Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-30 at 19:13:46
Airen's Last Breath RPG
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Story Line:
In a far away land called Airen! Everyhting was going well until news came in saying that they were in the direct path one of the most feared forces! The Siyin!
The Siyin were responisble for the downfall of one of the strongest governments in the galaxy!The Ziarks...The only people who know that the Siyin will attack them are 5 average everyday people who got bored one day and decided to listen to an old radio that was hundreds of years old! they read the year on it 1998 the people looked at eachother and said "Damn i cant believe this piece of Junk still works" they plugged it in and began to change the frequency on the radio and landed on 89.9 FM and heard a growl one of the people thought it was just static. They messed with the bass and treble and started to hear low voices!
After hearing the voices they ran back home and plugged it into the new I-8 modulator and set up the decoder to analyze what the radio was playing!
The boys were astonished to hear that it was some sort of meeting between things they have nerver heard before they were listening to the Siyin's meeting about their plans to take over the next planet the meeting was talking about their weknesses and what they have to do overcome the hostile planet of Airen!
The boys thought it was some sort of sick joke and decided to give it a rest and go play Deception of Reality (The greatest game for them at that time besides SC) lol jk <----
The day comes that what the boys heard was true. they were being attacked by the Siyin and they were the only ones who knew what to do!
Players:
5 Humans
3 Computers
1 Good Computer 2 Bad Computers
First Computer: Evil Forces of Syin
Second Computer: Wild Animals
Evil Forces of Syin are protoss who are trying to take over the planet Airen! They Syin are an advanced alien civilization (of course protoss are advanced i know not very original -_-)
And Wild animals are the zerg and the units will be like wolves(zerglings),Lion unless you can find a better name (hydralisks), elephants(ultralisks) and more units will be added later!
Tileset: Jungle
Size: 256x256
Map Features:
Waterfalls,Temples,Beaches, and im gonna try and make a laggon type thing with sprites and doodads!
There are 5 Slots you are assigned a hero before you start like LOH[/color]
Player 1: Sorka (marine) upgrades to Raynor same name
Player 2: Sudda (ghost) upgrades into a diff. ghost dont remeber name
Player 3: Raera (goliath) upgrades into Alex something
Player 4: Brevvan (firebat) upgrades into other firebat
Player 5: Meralonna (kerrigan) upgrades into a different ghost
Features:
Characters:
Airen: Terran
5 Units
Player 1: Sorka (marine) upgrades to Raynor same name
Player 2: Sudda (ghost) upgrades into a diff. ghost dont remeber name
Player 3: Raera (goliath) upgrades into Alex something
Player 4: Brevvan (firebat) upgrades into other firebat
Player 5: Meralonna (kerrigan) upgrades into a different ghost
Mora: Terran (Nuetral Computer)
Has Many More For the towns
Siyin: Protoss
Boss 1: Zealot(Fenix)
Boss 2: Dragoon(Fenix)
Boss 3: Archon(Tassadar)
Final Boss 4: Ghost(Infested Duran)
[color=light green]I am looking for criticism and ideas to make it better!
Well i Regret to say that i have to halt construction on this map due to the terrain is not what i am looking for. I would have really liked to make a twilight map but i am going to redo terrain to better suite the storyline! And i know people won't be mad if the terrain is changed for the better if you didny want to play my map thats fine. But for the ones that did i am sorry and it will take longer than expected for me to complete this map. I am taking a very long time to finish this because having people like qpirateking putting maps with terrain like that puts a lot of pressure on me to try even harder on making this map perfect! The storyline and set up will pretty much stay the same i might add a few more bosses but i will keep you updated!
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Story Line:
In a far away land called Airen! Everyhting was going well until news came in saying that they were in the direct path one of the most feared forces! The Siyin!
The Siyin were responisble for the downfall of one of the strongest governments in the galaxy!The Ziarks...The only people who know that the Siyin will attack them are 5 average everyday people who got bored one day and decided to listen to an old radio that was hundreds of years old! they read the year on it 1998 the people looked at eachother and said "Damn i cant believe this piece of Junk still works" they plugged it in and began to change the frequency on the radio and landed on 89.9 FM and heard a growl one of the people thought it was just static. They messed with the bass and treble and started to hear low voices!
