...*claps*...Shocko...wow...Very nice poems
! I definately enjoyed these two more than the last poems
The love poem was well written, this might be displaying your real emotions?
Second poem: Well written as well. The last two lines were very strong. Well done Shocko! A new poet has risen
I've come a long way since i first started writting poetry. It started about 2 or 3 months ago when i got my heart broken by a girl i love. Here is my very first poem ever written.
Very bad poem in my opinion, but it was my very first one.