Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-26 at 18:00:04
Ok I don't really like my story for my map hero world legends 4
old Story:
In a far away world called legends. Which was in peace. Intill 4 demons that broke hell's gate and destroyed the lands of legends and monsters killed anything in there way. Now that 3 of the demons are dead the last one must be destroyed to restore the lands of legends there is strong hope in the heroes
Can anyone make a great story instend of my crappy story...
I'll put there name in my game!
old Story:
In a far away world called legends. Which was in peace. Intill 4 demons that broke hell's gate and destroyed the lands of legends and monsters killed anything in there way. Now that 3 of the demons are dead the last one must be destroyed to restore the lands of legends there is strong hope in the heroes
Can anyone make a great story instend of my crappy story...
I'll put there name in my game!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by IDontChat on 2004-12-26 at 19:56:33
How's about trying one of these?
-In an unknown galaxy far, far away, there was peace and harmony. However, a small group hated the peace, and formed a mob. The mob performed evil deeds and soon grew into what would be sufficient to build a nation. The 5 leaders are still alive and more evil than ever. It's the hero's job to eliminate these leaders. Without the leaders, the evil followers will grow into a disorganized group and perish quickly to the remaining forces of peace, if they are still there...
------The End------
(Joke StoryLine ---v)
-In some random place, a random peace was formed. It soon randomly broke when some random evil dudes randomly did random acts of, well, evil. Then some random (again) heroes went and randomly stopped the random evil dudes.
------The Random End------
-In the planet of (fill in with planet name of choice), there was an evil egg. The nice and peaceful peoples of this planet did not notice this egg at first. It soon spread more and more eggs. Eventually, a few of the eggs grew into odd creatures of evil. Soon, the evil 'things' had spread all over the planet and had started to destroy and decimate the planet's cities for their own gain. The heroes are from one of the 24 remaining cities. It's their job to destroy the evil leader, which happens to be nearby. The remaining cities are holding off the enemy as much as they can. Then the heroes finally manage to defeat the evil leader by (fill in action of chioce here). The evil minions spontaniously explode after the death of their leader.
------The End------
Eh, am I supposed to include the ending too?
-In an unknown galaxy far, far away, there was peace and harmony. However, a small group hated the peace, and formed a mob. The mob performed evil deeds and soon grew into what would be sufficient to build a nation. The 5 leaders are still alive and more evil than ever. It's the hero's job to eliminate these leaders. Without the leaders, the evil followers will grow into a disorganized group and perish quickly to the remaining forces of peace, if they are still there...
------The End------
(Joke StoryLine ---v)
-In some random place, a random peace was formed. It soon randomly broke when some random evil dudes randomly did random acts of, well, evil. Then some random (again) heroes went and randomly stopped the random evil dudes.
------The Random End------
-In the planet of (fill in with planet name of choice), there was an evil egg. The nice and peaceful peoples of this planet did not notice this egg at first. It soon spread more and more eggs. Eventually, a few of the eggs grew into odd creatures of evil. Soon, the evil 'things' had spread all over the planet and had started to destroy and decimate the planet's cities for their own gain. The heroes are from one of the 24 remaining cities. It's their job to destroy the evil leader, which happens to be nearby. The remaining cities are holding off the enemy as much as they can. Then the heroes finally manage to defeat the evil leader by (fill in action of chioce here). The evil minions spontaniously explode after the death of their leader.
------The End------
Eh, am I supposed to include the ending too?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-26 at 20:53:28
QUOTE(Ed331 @ Dec 26 2004, 07:56 PM)
How's about trying one of these?
-In an unknown galaxy far, far away, there was peace and harmony. However, a small group hated the peace, and formed a mob. The mob performed evil deeds and soon grew into what would be sufficient to build a nation. The 5 leaders are still alive and more evil than ever. It's the hero's job to eliminate these leaders. Without the leaders, the evil followers will grow into a disorganized group and perish quickly to the remaining forces of peace, if they are still there...
------The End------
(Joke StoryLine ---v)
-In some random place, a random peace was formed. It soon randomly broke when some random evil dudes randomly did random acts of, well, evil. Then some random (again) heroes went and randomly stopped the random evil dudes.
------The Random End------
-In the planet of (fill in with planet name of choice), there was an evil egg. The nice and peaceful peoples of this planet did not notice this egg at first. It soon spread more and more eggs. Eventually, a few of the eggs grew into odd creatures of evil. Soon, the evil 'things' had spread all over the planet and had started to destroy and decimate the planet's cities for their own gain. The heroes are from one of the 24 remaining cities. It's their job to destroy the evil leader, which happens to be nearby. The remaining cities are holding off the enemy as much as they can. Then the heroes finally manage to defeat the evil leader by (fill in action of chioce here). The evil minions spontaniously explode after the death of their leader.
------The End------
Eh, am I supposed to include the ending too?
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-In an unknown galaxy far, far away, there was peace and harmony. However, a small group hated the peace, and formed a mob. The mob performed evil deeds and soon grew into what would be sufficient to build a nation. The 5 leaders are still alive and more evil than ever. It's the hero's job to eliminate these leaders. Without the leaders, the evil followers will grow into a disorganized group and perish quickly to the remaining forces of peace, if they are still there...
------The End------
(Joke StoryLine ---v)
-In some random place, a random peace was formed. It soon randomly broke when some random evil dudes randomly did random acts of, well, evil. Then some random (again) heroes went and randomly stopped the random evil dudes.
