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As moose will tell you, I like to write poems. I sort of drown him in them whenever he is online but now I am going to cut the not so little guy some slack

Well I don't really know where to start, I write poems on my life and how I feel so I guess what started this would be the best place to start, but that is a lot of poetry

For now i'll just do my love poems for my girlfriend, if you ask i'll gladly show you more (and if you don't i'll eventually show you more anyways )

This poem is based off my ex-best friends myspace comment of
"what love is to me"

In search for that so called one
who by your side
will make you strong

In search for that missing piece
the one I lost
you stole from me

The promises that we made
but never kept
are yesterday

Now our goals, too far apart
the end has come
back to the start

If you knew the story more behind it, you'd understand the poem more. Sorry.

This is my first love poem for my current girlfriend (long distance )

what started out,
as a small teen crush
ended up big,
and falling in love

so far away,
but so close by heart
and stronger now,
but so far apart

I close my eyes,
you're what I see
the thought of you,
is a thought so sweet

the bond we share,
can not be broken
so read my lips,
hear what's spoken

and understand,
the words that are said
that I love you,
until i'm dead.

Then the most recent love poem ( i wrote it on sunday night )

You are perfection achieved
You don't lie or deceive
You don't care when you're wrong
You always stand strong
You won't fail or give up
You help me when im stuck
You love who I am
You do what you can
You don't get held down
You won't throw in the towwel
You excel at honesty
with an excellent personality
but the best of it all is,
You chose me

Comments, suggestions and requests will all be accepted within reasonable limits, where reasonable limits being at my discretion to decide if I will accept your comments, suggestions and / or requests.

OMG Shocko inlove? Sorry peeps..the world is about to end..
Ok Shocko 1st Poem: I understood parts of it, not so bad.
2nd Poem: Very nice. This could have been " Hear what is spoken" Because of the sylables in
3rd Poem: Repitition helped this one a lot. Nice Poem.

::2nd poem was the best::

Thank you for the good comments and shocko isn't such a loser in real life

"This could have been " Hear what is spoken" Because of the sylables in "

the Hear what's spoken part is actually read as Hear what is spoken, sorry if I made a mistake?

Gamers being losers in real life is a stereotype. People say that I don't look like a nerd, but that is what I am
Keep the poems coming

well the above ones in my opinion are probably my best. What would you like? my very first poem? another love poem? a suicide poem? a hate poem? song lyrics?

lol a suicide poem would be nice if it was written from an emo's point of view.
Hmm..try another love poem

Iunno, it is a pretty suicidal poem lol.
Love poem sheesh ermm not many of those left im not good at them
(despite what the above poems are like)

You fixed me on the inside
I think you are a blessing
You must be gods sign
To teach me another lesson

A lesson about caring
Your love is what I live for
My broken pieces repairing
Nothing could mean more

And without you I am sad
But as long as we're together
You're in my life im glad
I hope this feeling lasts forever

and as a bonus poem, I will leave an extra poem called "Regret"

In time there are things you will regret
its called lost time that you won’t forget
live it all out to the very best
its not a competition, forget about the rest
stride for a dream, put yourself to test

...*claps*...Shocko...wow...Very nice poems ! I definately enjoyed these two more than the last poems
The love poem was well written, this might be displaying your real emotions?
Second poem: Well written as well. The last two lines were very strong. Well done Shocko! A new poet has risen

I've come a long way since i first started writting poetry. It started about 2 or 3 months ago when i got my heart broken by a girl i love. Here is my very first poem ever written.

Unspoken Truth

Why is it that life deals me these cards,
You know that you broke my heart into 1000 shards,
My dreams are but broken pieces,
I still love you, why can't you see this,
These words are unspoken,
For without you, forever im broken,
You don't know how much you mean to me
And through these words I shall be free,
Free to do what I want,
Free to be me,
And even though I found another one,
You will always stay my number one,
And now my best friend has fallen for you,
Yes that’s right, he loves you too,
He wants you in his life,
Now its time for you to decide

Very bad poem in my opinion, but it was my very first one.

No, not at all. This is a good poem compared to my first. When you said that this was a poem about some1 that broke your heart, I tried to get into that..uh..mood, of being heart broken. Once there, I understood everything. How you felt, what you wanted, and where you wanted to go after this. Meh..love isn't what we all believe it to be.

I now know Shocko isnt just as he his on the surface. Many of these are well written and i like them. Ive been writing for over a year now, and as much as id rather write then read, i feel the need to give back a little to the various sites i post on.
Id be honored if youd look at some of my work on here Shocko.

Oh it was so annoying later in life, i found out the only reason she broke my heart was because this friend of hers told her not to, and then when i asked her best friend out that girl then told the other girl that i was only doing it to get back at the first girl, she also dumped her boyfriend to just go for coffee with me. I decided that she wanted to date me and through selfishness she got the first girl i had card about in over a year to turn me down, then the second she tried to get to turn me down. But i got the third one and we have been dating over a month and very much in love. Enjoy the poems. Thanks for saying that is an okay poem, because i sure don't think so

Well Shocko, try not to fall in love too quick and learn from the past.

That's the sort of think that moose says to me, but i just reply with some emo lyrics from a song that im listening to and he settles down

ADDITION:


woops didn't notice this -- sorry.

Sure I will read some of your work, and never say you'd be honoured again i've been told I am good at poetry, but I know i need to get better. Here is a poem I wrote earlier, hate it with a passion but some girl on msn that i have no idea who she is said "hey poem dude, I need a poem for a friend of mine"

Hold me tight, whilst i shake
stride by my side, on the path we take

hand by hand, arm by arm
together we stand, but feel no harm

Tears of joy, and a heart that shines
a poem that goes, beyond just rhymes

the love of a kiss, and hope of a prayer
A whispered wish, that you are still there

what genre? i have; love, hate and suicidal.
(not many love ones left, i find them hard)

I am incredibly lost, just so you know? by second do you mean Hate or do you mean write a poem about a friday night deception under a big storm when thunder hits a tree* and i feel emo?

I'll post some of my old ones up tommorow, one of them took me like one minute to write so you might be impressed by it when i show you it, but it's not amazing quality. I'll start writing some more morbid poems soon (i've been writing more song lyrics and love poems lately)

good i mean im not a fan of poetry although some of it is good.
example: Rap
you got name for the other ones? if you do i didnt see it.

some of them have names, but not like actual names.

All very emotinoal poems.
My favorite is the third one, it has a nice flow and is very motivating.

I've written some lame poems before, but most of them simply play with the usage of words in the english language then convey any meaning, which is what I felt strongly here.

ic well gj anyways

You know, for a while I've been like, "Wow, if people at SEN like my writing... then I don't know if I really want to read anymore works here because my writing really sucks," so I didn't expect much when I clicked the link.

The first two poems, however, were great.

Although it rhymes, the context and emotions kind of make you forget the annoyance of rhymes (since it seems just about every "poem" does from the younger ages), but still get the benefits of rhyming poems (flow, rhythm, ect). I definitely enjoyed them. Thank you for sharing.

In fact, I think I'll write a poem now

Oh, before I do, I guess I'll comment on this "gamers are geeks" thing.

I say, nerd or not, geek or whatelse, so long as you maintain decent health and have the ability to socialize outside the topic of games and off the internet (and not by yourself), you are fine.