Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-07-21 at 19:51:57
[center]Rules[/center]
`Theme: Looking into the future
`You have to submit your poetry starting from the "start" date and up until the "end" date, the weekend will be used so I can choose the winners.
`Start: July 21, 2006 Friday
`Ends: July 29, 2006 Saturday
`No flaming or any sort in this topic.
`Only post your poem which you are going to enter in this topic.
`You can change your poem only once after you post it here.
`All other discussion will go in the "Poetry Contest?"
[center]How to judge[/center]
`I will have an open judging system
`You can vote on any poem which is not yours
`I get total of 5 votes, 3 for who I believe should get first, 2 for who I believe should get second, and 1 for who I believe should get thrid. (I just changed this rule, becuase I felt like it. If anything goes wrong or you have complains just tell me)
`Voting period is very short its on the weekends, so hurry and make your votes.
[center]Prize[/center]
`I assume this is going to happen weekly, and this is definatly not the only contest I am going to have so the prize arent as high.
[center]1st
100 min
2nd
50 min
3rd
25 min[/center]
Want to add rules? Want to change rules? PM me, and it will get done.
PS. I leave this Sunday July 23, thats why last poetry contest was rushed, and this poetry contest is extra long.
`Theme: Looking into the future
`You have to submit your poetry starting from the "start" date and up until the "end" date, the weekend will be used so I can choose the winners.
`Start: July 21, 2006 Friday
`Ends: July 29, 2006 Saturday
`No flaming or any sort in this topic.
`Only post your poem which you are going to enter in this topic.
`You can change your poem only once after you post it here.
`All other discussion will go in the "Poetry Contest?"
[center]How to judge[/center]
`I will have an open judging system
`You can vote on any poem which is not yours
`I get total of 5 votes, 3 for who I believe should get first, 2 for who I believe should get second, and 1 for who I believe should get thrid. (I just changed this rule, becuase I felt like it. If anything goes wrong or you have complains just tell me)
`Voting period is very short its on the weekends, so hurry and make your votes.
[center]Prize[/center]
`I assume this is going to happen weekly, and this is definatly not the only contest I am going to have so the prize arent as high.
[center]1st
100 min
2nd
50 min
3rd
25 min[/center]
Want to add rules? Want to change rules? PM me, and it will get done.
PS. I leave this Sunday July 23, thats why last poetry contest was rushed, and this poetry contest is extra long.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Cloud on 2006-07-22 at 01:41:15
[center]Till the End of Time
Up beyond the limit
Of the broken atmosphere
Deep dark space. Nothing. Everything.
By : Cloud[/center]
Another Haiku
Up beyond the limit
Of the broken atmosphere
Deep dark space. Nothing. Everything.
By : Cloud[/center]
Another Haiku
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-07-22 at 02:48:45
Wow 1 entry thanks.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rantent on 2006-07-22 at 06:51:43
[center]The search for ultimate meaning.
You will never be happy forever.
Simply give in and become happy now.
If you give up your worldly possessions,
will it lead you to understand tao?[/center]
You will never be happy forever.
Simply give in and become happy now.
If you give up your worldly possessions,
will it lead you to understand tao?[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Excalibur on 2006-07-22 at 08:58:15
Scarlet Stars
Earth fires grow dimmer
They seem to disappear
This is only the fact
That the horizion approaches
Or is it that darkness trails
The shuttle engines
And the foot steps of my path
Have i gone so far
Am i so far gone
To rephrase is to rengage
The fact that i cannot accept
The future and its forth comings
And the short comings of my
Rather futile and fruitless efforts
To stop the future and more so
The path of the earths ever change
To change is to forget
To forget is to abandon
In this essance we have
For all purposes unseen
Abandoned our for-fathers
As they could only hope and dream
To look foward and see us
The people who would soon be
To me the shadows arent
Exactly where they should be
I am not where i should be
We are not where we should be
But this is irrelivant to my point
My point as it stands
In alll theorys
Or rather demands
Is simply this:
To forget is to abandon
And if that is true
We have abandoned truth
What was right before
Is no longer right now
And right now is diffrent
From way back when
I fear that this world
Will never be the same again....
-DB
Earth fires grow dimmer
They seem to disappear
This is only the fact
That the horizion approaches
Or is it that darkness trails
The shuttle engines
And the foot steps of my path
Have i gone so far
Am i so far gone
To rephrase is to rengage
The fact that i cannot accept
The future and its forth comings
And the short comings of my
Rather futile and fruitless efforts
To stop the future and more so
The path of the earths ever change
To change is to forget
To forget is to abandon
In this essance we have
For all purposes unseen
Abandoned our for-fathers
As they could only hope and dream
To look foward and see us
The people who would soon be
To me the shadows arent
Exactly where they should be
I am not where i should be
We are not where we should be
But this is irrelivant to my point
My point as it stands
In alll theorys
Or rather demands
Is simply this:
To forget is to abandon
And if that is true
We have abandoned truth
What was right before
Is no longer right now
And right now is diffrent
From way back when
I fear that this world
Will never be the same again....