------The Random End------
-In the planet of (fill in with planet name of choice), there was an evil egg. The nice and peaceful peoples of this planet did not notice this egg at first. It soon spread more and more eggs. Eventually, a few of the eggs grew into odd creatures of evil. Soon, the evil 'things' had spread all over the planet and had started to destroy and decimate the planet's cities for their own gain. The heroes are from one of the 24 remaining cities. It's their job to destroy the evil leader, which happens to be nearby. The remaining cities are holding off the enemy as much as they can. Then the heroes finally manage to defeat the evil leader by (fill in action of chioce here). The evil minions spontaniously explode after the death of their leader.
------The End------
Eh, am I supposed to include the ending too?
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they sound kind of nice i'll wait for everyone elses
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Oni-Sei on 2004-12-29 at 04:04:53
ok im not guna read what they he said so it dosnet corrupt my mind!
your a child (or a group of friends) that are playing around one day and a group of Milita(sp?) attack your town thus causing you all to go on this little escapde of finding the miltia and kill them and all sorts of other things
include
-minigames
-enemys getting harder each time
- names that fit the units
-cool Battle system?
-diffrent veriatys of wepons
-fun things to kill that = money or exp or points
ok thats all ima tell ya dont wana say anymore im tired and stuff
your a child (or a group of friends) that are playing around one day and a group of Milita(sp?) attack your town thus causing you all to go on this little escapde of finding the miltia and kill them and all sorts of other things
include
-minigames
-enemys getting harder each time
- names that fit the units
-cool Battle system?
-diffrent veriatys of wepons
-fun things to kill that = money or exp or points
ok thats all ima tell ya dont wana say anymore im tired and stuff
Report, edit, etc...Posted by pekkel_the_duck on 2004-12-29 at 04:17:05
Okay, you are a herald and as you are in battle helping your master fight, he is shot down and his last wish was for you to take his place and bring peace to the land by taking down the 3 great lords and ruling the land with peace and goody goodyness. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-29 at 05:26:32
Well I just tough about something when I saw the post of Oni-Sei:
Story:
In a planete far away, a Planet called legend was leaving in peace. One day, a priest called "name" discovered something in a temple, a new energy...
Fews month later, With many research, they discovred that the "power essence" Had magical effects, goes randomly for each person, like a mutation... Many Treasures Hunters goes in there to gain "Magical Power" And many Rich person add the right to enter in the temple...
That was a wonderfull discovery...ahh...If they know...
The Power Essence were corrupted a long time ago, and now, many "adult are infected by the madness and the sickness of the power essence... Only a child above 15 year old can't be affected by the "power essence". If they want to survive later, they must find a way to destroy the "energy" Before they got trapped in the madness of the "power essence"
Story:
In a planete far away, a Planet called legend was leaving in peace. One day, a priest called "name" discovered something in a temple, a new energy...
Fews month later, With many research, they discovred that the "power essence" Had magical effects, goes randomly for each person, like a mutation... Many Treasures Hunters goes in there to gain "Magical Power" And many Rich person add the right to enter in the temple...
That was a wonderfull discovery...ahh...If they know...
The Power Essence were corrupted a long time ago, and now, many "adult are infected by the madness and the sickness of the power essence... Only a child above 15 year old can't be affected by the "power essence". If they want to survive later, they must find a way to destroy the "energy" Before they got trapped in the madness of the "power essence"
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-29 at 14:31:58
Unnn I'm really looking for a future/Fantasy Story like final fantasy
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Moogle on 2004-12-29 at 17:00:58
A Basic Story:
A soft wind blows across the lands of Zillan. As sounds of drums beat loudy and crys of warriors scream echo's across the plains. As heroes of Zillan arm themselfs for battle to crush evil hordes of Grizzan. On door step of Zillan screams of people being slaughter alive where stand as soldiers of Zillan watch love ones and friends die because of weak king. Suddenly a light flash's before all and a strange object comes from within the light. A flying unknown weapon, created not by man or demon, but by gods of Asgar. 20 years have pass since this event in our history now we are all using Asgar Tech, but other nations are digging up ruins to gain better Asgaren technology which was hidden from human race, because it was to powerful to use. Will Zillan win race for technology and survive war about being again?
A soft wind blows across the lands of Zillan. As sounds of drums beat loudy and crys of warriors scream echo's across the plains. As heroes of Zillan arm themselfs for battle to crush evil hordes of Grizzan. On door step of Zillan screams of people being slaughter alive where stand as soldiers of Zillan watch love ones and friends die because of weak king. Suddenly a light flash's before all and a strange object comes from within the light. A flying unknown weapon, created not by man or demon, but by gods of Asgar. 20 years have pass since this event in our history now we are all using Asgar Tech, but other nations are digging up ruins to gain better Asgaren technology which was hidden from human race, because it was to powerful to use. Will Zillan win race for technology and survive war about being again?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-30 at 14:20:56
I know a story:
In a far away world named Legends where people lived in peace for years there power, intellingent was mighty intill people started going beyond human kind and created a new type of human called the Raino with extreme power but yet it had a weak mind. They knew if they has shown this to the world people would try to use it for there own evil purposes. Soon Raino wasn't controlable. Soon the people killed him but sliced him into 4 gems which contain power from raino. Soon an evil terroist group named the black Star wanted this power so they could gain power like no other. But this is only the beginning....
Good or crap?
In a far away world named Legends where people lived in peace for years there power, intellingent was mighty intill people started going beyond human kind and created a new type of human called the Raino with extreme power but yet it had a weak mind. They knew if they has shown this to the world people would try to use it for there own evil purposes. Soon Raino wasn't controlable. Soon the people killed him but sliced him into 4 gems which contain power from raino. Soon an evil terroist group named the black Star wanted this power so they could gain power like no other. But this is only the beginning....
Good or crap?