After hearing the voices they ran back home and plugged it into the new I-8 modulator and set up the decoder to analyze what the radio was playing!
The boys were astonished to hear that it was some sort of meeting between things they have nerver heard before they were listening to the Siyin's meeting about their plans to take over the next planet the meeting was talking about their weknesses and what they have to do overcome the hostile planet of Airen!
The boys thought it was some sort of sick joke and decided to give it a rest and go play Deception of Reality (The greatest game for them at that time besides SC) lol jk <----
The day comes that what the boys heard was true. they were being attacked by the Siyin and they were the only ones who knew what to do!
Players:
5 Humans
3 Computers
1 Good Computer 2 Bad Computers
First Computer: Evil Forces of Syin
Second Computer: Wild Animals
Evil Forces of Syin are protoss who are trying to take over the planet Airen! They Syin are an advanced alien civilization (of course protoss are advanced i know not very original -_-)
And Wild animals are the zerg and the units will be like wolves(zerglings),Lion unless you can find a better name (hydralisks), elephants(ultralisks) and more units will be added later!
Tileset: Jungle
Size: 256x256
Map Features:
Waterfalls,Temples,Beaches, and im gonna try and make a laggon type thing with sprites and doodads!
There are 5 Slots you are assigned a hero before you start like LOH[/color]
Player 1: Sorka (marine) upgrades to Raynor same name
Player 2: Sudda (ghost) upgrades into a diff. ghost dont remeber name
Player 3: Raera (goliath) upgrades into Alex something
Player 4: Brevvan (firebat) upgrades into other firebat
Player 5: Meralonna (kerrigan) upgrades into a different ghost
Features:
- Lots of mini quests to help get upgrades.
- Music and Non-Music Version
- Spells to learn and find, Shops,inventory for units,
- And any other ideas people think would be good
Characters:
Airen: Terran
5 Units
Player 1: Sorka (marine) upgrades to Raynor same name
Player 2: Sudda (ghost) upgrades into a diff. ghost dont remeber name
Player 3: Raera (goliath) upgrades into Alex something
Player 4: Brevvan (firebat) upgrades into other firebat
Player 5: Meralonna (kerrigan) upgrades into a different ghost
Mora: Terran (Nuetral Computer)
Has Many More For the towns
Siyin: Protoss
Boss 1: Zealot(Fenix)
Boss 2: Dragoon(Fenix)
Boss 3: Archon(Tassadar)
Final Boss 4: Ghost(Infested Duran)
[color=light green]I am looking for criticism and ideas to make it better!
Well i Regret to say that i have to halt construction on this map due to the terrain is not what i am looking for. I would have really liked to make a twilight map but i am going to redo terrain to better suite the storyline! And i know people won't be mad if the terrain is changed for the better if you didny want to play my map thats fine. But for the ones that did i am sorry and it will take longer than expected for me to complete this map. I am taking a very long time to finish this because having people like qpirateking putting maps with terrain like that puts a lot of pressure on me to try even harder on making this map perfect! The storyline and set up will pretty much stay the same i might add a few more bosses but i will keep you updated!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Coop on 2004-12-30 at 19:39:44
Screenies look okay. You should add a little more to the farm screen shot like some trees or something.. i'm not farmiliar with the doodads in twilight.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-30 at 21:27:29
There are no trees in Twilight, but you can use sprites, 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Red2Blue on 2004-12-30 at 21:52:25
LOOK! the units actually talk!...
This will be a great rpg... im tired of seeing all those rpgs where the units don't even talk... and be sure to make your units "talk" about something that actually relate to the plot or have at least some meaning...
looking good tho...
keep it up...
(a twilight rpg? wow, long time no see..)
This will be a great rpg... im tired of seeing all those rpgs where the units don't even talk... and be sure to make your units "talk" about something that actually relate to the plot or have at least some meaning...
looking good tho...
keep it up...
(a twilight rpg? wow, long time no see..)
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-30 at 22:17:55
Ya, every person or message displayed has to do with the plot and i will be sure to add some sprites/doodads to the map!
