To be honest, your images didn't fit your music selection at all. The interesting thing about most music videos is that the images you see are cut to the beat of the tune well. In this case it seems like you just got all the cutscenes and put a song you liked over it.
It has potential, its just that the images and music don't mesh.
I really didn't like it, sorry but the music didn't fit it at all it was kinda hard to see the pictures and well I think you should of worked on it more, but mostly the music is what ruined it I mean common avenged sevenfold?