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Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-19 at 20:45:29
THE REVOLUTION
Coming Summer Of 2005!

Here is a detailed post about my movie, setting, characters,etc...
That is my Home website for this! I got a forum thing setted up. Just sign up and
start posting on it!
My Home Website

INDEX:
1 - Summary
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2a - Storyline
2b - Setting
2c - Characters
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3a - Places/Areas
3b - Terrain/Natural features
3c - Groups of people
3d - Creatures
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4a - Weapondry
4b - Armor
4c - Magic spells/Things that have to do with magic
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5a - History
5b - More history
5c - Time line






SUMMARY:(THIS IS FOR YOU LAZY ASSES!!!)
THIS IS JUST THE HIGHLIGHTS!

THE STORYLINE IS INCOMPLETE!(I NEVER PUT MY COMPLETE STORYLINE ON THE WEB BUT U JUST GET THE BASIC PARTS!)

STORYLINE:
Its all about this evil created by this dark evil group of people who just happens so who had came from no where and left during in the 2nd age. And then all this war stuff happens.

Setting:
Where:Validor
Time: the 4th age
duration: an age

Characters:
Lord Hiram
Lord Koron
Lord Aron
The Death Lord, The Dark Lord

Places/areas:

The Dark Mouth of Sirion: Or the Dark Gates.
Protects the Death Plains and the Dark Tower from ground attacks.

Death Plains:
Once used to be a forest of trees and green and animals.
Till the Black Cult changed it.
Now surrouned by water and Mountains. And the Dark Gate blocking the path into it.

Illinor:
The greatest human capital city ever. In the lands of Validor.

Validor:
A place where the people of valor stand together and lived together.
A large chunk of land surrounded by water to the west.
Sort of like Africa and Antartica to the south.
And a few off shore islands.

Terrain/Natural Features:
Naquadah:(got it from a show)
good for powering up energy based weapons.
Snow Top Moutains are filled with them.

Mithril:(of corse always usally used in every fantasy games and stories)
Its light as a feather but strong against weapons. Best to use as armor and weapons.

Sea Bay of Bullagah:
The mass body of water that boarders the western area.

The River Mouth Of the Wind:
The extreamly large river flowing into Valdior just to the south.


Groups Of people:
Humans: One of the most propuring culture in Validor.

Elfs: They are the wisest, and oldest in Validor.

Night Elfs: They are the most oldest and wisest then the Elfs.

Dwarfs: They mine the Naquadah and Mithirl in the High Mountains

Coarsairs: They live longer then the averge human and stronger.

Southernlans: The most advanced humans.

Orcs/Trolls: They are controlled by the Dark Lord. They are one of the stupidest race in Validor. If they did not had the Generals, the L.T. or the Dark Lord they would would not even know what to do! Just cause their dumb!

Undead: Came forth during the ending of the 2nd age. No one knows where they really came from.

Dead: The dead it self. The Ghostly creatures that dwell in the old Ancient citys and temples.

Creatures:

Nargs: Weird creatures indeed

Dogs: Good for hunting!

Eagles: Helped the people of Validor. Kind big birds though.

Great Eagles: Alot stronger and bigger.

Weaponary:
The Blight Sword:
Made by the Night Elfs from mithirl, naquadah, and enchanted white stone minerals

Armor:
Mithirl Armor:
THE BEST OF THE BEST ARMOR YOU CAN GET!
Metal Armor:
Average type armor.

Magic spells/Things that have to do with magic
N/A Ill add some soon!

History:
-First Age-
Started the major propsering and trade
The Black Cult appeared with the Dark Lord.

-Second age-
Validor almost lost
Took siege on the dark Tower.
Many heros lost at the battle.

-Third Age-
The reconstuction of all that was damaged.
Few more heros died from old age.

-Forth Age-
The Dark Lord returns and takes siege on the land of Valor.

TimeLine:
N/A Ill post this one up soon!

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END SUMMARY!
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THE COMPLETE VERSION SHOULD BE UP IN A FEW DAYS!
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Report, edit, etc...Posted by RexyRex on 2004-10-19 at 21:09:54
Sounds like a good plan, but do you have a release date?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-19 at 21:24:17
QUOTE(RexyRex @ Oct 19 2004, 05:09 PM)
Sounds like a good plan, but do you have a release date?
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Yes, I do it might be in July in 2005. Not sure for the exact date but I'm geting close.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Daigotsu on 2004-10-20 at 02:41:34
I have no idea but this sounds a bit like LOTR.....I dunno why but nice introduction.

