Report, edit, etc...Posted by EruIluvatar on 2004-09-28 at 11:36:10
This is the first and second chapters of a story I have been writing for over a year. I had abandoned them for a few months, and now I've been able to view the story from an outsider's perspective, and edit them quite a bit. Third and fourth chapters will be forthcoming very soon, and I have begun writing a fifth at the same time as I edit the rest of the story. This takes off right Brood War. The UED has begun the journey home, and Kerrigan has sent her swarms out in pursuit of them. The Protoss have begun rebuilding their shattered homeworld. Expect the next couple of chapters in under a week. Enjoy the read!!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-10-03 at 16:40:37
Its nice but it has one major flaw.
The UED was already destoryed before they ever made it back to earth. -,-
read the prologue.
The UED was already destoryed before they ever made it back to earth. -,-
read the prologue.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EruIluvatar on 2004-10-04 at 21:02:25
Lol did you even read the story? Apparently not. Sigh. Some idiot at starcraft.org didn't read it and made a dumb comment as well (not saynig your an idiot as well, just he was very rude about it).
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-10-04 at 21:05:20
Rofl, what are you saying... The Kerrigan Brood killed anything of The UED fleet, The Earth don't even know what hapenned.... Wtf.. Eruiluvavatar
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EruIluvatar on 2004-10-05 at 20:16:28
Rofl Sessame stop trying to increase your post count with stupid comments. See my post regarding Dawg's intelligent comment. The UED is destroyed in the first part of the story, and a spy ship from the Dominion records it all. Wow, if you aren't going to take the time and read it (I know it's a big story so far), then don't post.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Zombie on 2004-10-07 at 23:57:31
LOL GO SESSE AND IS PWNING AVATAR
ya i read it and your story is kinda wrong teh ued never made it back lol... they were slaughterd by the ZERG! with INFESTED TERRANS MWHAHAHA
ya i read it and your story is kinda wrong teh ued never made it back lol... they were slaughterd by the ZERG! with INFESTED TERRANS MWHAHAHA
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Author’s Note: This book takes off just after the events in Starcraft: Brood War. The UED is returning to Earth, crippled and defeated. The Protoss have begun the rebuilding of their homeworld, and Sarah Kerrigan, having gained control of her ravenous broods, has withdrawn to her center of operations on Char, while sending her swarms in pursuit of Admiral Gerard DuGalle's fleet.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-10-08 at 00:03:10
Yes I'm sessame from the muppet's.... HEY IT'S SESSASE!
No i'm not growing my mineral or my post count.
The dominion and the confederation is destroyed... just replay Zerg campaign after the Mission where you gather 10 000 mineral...
No i'm not growing my mineral or my post count.
The dominion and the confederation is destroyed... just replay Zerg campaign after the Mission where you gather 10 000 mineral...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by High on 2004-10-08 at 02:36:01
I liked it, whens next chapter?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EruIluvatar on 2004-10-09 at 13:22:01
Congrats Zombie, you just joined the other 4 idiots here and at Starcraft.org who read the FIRST LINE OR SO, and then judged the story. Your a 
ing idiot. Amen. Hey thanks alot High! Well I don't do it as a chapter, I just think of them as sections. I'm editing number 4 and working on part 5. 
Thanks very much.
ing idiot. Amen. Hey thanks alot High! Well I don't do it as a chapter, I just think of them as sections. I'm editing number 4 and working on part 5. Thanks very much.Report, edit, etc...Posted by Gowr on 2004-10-09 at 17:49:25
Nice story, wish next chapter could come out sooner 
Can't wait for next chapter!
Can't wait for next chapter!