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Entry: [14:03] The alien destroyed the transmitter before we could report what's happening here
Entry: [14:17] We sealed off our module so the infection doesen't spread
Entry: [14:22] The scanners showed that the alien's body temperature is 38.0°C
Entry: [14:38] The emergency transmitter will be automatically turned on in less than 25 minutes
Entry: [14:47] At least 1 human must be alive when the transmission is restored
This is for my Thing map. You can approach different computers on the map and each contains one of those messages. The survivors (that are now dead) were making reports in those computers so you can trace the storyline and get an overall picture of what led you to the situation you're in.
Can you understand the storyline from those 5 messages? Can you shorten them even more without cutting any information? And should I replace the word Report with a word Document? Are there any grammar mistakes? (I'm having doubts about the last one)
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10 minutes until transmission restoration
Also, is thic gramatically correct? (the transmission will be automatically restored)
Please help.
Thanks in advance.