-DB
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Jamal.oO on 2006-07-23 at 17:13:54
Future.
My future is bleak,
I see it now,
it makes me frown.
I die tomorrow,
filled with sorrow,
cuz i knew i would die that day..
I was on a plane,
and soon I knew,
that i was dead.
The plane crashed,
I remembered my past...
It was a snowy day,
the day was gay,
and I was abroad.
Fortune tellers filled the street,
keeping things nice and neat..
I had the money,
so I said "Hey Honey"
tell me my fortune today..
What she said was bleak,
and as I watched her speak,
my life seemed small and meek.
I'm dead right now.
I'm with the devil,
who knows my darkest fears.
He shows me my wrongs,
and burns me with tongs,
as I sing this song.
END END END END END END END
WOW LMAO OMFG i dont like that lol... I was so bored I make it up lol. if I win ill like go into a coma lol
My future is bleak,
I see it now,
it makes me frown.
I die tomorrow,
filled with sorrow,
cuz i knew i would die that day..
I was on a plane,
and soon I knew,
that i was dead.
The plane crashed,
I remembered my past...
It was a snowy day,
the day was gay,
and I was abroad.
Fortune tellers filled the street,
keeping things nice and neat..
I had the money,
so I said "Hey Honey"
tell me my fortune today..
What she said was bleak,
and as I watched her speak,
my life seemed small and meek.
I'm dead right now.
I'm with the devil,
who knows my darkest fears.
He shows me my wrongs,
and burns me with tongs,
as I sing this song.
END END END END END END END
WOW LMAO OMFG i dont like that lol... I was so bored I make it up lol. if I win ill like go into a coma lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by -bilal92- on 2006-07-23 at 18:24:19
[center]k, i didnt really have anything in my head at the time, i just came back from camping. this took me about 45 mins. Well here it is, its not that great but i hope it does the job hope u enjoy, good luck other ppl! 
Yourself looking into the Feature
No one can last for ever
some people think alike
others think for might, power
wrong decisions can be made through life
right ones can too
decisions can reflect on your life depending good or bad...
death concerns those who fear it
those who dont fear death live a better life
the feature is something that cannot be seen
live your life like there death doesnt exist
dont let death eat at life
you are immortal inside
be yourself, yourself life will last forever...[/center]
Yourself looking into the Feature
No one can last for ever
some people think alike
others think for might, power
wrong decisions can be made through life
right ones can too
decisions can reflect on your life depending good or bad...
death concerns those who fear it
those who dont fear death live a better life
the feature is something that cannot be seen
live your life like there death doesnt exist
dont let death eat at life
you are immortal inside
be yourself, yourself life will last forever...[/center]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-07-24 at 06:15:02
Future revealed in my dreams
Like vivid living Hell.
War will replace the Bubonic
And drops of blood will rain.
Creations of Man
Will phase into another.
Inspirations to create
Will carry a body count.
Perhaps come 2024,
The year of my dream,
Will devistation of Man
Again be the Present.
-fm
Like vivid living Hell.
War will replace the Bubonic
And drops of blood will rain.
Creations of Man
Will phase into another.
Inspirations to create
Will carry a body count.
Perhaps come 2024,
The year of my dream,
Will devistation of Man
Again be the Present.
-fm
Report, edit, etc...Posted by -bilal92- on 2006-07-28 at 14:38:14
..........not many people in this one...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-07-29 at 02:01:34
ROFL DAMN YOU BILAL, i saw you as the last reply, thinking there's a good poem to read... BOY WAS I FOOLED O_O (lol)
I dont think as many people want to post because of the judging system... had I minerals (which I gambled all 2k or so away), I'd do my own system of judgement...
