no offence, but it doesn't look all that impressive...
1.needs good story line
2.impressive trigering
3.clever AI if any

and for god sakes man, if that is a good idea for you keep it, its yours, make the map yourself and be come a good map maker, if you dont start know then you gunno have to start sometime... the sooner the better... if you want my advice...
i would load up x-tra editor (or best thing you have) and make the map, no questions asked, even if i felt that it was boaring writing loads of trigers or making detailed terrain... just do it, its the best option you have
and for last time make sure 'you' make it... just you... so then you can have all the credit for it not just some name people see in small print that looks like he hasn't lifted a fingure with the map... best of luck with the map