Will there be a beta or trailer?

ADDITION: Why did it say Okay when I posted?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Kashmir on 2004-10-20 at 15:43:29
thats bcuz half the description at the top is lotr:

validor = valinor the far west of immortals
dark mouth of sirion = a)dark mouth of sauron or b)sirion, great river of beleriand
mithril = metal of the dwarves in khazad-dum
2nd age = "took siege on tower" = happened in lotr

just a few coincidenses lol
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-20 at 18:30:24
ADDITION:
QUOTE(Fu Leng @ Oct 19 2004, 10:41 PM)
I have no idea but this sounds a bit like LOTR.....I dunno why but nice introduction.

Will there be a beta or trailer?

ADDITION: Why did it say Okay when I posted?
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lol i said it was based on lotr.

Yes there is a trailer you can dl it here,CLICK HERE!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RexyRex on 2004-10-20 at 18:37:10
Wow, you must really be exited to have your avatar, signiture and a trailer based on it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2004-10-20 at 20:00:24
I didn't think the trailer was good....

Personaly you should ether make a good trailer and spend a week on it... Or jsut do your map
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Cobra on 2004-10-20 at 20:19:32
I made a campaign called the Revolution once... and it sucked. :/
Doubt yours will though! I liked the trailer, but didnt like all the java script things when opening your web page.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-20 at 20:20:42
QUOTE(Cobra @ Oct 20 2004, 04:19 PM)
I made a campaign called the Revolution once... and it sucked. :/
Doubt yours will though! I liked the trailer, but didnt like all the java script things when opening your web page.
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lol sorry I'm still testing around with the java scripts and stuff.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-21 at 00:56:47
NOW CONTINUING:

2A.Storyline:
Long ago there was no need for large massive armies. Here there weren’t huge battles, but only against the wild beasts and the old corrupted creatures that dwell in the mountains.
The Council keeps the integrity of the land and the alliance together.
Every age the Council selects new people to be in exchange of their place, and it’s just a few days till they change.
The Council always has exactly 10 members few from each group of people. For example: 3 Elves, 3 Dwarfs, 3 Humans, and 2 Wizard. For now they won’t choose for now, because something will happen, something has not happen for an age and might bring the end to the creatures that live on the land.
For the Humans who live and thrive on the land it might be the end of their time and it goes for the Elves. For in the past there was great massive wars, the last war ended the alliance to the south and the west across the seas.
Now since the 2nd age when the Death Lord that was defeated. Peace returned to the land many lives lost. From their the people still wondered where the Black Cult will stike next, but yet they haven't it is like they have disappeared from history.
Only time will tell. Now as the start of the 3rd age they have rebuilt their homes and lands. Till somthing evil stired in the Death Plains.
And this is the start of a new age, the 4th age of Validor

2b.Setting:
Where:Validor
Time: the 4th age
duration: an age

2C.Characters:
Lord Hiram:He is a wizard apprentice to Lord Koron.
He is also Koron's right hand man,he helps him and tells him advices.
he is 1/2 Azur and 1/2 Night Elf.

Lord Koron: He is the Main person in the high council. He and the other lords and ladies from other realm meet together and help solve each others problems.
he is full Azur.

Lord Aron:
He is Lord Hiram's good friend. He is also in charge of a large peice of the Elven army.
He is full Elven.

The Death Lord, The Dark Lord:
Created by the Black Cult as people say. The lord and master of Darkness.
He is all lord and mighty dark ruler. He rules over the Death Plains in the southwest cornor.
His creatures of darkness are the most feared of all.
Never stand in his way.

3A.Places/areas:

The Islands of the Coarsirs:
They are made up of large 5 islands. 4 of them surround the 5th one, which is the largest of them all.
The Coarsirs live longer then average humans and better at naval battles. Their naval force is the strongest.
They hold a weapon of mass power. They have decided to only use it for protection.

The Dark Mouth of Sirion: Or the Dark Gates.
Protects the Death Plains and the Dark Tower from ground attacks.
Forged by the Dark Lord himself. Named after the main leader of the Black Cult, Sirion.(pronounced: Scear-E-on)(like sears, just with out the S at end)

Death Plains:
Once used to be a forest of trees and green and animals.
Till the Black Cult changed it.
Now surrouned by water and Mountains. And the Dark Gate blocking the path into it.
A plain of now of blazing heat and fires and darkness.