I dont think as many people want to post because of the judging system... had I minerals (which I gambled all 2k or so away), I'd do my own system of judgement...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-07-29 at 19:17:09
Wow not a lot of people... :\ i feel like what im doing is worthless... ill try to rate them today... however, i just got back from camp and im actually dizzy... altitude difference wow... lol haha my head feels light.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Cloud on 2006-08-02 at 20:06:46
It's Aug 2nd and no winner or anything. Uh..Red maybe you should just do your votes and get it over with.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-08-02 at 20:11:23
dude i need some serious backup or w/e or poetry contest just aint going to happen on sen... eh 6 people dont seem like a good number...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-08-04 at 01:56:49
dude, just finish the contest or close it. Either way, at least you can then start another one with a new topic.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-08-05 at 23:02:37
[CENTER]Moving Along
I got alot of work to do
But ill wait till it all is through
So I dont got to come back to you
Moving along brushing my trail as I go
I could tell you who I am but who the hell are you to know
Dont try to find me its a waste of time
Cuz I pick up your trail and am gone on a dime
Maybe I didnt know how to tell you it was the end
I practed on myself but that was just pretend
This is where our roads start to bend[/CENTER]
ADDITION:
Woot I made it in time
I got alot of work to do
But ill wait till it all is through
So I dont got to come back to you
Moving along brushing my trail as I go
I could tell you who I am but who the hell are you to know
Dont try to find me its a waste of time
Cuz I pick up your trail and am gone on a dime
Maybe I didnt know how to tell you it was the end
I practed on myself but that was just pretend
This is where our roads start to bend[/CENTER]
ADDITION:
Woot I made it in time
Report, edit, etc...Posted by -bilal92- on 2006-08-07 at 19:36:58
hahah this one sucked
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-08-08 at 14:12:57
Maybe the reason people dont join this is because Rednara never posts the winner on time
Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-08-11 at 02:02:10
This is done.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RedNara on 2006-08-11 at 23:47:54
QUOTE(Lakai @ Aug 5 2006, 07:02 PM)
[CENTER]Moving Along
I got alot of work to do
But ill wait till it all is through
So I dont got to come back to you
Moving along brushing my trail as I go
I could tell you who I am but who the hell are you to know
Dont try to find me its a waste of time
Cuz I pick up your trail and am gone on a dime
Maybe I didnt know how to tell you it was the end
I practed on myself but that was just pretend
This is where our roads start to bend[/CENTER]
ADDITION:
Woot I made it in time
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I got alot of work to do
But ill wait till it all is through
So I dont got to come back to you
Moving along brushing my trail as I go
I could tell you who I am but who the hell are you to know
Dont try to find me its a waste of time
Cuz I pick up your trail and am gone on a dime
Maybe I didnt know how to tell you it was the end
I practed on myself but that was just pretend
This is where our roads start to bend[/CENTER]
ADDITION:
Woot I made it in time
[right][snapback]540567[/snapback][/right]
QUOTE(Lakai @ Aug 8 2006, 10:12 AM)
Maybe the reason people dont join this is because Rednara never posts the winner on time
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Lol you just read my post... :\ Wow and now you blame it on me. I dont post the winners on time lol... Look at how many people entered. And you didnt in time. Yes I know Im way over the date, but you wearnt in time either.
I donno if this is done, but its more like SEN Poetry contest itself is over, lol a weekly contest in SEN is impossible. Peoples interest is just totally different and we dont have enough member.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheDarkAvenger on 2006-08-12 at 16:14:31
QUOTE(-bilal92- @ Jul 23 2006, 02:23 PM)
[center]k, i didnt really have anything in my head at the time, i just came back from camping. this took me about 45 mins. Well here it is, its not that great but i hope it does the job hope u enjoy, good luck other ppl!
Yourself looking into the Feature
No one can last for ever
some people think alike
others think for might, power
wrong decisions can be made through life
right ones can too
decisions can reflect on your life depending good or bad...
death concerns those who fear it
those who dont fear death live a better life
the feature is something that cannot be seen
live your life like there death doesnt exist
dont let death eat at life
you are immortal inside
be yourself, yourself life will last forever...[/center]
[right][snapback]529775[/snapback][/right]
Yourself looking into the Feature
No one can last for ever
some people think alike
others think for might, power
wrong decisions can be made through life
right ones can too
decisions can reflect on your life depending good or bad...
death concerns those who fear it
those who dont fear death live a better life
the feature is something that cannot be seen
live your life like there death doesnt exist
dont let death eat at life
you are immortal inside
be yourself, yourself life will last forever...[/center]
[right][snapback]529775[/snapback][/right]
Future isnt spelled Feature.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-08-14 at 12:47:29
QUOTE(RedNara @ Aug 11 2006, 10:47 PM)
Lol you just read my post... :\ Wow and now you blame it on me. I dont post the winners on time lol... Look at how many people entered. And you didnt in time. Yes I know Im way over the date, but you wearnt in time either.
I donno if this is done, but its more like SEN Poetry contest itself is over, lol a weekly contest in SEN is impossible. Peoples interest is just totally different and we dont have enough member.
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I donno if this is done, but its more like SEN Poetry contest itself is over, lol a weekly contest in SEN is impossible. Peoples interest is just totally different and we dont have enough member.
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I didnt expect mine to be counted but in the beginning I said id join them so I wrote something and didnt give a crap if its in late because I forget about the contests alot
If you make your dates ill make mine too
