspect his headsets,
it was too short for the criteria, my rhymes spreading like bacteria
ive been getting hot for so long, think im gonna stop your so wrong
eliminatin, those hatin
one by one they go down, as i hold to my crown
at top of the game, remember my name
going down in book of history, but not as a mystery

i know they suck but got so tempted XD

maybe instead of a rap contest it shud be a song contest O_O? then everyone can participate

*New Rule*
Send Me Your Songs To row__@Hotmail.com (thats 2_ ) and ill officially rate them id say you can send your songs by like july 20th id say thats fair (any kind of songs

Ehh mine was just as long as yours, next time specify verses I thought you ment bars

It's only fair to warn
I was born with a set of horns
And metaphors attached to my damn umbulical cord
Warlord of rap little illegitimate child with a two by four board
That smashed into your Honda Accord
With a 4 door Ford
But I'm more toward droppin an accapella
And choppin' a fella
To mozarella
Worse than a hellacopta propella
Got you locked in the cella

I pull up on a convenient store
i grab a knife and gat and open the door
i showed the clerk my knife and said open the drawer
it's my 4th store in the last 4 nights
but as i look out the door, i see red n blue lights
i dip out and head towards the crib
what im about to do is worse than what i just did
i see an old woman and i say 'wheres the cash'
she hands me the purse and a light flashed
i get back home and open and pull out my stash
got my rock, razorblade, chronic, and hash
smoking a bowl and sniffin' white lines
i get the best from the connections of mine
you'll have an SOS on your ass tonight
don't use guns b*tch put up a fight
you're gonna find out that you gonna get romped
ill take you to the ground and youll get curbstomped
B*tch say something, get louder
i don't play around i be on that powder
I'll kill you and yo momma, f*ck that whore
and the next night i'll hit up anotha store

Any poem/rap/song ect. takes me from 3-9 mintues.

-DB

We should get solar in here. :/

Yo yo yo, MC Wilhelm is in da house.
I got leet powerups n weepnus that let me kills lots of nigas
Lik dis +2 broad sword and this spell called Ul-ti-ma
All da girlz lik to check out mah gold Chocobo
But I'm like "woah, ho"
And I says "I'm gay"

Clan U Sucks (By Oo.Solar.oO) im not sure he wanted to enter but ill enter him anyways ^_^

I don’t mean for this remark to ever spoil the peace
But the clan tag they wear looks like a toilet seat
They wear it like a crown they think they’re royalty
Going afk is a sign of loyalty
really funny thing, that made me laugh quick
when they drafted that backstabbing illegitimate child draxis
Isn’t he the t dude
Who got his ass kicked
By myself and mastaa
Oh it was fantastic
He goes afk
In ur chan everday
You can whisper him insults
Its perfectly ok
He wont notice one
You know this is fun
Because when he reads all your jokes yo
He don’t get the puns
the poor little guy
All ways begging for respect
Joining a half dead clan
what do you expect
im gonna after this
and you cant help it
flame me on the forums
and ill extinguish you helpless
a few new U members always acting facus
entering the channel with their super bright faces
b\w bolthead and matrix
where did they go
oh no I cant take this
no ones here
its an empty void
you’ve been hacked
helped has been destroyed
fortunes stolen ops
hell has froze
lol crap that’s normal what the hell oh no
I got
tons of info for this clan by the dozen
the only girl a U member has kissed is their cousin
I know this clan is lifeless
It might seem dead to you
But it’s actually cool
They’ve recruited red2blue
And he hung out in Oo
but now it’s a no no
He don’t know what to do
So its time to go solo
I know that the tagban has made them all needy
But I laughed my ass off when they took in that weedy
A spammy little reject neck deep in feces
Not good enough for my clan
But he knew he has key

i dont think this is EXACTLY right and if it isnt solar feel free to correct me and ermm heres the actual song

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You know my rap is way better than anything you could even begin to contemplate thinking up.

Your rap doesn't rhyme.

Neither does yours.

neither does mine!

Too bad not a single thing rhymed in that "rap" of yours.

Yo yo yo yo yo, feel tha flow

Feel tha flow, Yo yo yo yo yo

Yo Feel, yo tha Flow yo yo yo

Am I good enough to get a prize?!

Now excuse me Deck, but i think your just a bit pissed that it was good but wasnt street-thug-drug-womanizer-battle-type orientated.

-DB

Actually, the deep thoughtful rap ratio to gangster rap of my music collection is about 5:1. And you mostly rhymed with the same word, which is generally looked down upon where I come from. But it was better than atlest three peoples raps in this thread. :l

Definitely not better than mine, though.

Check it, I grew up smacking b*tches
they always end up in ditches
I'll get rid of all you snitches
Leave you with 100 stitches
I'll smack a ho with my co*k
as soon as i snort this rock
I put that lighter under the spoon
the skies spinnin' with the stars n moon
The next day on the corner
seen this b*tch i didn't even warn her
i pulled my blade n slit that throat
took her to the lake and put her on the boat
Went to the middle of the lake
cut the b*tch up and made me a steak
You can't even call me a wussey
For dinner I had me some Deep Fried P*ssy.

Can I please clarify?

A poem does NOT have to rhyme to be awsome.

Thank you.

Yes but they want raps specificly which i believe do. Im much better with poetry, though i do have a piece which rhyms alot but isnt a rap. Its all about how its written.

-DB