Illinor:
The greatest human capital city ever. In the lands of Validor.
Started contruction at the Start of the first age. Built into the sides of the Snow Top mountains.
Constructed caves and tunnels for minning the rich mithril and naquadah.
A very extreamly large city. At the middle of the ground level, their stud a large tower.
Made of pure white mithril. It was constructed by Arcis, a Night Elf. The tower was suppose to be just a watch tower.
During the 3rd age it was turned to be a watch tower for the gate from the dead to the living. It was also a great weapon of power.
Protected by ancient NIght Elf magic. It as well protects the northern and southern parts from the dead, but not from the dead thats already their.


Validor:
A place where the people of valor stand together and lived together.
A large chunk of land surrounded by water to the west.
Sort of like Africa and Antartica to the south.
And a few off shore islands.

3B.Terrain/Natural Features:
Naquadah:(got it from a show)
good for powering up energy based weapons.
Snow Top Moutains are filled with them.
The land of Validor are inriched with it.

Mithril:(of corse always usally used in every fantasy games and stories)
Its light as a feather but strong against weapons. Best to use as armor and weapons.
The land of Validor are inriched with it.

Sea Bay of Bullagah:
The mass body of water that boarders the western area.

The River Mouth Of the Wind:
The extreamly large river flowing into Valdior just to the south.
It is named after the wind because of the river condition is always changing never know what will happen next.
It can go slow, fast, normal,or extreamly fast just like the wind, unpredictable.

Snow Top Mountains:
They are named because of the heavy snowy conditions at the very top of the mountains.
It is enriched with mithril and naquadah.

3c.Groups of people:
Humans: One of the most prospuring culture in Validor.

Elfs: They are the wisest, and oldest in Validor.

Night Elfs: They are the most oldest and wisest then the Elfs.

Dwarfs: They mine the Naquadah and Mithirl in the High Mountains.

Coarsairs: They live longer then the averge human and stronger.

Southernlans: The most advanced humans.

Orcs/Trolls: They are controlled by the Dark Lord. They are one of the stupidest race in Validor. If they did not had the Generals, the L.T. or the Dark Lord they would would not even know what to do! Just cause their dumb!

Undead: Came forth during the ending of the 2nd age. No one knows where they really came from.

Dead: The dead it self. The Ghostly creatures that dwell in the old Ancient citys and temples.

Ents:Peaceful creatures that dewl in the forests.



3D.Creatures:
Eagles: The great flying beasts of the sky.

Dragons: Fywms are the undead dragons.
The Eilte Dragons are one of the strongest really besides the L.T.'S Dragon,A Narok.

Werages:A fast evil corrupted beast.

Nargs: Weird creatures indeed

Dogs: Good for hunting!

Great Eagles: Alot stronger and bigger.



4A.Weaponry

The Blight Sword:
Made by the Night Elfs from mithirl, naquadah, and enchanted white stone minerals.
Created for only one task.That is to kill the Dark Lord.

Moble Balista:
Mostly used by Eilte Orcs. Carried on both or either arms.
It is like a real balista but this one is also a meele unit and a long ranged siege unit.
It can fire spears,grappling,and arrows. One meele attack from it can keep you down on the ground or even kill you.

Tarnisk: Large raging armed giant elephants.
They can be armed with catapults or a tower that holds units to fire arrows and throw spears.
They are being in risk of endangerment. Their kind is about to be wiped out.

Night Elven Long Bow:
These Night Elfs enchant their bows to be stronger and powerful.
They have the strongest bows in Validor, only known weapon to pierce mithril armor.


4B.Armor

Mithirl Armor:
THE BEST OF THE BEST ARMOR YOU CAN GET!
This is for the elite and royal class.

Metal Armor:
This is the most commonly used armor.
And as well as for the higher class.

Iron Armor:
This was used for the middle class.

Bronze Armor:
This is what the lower class people used.


4C.Magic spells/Things that have to do with magic

Sinto kata nish iske tepataL: (The Language of The Damned.)
This spelled used for transporting.It can only transport one object at a time.
It only specialies in living.


