Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-08 at 20:29:59
Leave here now you know the way out
Don't play dumb you know what this is about
As I sit here looking at pictures of the good times
Life is short but worth more than a dime
But you're not worth more because you're two faced
Dreadful and sneaky and oddly misplaced
its been a little while since I wrote anything
Don't play dumb you know what this is about
As I sit here looking at pictures of the good times
Life is short but worth more than a dime
But you're not worth more because you're two faced
Dreadful and sneaky and oddly misplaced
its been a little while since I wrote anything
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rabid_Wolf_101 on 2006-12-09 at 23:47:42
Dunno why this made me cry. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-10 at 10:40:44
QUOTE(Rabid_Wolf_101 @ Dec 9 2006, 11:47 PM)
Dunno why this made me cry.
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Well atleast my work is giving people emotions that means im getting better
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mp)Blu on 2006-12-10 at 16:06:57
An agressive short poem that says a lot. Nice work Lakai 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-10 at 19:21:52
QUOTE(Mp)Blu @ Dec 10 2006, 04:06 PM)
An agressive short poem that says a lot. Nice work Lakai
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Thanks
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Mini Moose 2707 on 2006-12-10 at 19:24:44
The grammar errors were very distracting. Please use apostrophes and "you're".
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-10 at 22:26:48
There I think I fixed the grammar errors 
It might be wrong still I dont do well in english
It might be wrong still I dont do well in englishReport, edit, etc...Posted by Mr.Chicken on 2006-12-15 at 00:23:29
GJ lakai
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oo.Insane.oO on 2006-12-15 at 14:43:15
thanks chickens