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Report, edit, etc...Posted by idoL on 2004-10-09 at 21:42:55
Ok I've been in my band for awile now and I am the lead guitarist. fast becoming the leade singer/songwriter, we are heavymetal/punkrock, kinda like the Sex Pistols/Nirvana.

Our current lead singer/song writer asked me to write a few songs since he is fresh out of ideas.

Tell me what ya think of this:

Oh she don't leave.. she don't leave!!
Man the demons, the demons!
She don't leave, man she don't leave!

We are bi-polar opposites, we attract
All the sudden my water broke...

But.. She won't leave..

What is wrong with me?
What do I think of me?

Oh she don't leave! She don't leave!!

No she won't leave...
She don't leave..
She dont' leave..
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