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Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-27 at 01:55:04
Airen's Last Breath RPG



Story Line:



In a far away land called Airen! Everyhting was going well until news came in saying that they were in the direct path one of the most feared forces! The Siyin!

The Siyin were responisble for the downfall of one of the strongest governments in the galaxy!The Ziarks...The only people who know that the Siyin will attack them are 5 average everyday people who got bored one day and decided to listen to an old radio that was hundreds of years old! they read the year on it 1998 the people looked at eachother and said "Damn i cant believe this piece of Junk still works" they plugged it in and began to change the frequency on the radio and landed on 89.9 FM and heard a growl one of the people thought it was just static. They messed with the bass and treble and started to hear low voices!

After hearing the voices they ran back home and plugged it into the new I-8 modulator and set up the decoder to analyze what the radio was playing!

The boys were astonished to hear that it was some sort of meeting between things they have nerver heard before they were listening to the Siyin's meeting about their plans to take over the next planet the meeting was talking about their weknesses and what they have to do overcome the hostile planet of Airen!

The boys thought it was some sort of sick joke and decided to give it a rest and go play Deception of Reality (The greatest game for them at that time besides SC) lol jk <----

The day comes that what the boys heard was true. they were being attacked by the Siyin and they were the only ones who knew what to do!




Players:



5 Humans
3 Computers
1 Good Computer 2 Bad Computers

Tileset: Twilight Dirt/Hight Dirt
Size: 256x256

There are 5 Slots you are assigned a hero before you start like LOH






Features:






  • Lots of mini quests to help get upgrades.
  • Mini plots to further explain the whole plot
  • Not sure how the upgrade level up system should work any suggestions so the map stays balanced throughout the game?
  • Music and Non-Music Version
  • Spells and Shops To Chose From I.E. Bomb Shop//Potion Shop//Spell Shop
  • And any other ideas people think would be good





Characters:



Airen: Terran

5 Units

Ghost

Marine

Vulture

Firebat

Goliath


Mora: Terran (Nuetral Computer)

Has Many More For the towns


Siyin: Protoss

Boss 1: Zealot(Fenix)

Boss 2: Dragoon(Fenix)

Boss 3: Archon(Tassadar)

Final Boss 4: Ghost(Infested Duran)

There are many towns Big and small!


I am looking for criticism and ideas to make it better!

KEEP CHECKING FOR UPDATES!!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by FaZ- on 2004-12-27 at 12:56:47
Cant give much feedback as their is nothing to see yet, but i recommend that you exclude the vulture and find a 5th unit with approximately the same speed as the others. When a unit is that much faster it will go ahead and either steal all powerups/kills or die. Just a thought.

Since you are using all terran units you should simply upgrade them to their hero versions at a certain point in the game, maybe at the same time for everyone upon completion of a quest. Give them new abilities like cloak/stimpacks/mines etc.

Few people try modern day RPG's. It could be good. Good luck with it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-27 at 16:12:15
QUOTE(FaZ- @ Dec 27 2004, 05:56 PM)
Cant give much feedback as their is nothing to see yet, but i recommend that you exclude the vulture and find a 5th unit with approximately the same speed as the others. When a unit is that much faster it will go ahead and either steal all powerups/kills or die. Just a thought.

Since you are using all terran units you should simply upgrade them to their hero versions at a certain point in the game, maybe at the same time for everyone upon completion of a quest. Give them new abilities like cloak/stimpacks/mines etc.

Few people try modern day RPG's. It could be good. Good luck with it.
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Thanks for the input i guess you are the only one who has time to give me a heads up for doing something! and what unit should i change for the vulture? should i just take out the vulture?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by anxiety on 2004-12-27 at 22:15:30
how do you make the map so that there is 5 people playing but with "cut scenes" and movie clips... does every player see these scenes if 1 person visits a location? or just one person see it.. and if one person sees it then the other 4 must repeat the same side quest cut scene mission the other one went on.. doesnt this mess triggers around a bit? why not just make it a 1 player map and have the 5 if you must have 5.. choices of different units to choose from?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by kao on 2004-12-28 at 02:03:08
If I were playing, and there were/is air units for the enemy, I know I would not want to be a unit that fires ONLY at the ground. That would be instant death, considering you have no way of killing it.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by skillledghost on 2004-12-28 at 19:46:10
QUOTE(FaZ- @ Dec 27 2004, 01:56 PM)
Cant give much feedback as their is nothing to see yet, but i recommend that you exclude the vulture and find a 5th unit with approximately the same speed as the others. When a unit is that much faster it will go ahead and either steal all powerups/kills or die. Just a thought.

Since you are using all terran units you should simply upgrade them to their hero versions at a certain point in the game, maybe at the same time for everyone upon completion of a quest. Give them new abilities like cloak/stimpacks/mines etc.

Few people try modern day RPG's. It could be good. Good luck with it.
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basically what he said. but i think that instead of heros you should make health armor and attack maybe even different units.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by r[s]t on 2004-12-29 at 01:15:02
hey you, u need a partner? i',m in

EMAIL tlo.otl@gmail.com
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Commanda_Panda on 2004-12-30 at 10:23:00
Sounds cool but you have really retarded names for the races.
(Siyin, Ziarks)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by FaZ- on 2004-12-30 at 22:15:14
Perhaps one unit could be a medic that casts spells? fireball etc. (infested terrans, mines, plenty of ideas). Otherwise though just being a medic is pure boredom. I was saying that he should have heroes and also unit upgrades, not one or the other. If you are going to go with those 4 Terran units then perhaps an SCV which upgrades to a sarah kerrigan or something could be an interesting character. Maybe building a missle turret that explodes to kill nearby enemies could be an attack. Anyway I'm just throwing things out there. Take them or discard them as you please.
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