5A.History

A time when the land was still pure, vibrent,and rich. Their was the start of many distinct cultures. Some uprose high and some fell dead.
They great major ones who prospured quickly was the Humans,Night Elfs,and Dwarfs. Their was many lost times and stories untill written language was made.
This began the first age of Validor. As time grew their culture, history,and power was written. Untill their worst nightmares has come true. What came apon them was horrible.
From the very place of complete darkness and fire.With the air filled with toxons that can kill you within a few monents went breathed in.
From their many dark creatures arose from the grounds entering the world of living.
The people had no names but the people who lived in the land of valor called them The Black Cult.
The Darkest creature they brought into our world was the Death Lord. The power of the death lord was tremendous.
The death lord brought fear into the lands. Many was sieged by the armys of darkness. Only a few was victorious the rest failed.
Everyday the people of the land lost faith in ever to be able to stop the might of the death lord. Something had to be done. When the forces of darkness marches ever so closely it would send a large jolt of
chill down and up your spine.

5C.Time line
I'll add the years and dates soon!


<-V1------------V2----------V3------------V4--------V5----------V6->


1.The First Age
2.The Death Lord comes
3.End of first age and start of the second age.
4.End of Validor
5.The Destrcution of the Dark Tower
6.End of the 2nd age.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-21 at 17:43:52
Just a reminder I'm still working on this. Even thought its basicly done. I just feel like its really not.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by SaLaCiouS(U) on 2004-10-21 at 21:01:53
I thought you weren't going to finish it until July 2005? Hehe
I didn't read most of this, but here's a tip: it's "Elves" not "Elfs"
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-21 at 21:13:00
QUOTE(SaLaCiouS(U) @ Oct 21 2004, 05:01 PM)
I thought you weren't going to finish it until July 2005? Hehe
I didn't read most of this, but here's a tip: it's "Elves" not "Elfs"
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YOU KNOW WHAT?!!!

IM TIERD AND WANT TO SLEEP!!! I HATE SCHOOL!!!

Yes it is going to be released in July 2005.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by SaLaCiouS(U) on 2004-10-21 at 21:20:55
So it's "basically done" but you won't release it until July '05 ?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-21 at 21:35:53
QUOTE(SaLaCiouS(U) @ Oct 21 2004, 05:20 PM)
So it's "basically done" but you won't release it until July '05 ?
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No not really done but almost.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-22 at 17:44:43
This is somthing I'm really dedicated to and hopefully I'm able to get it done before school ends! And when school ends I only have like 4 weeks left to finish this and make it public.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-23 at 11:05:20
lol, I just remembered that 4 of July is in July, I'm dumb! So the release date
is gonna be on the 4 of July! biggrin.gif
Report, edit, etc...Posted by -PlAyA- on 2004-10-24 at 01:32:30
That seems cool!
Good Luck and PEACE OUT!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by .Coko[CK] on 2004-10-24 at 07:37:16
How can it take you that long to release a map? Even if its got difficult triggers it takes no longer than a weeks worth for me to finish huge maps, and balance them out.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by brutetal on 2004-10-24 at 14:26:54
QUOTE(Coko @ Oct 24 2004, 03:37 AM)
How can it take you that long to release a map? Even if its got difficult triggers it takes no longer than a weeks worth for me to finish huge maps, and balance them out.
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Because it takes alot of maps to complete it.
This is just one of the movies. The next movie is

-The Revolution-
-Ending Of Validor-

Then the next one:

-The Revolution-
The Ending Of All Life

.....ETC.

I also have to do work on is the storyline and the terrian. I'm very picky for the terrain in movies. Because I want the random person whos watching to get more into it then just yawn boreing....
Their is alot of war scenes in every part of the movie basicly. And I have to make sure that the spawns, units,and stuff do the things i want them to. And make sure the main characters dont die!!!
It would be pretty stupid that when they die in a war scene and then theirs a scene were they talk, but they're dead!, so how can they talk?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by .Coko[CK] on 2004-10-24 at 17:22:45
Maybe have them talking over events before hand, and you see how anything they do fails or such, and see them dying as they talk of what they'll do once they win.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by aE[DraX] on 2004-10-25 at 09:33:20
I will add Coko, people do have lives.

[CK Edit: I'll add that mine starts at 6 am when i begin work and finishes around 1 am when i get home from night club.]
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Crispie on 2004-10-25 at 15:03:26
July 2005? Good gosh, why dont you just do it now? Heck man, your crazy for taking that long lol. If a map takes more than 250 hours to make, then thats just rediculous.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by .Coko[CK] on 2004-10-25 at 15:11:53
Well; that doesn't take into account balance, some maps require far more balance, and this isn't done with most Battle.Net maps, so after a while it becomes terrible!
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