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Report, edit, etc...Posted by fm47 on 2006-12-20 at 21:43:14
You are the flower in my garden,
The only one there is.
But when I am not by your side,
You fear I tend others.

At the absence of my shadow,
Your pedals tend to drop.
But how can I be elsewhere,
and with you simultaneously?

Create a figure of myself,
Letting you know there I'll be?
What must I do to let you know
None more are in the garden.

Worry not,
When I am far.
Worry less,
So my thoughts (of you) can pass.

Please, don't worry.

Report, edit, etc...Posted by Shocko on 2006-12-27 at 09:19:58
isn't it petals not pedals?

you really should try using rhythm and rhyme one in a while.
Okay story I guess. Good Job.
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