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Ok after my random barrage of stupid comedies, i have decided to make real movies.

1.Storyline
In the land of Altaria, there is a peaceful city called Norin. but then they get attacked by the mysterious foe. And all the cities of Altaria Unite forces to launch a retaliation against them...will they succeed?(Probably not cuz that will be too cli-che..how ever u spell it)

Of course there's more of a story to it then big battles... (And theres lotsa nice,not to mention big, music files too)

2.Characters
Samuel-The Main Char
Maximillian - Norin Army General
Aerie - Queen of the sacred city
and some others which will not be mentioned until i make the actual movies...

I just made this trailer and hope ya like it...Big file cuz of Wav. Music

This is a very awesome trailer
Nice Music, I look forward to the map.

So is it gona be an RPG or a movie map?

movie

It would sound like a great RPG as well...

The Music was awsom...

So is there 2 sides good and evil?

like LoTr?

or is it jsut nation vs nation?

more like umm lotsa nations combine to kill one big evil guy..im making a few twists in the story but im not gonna spoil it 4 u

I liked the trailer very much, but there are a few things.
I don't like it when you have the unit unplaceables at the beginning.
You didn't use colors in your unit names.
Some units, like Protoss Zealot were not renamed.
The music was anti-climactic ( I liked it, but for the battle thing it should have been more dramatic. )
Good job, I lied your overview and such, Also the artillery bombardment was really cool too .

Thanks for the feedback, ill use those to improve on my movies now.

Good job! I give u 6/10!
I minused 4 casuse of some problems with the timing and try to place the units in lines then just have one big location and create them!

One ques:

In the intro, it stated something about a 'series of movies' (I think). What does that mean?! That this will span multiple maps?

umm..actually i meant there are different episodes
im planning on making about 5

I still think it would make an awsom RPG....

wow, didn't think another person besides me would actually make a movie with a real storyline

ADDITION: oh ya, could you send me your music files?

That's a indirect affront to what I'm working on right now


It is always best to have your own diverse music, I could extract the music for you, but I don't know if shinobooette wants me to.

qftgy: just find your own music and make it so people want yours... That is always the best idea. Also Shinobooette, what does your name mean (lol) and you're going to make sure that there is a lot of blood in this too right?

well..in japanese Shinobi stand for Ninja...so just to make it sound dumb i changed it to shinoboo...then to make it female i added "ette" at the back, making Shinobooette. I used that name for the game called Ragnarok..cuz my character was female

Hmm...yeah there will probably be lotsa blood cuz of the battles...and maybe even more once they find..the secret

Sup, i liked this very much cant wait see more of it. Lol, i play RO on Chaos server oRo* one from australia =)

The movie wasn't that bad, though i'm not one for Trailers myself, because people go for effects and not for creating the prologue to the map itself.

The camera work, seemed to work correctly, though maybe for explosions you could have had the camera flying around?

dang the dl is horrible, im getting 2kb/s

Really? That seems strange to me, maybe an issue with the Server itself, nothing wrong with the Website front end.

Also; please try to place some major link to the current thread topic; such as commenting on his Movie Map; like how his Music fits the tune, but that at the end i can see the two Armies just passing through each other.

Well thats suppose to happen(I used "move to" instead of "attack to")..cuz at the end they were suppose to charge then its suppose to switch to a black screen just before they do...you were never meant to see them actually collide.

Very nice!! I would recommend an RPG version of this too. It would be kick ass to play it. A little thing you should change is the sound file. Make it so SE compresses it.

I might make an RPG which takes place after the movies.

cool, rpg series after movie series, maybe 10 maps in all

sounds good

Many congrats on keeping the map coordinated with the music, im guessing you spent 4 hours making it so when the music went rough the action followed, either way excellent job

Although, get rid of the unit unplacables, if you are wondering where they are, divide each side of the coordinates by 30 and youll get the square they're at.
One more thing on the fixer-upper, red and purple used to be rivals right? but red and blue are more color contrasting, so it would look alot better if the bad team was purple and the two good ones red and blue, I realize that this would take alot of work but it seems like your out for perfection.

Also, What's up with the teal color?

ADDITION: Oh ya, I'm pretty sure I'm thinking too far in advance but...

If this isnt covered in the movies, and you are going to make an rpg series as well (I really suggest you copyright it), then for the first rpg, red and purple(now blue if you are taking my above suggestion) are allys until the end, which leaves u with a cliffhanger and the teams walking away from eachother enemies again.

That's all, keep up the good work.

This looks cool ~ ^==^