Anything else that should be added let me know!
Map Total Percent Done:
[B]2%|-------------------100%[/B]
PM me if interested in testing i will accept 2 more testers i already have 1!
or Instant Message me @ AIM:Novacain2005
Anything else that should be added let me know!
Map Total Percent Done:
[B]2%|-------------------100%[/B]
PM me if interested in testing i will accept 2 more testers i already have 1!
or Instant Message me @ AIM:Novacain2005
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PearS on 2004-12-30 at 23:06:45
You need a new text format. And you need to spice up that terrain and scenary.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-30 at 23:29:25
QUOTE(PearS @ Dec 31 2004, 04:06 AM)
You need a new text format. And you need to spice up that terrain and scenary.
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Ok?
1. For the Terrain what do you propose i should do?
2. And new text format? what does that mean and for what?
3. And for the terrain the last 10% will be for doodads and sprites and what not!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by PearS on 2004-12-30 at 23:32:59
Instead of having your text go from left to right, have something special like. 5 spaces: Unit speaking -Enter- 7 Spaces: Unit text. Iono your terrain just looks plain. For example those downed cruisers are a gate...why on earth use that as a gate. And there are no walls so what is the point of having the gate. Instead of having the cliff and bottom of the map as walls, use the actual wall terrain. I think it would look a lot better. Glad to hear you haven't included doodads yet =p.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Urmom(U) on 2004-12-30 at 23:55:17
just some things to remember
when that guy was talking use the format
----------(10 spaces)Guys name:convo
---------------(15 spaces)if convo goes another line
also, add more doodads and sprites to terrain
umm on the screen shot of the guy talking, one of the words was blue
thats basically it. lets see it finished!
when that guy was talking use the format
----------(10 spaces)Guys name:convo
---------------(15 spaces)if convo goes another line
also, add more doodads and sprites to terrain
umm on the screen shot of the guy talking, one of the words was blue
thats basically it. lets see it finished!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-30 at 23:57:21
I only need AT least one thing from everyonr else!
Keep me motivated!
That is all!
Keep me motivated!
That is all!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-31 at 00:02:28
Since the units talk if you go near them will they talk about something diffrerent if you do like a quest,gain something or even be stronger?
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Staredit.Net Essence on 2004-12-31 at 00:04:04
Well...It's looking okay, The text only need to be fixed...
There is no real trill in those screenies, but the storyline look great...Indeed, you should put a little effort on displaying message..
There is no real trill in those screenies, but the storyline look great...Indeed, you should put a little effort on displaying message..
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-31 at 00:33:44
QUOTE(Wolfmasterkouga @ Dec 31 2004, 05:02 AM)
Since the units talk if you go near them will they talk about something diffrerent if you do like a quest,gain something or even be stronger?
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hhhhmmmmm....
I didnt think about doing that! lol Great idea!!
What do you mean even be stronger? Are you talking about the heroes? Or the person you talked to?
Most people you talk to have a mini quest, or they just say something good or bad!
I.E. In the next town one of the shop keepers is really mean and you have to bargain with him to get the prices cheaper!
Or the another person is really nice and gives away some hints to a SECRET area (easter egg)
Easter eggs will be all over the map BUT you have to earn no free eggs.
QUOTE(Sessase @ Dec 31 2004, 05:04 AM)
Well...It's looking okay, The text only need to be fixed...
There is no real trill in those screenies, but the storyline look great...Indeed, you should put a little effort on displaying message..
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There is no real trill in those screenies, but the storyline look great...Indeed, you should put a little effort on displaying message..
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ya sessase i have fixed the text and the screenshots will be updated in like an hour i need to finish putting the doodads in. and i made the text look nifty now
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-31 at 11:45:10
And i am going to make a like a 2-3 minute opening scene movie!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Neiji on 2004-12-31 at 13:54:49
I can't see any screen shots... where are they? All I see at the top is "[attachmentid=3660]"
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Forsaken on 2004-12-31 at 13:58:43
QUOTE
I can't see any screen shots... where are they? All I see at the top is
I took them out! i guess i should change title
