This is the first map i ever created tell me what you think of it.

Doesn't work, rename it so the name is too long, i'm gonna rename it now then try to play it. Oh and I think you're try to write Melee, as in a fight of some sort.
Mission brief goes by too fast to read and there aren't any mission objectives. You build things normally like in regular starcraft which is boring. Use color in your next map.
Isnt there a map like that called Cloaked Zergling Blood?
yah i think

NOT! Anywayz I applaud you for effort. If it IS your first map then good job. Next time maybe I'll try playing a map before I make the random comment on it?
Edit by Moose: Let me deal with these things.
QUOTE(Lo[S)
eR,Aug 10 2004, 12:45 AM] Isnt there a map like that called Cloaked Zergling Blood?
Made by me. Check the sig for a link.
there arne't any mission objectives There is actually the mission objectives are Destoy all enemy buildings.
This is a melee with a twist type game not pure use map settings.

Here is an update that makes the mission briefings shown for about 12 seconds enjoy.
And i doubt that cloaked zergling blood is like this one.
i made a map callled cloak wars, here it is. it is very bugggy mind you.
Is it me or are there like 5 "cloaked" maps out when just last week there were 0?
At least i'm the only one with a regular starcraft compatible map.

(hopefully)
it sucks my friend's first map was a 16 obs bound and it was nice
QUOTE(Paella @ Aug 10 2004, 10:18 PM)
i made a map callled cloak wars, here it is. it is very bugggy mind you.
Hmmm, I though mine was the only one called that. I'll find a cooler name for it. Cloaked Wars sounds to much like other games.
Here, changed name,
Shadow Warriors 1.4