Wow, Theoretical, looks really nice. Good story too, although it may be a little advanced for the average player. Judging by a lot of your terrain, shouldn't you have done this in Twilight? That would have been original, since there are not a lot of good Twilight RPG's around.
I like the idea behind this map.
I really considered twilight, but I want an "on earth" feel to it. This, howver, is not the last map. There will be a total of six other worlds your will traverse, and I do intend to have the last map on twilight. Consider it a sort of hazing ritual, you know, like those dumb fraternity things you do to be considered "part of the group". Consider it the nerds trying to impress everyone by proving how manly they are, except instead of having to drink a large amount of alcohol/do strange things to a goat they have to leave the town and travel out as far and as long as possible. The tileset is Jungle, works better for alot of the things later in the map and the traps look better. It does not have a timeset, as it does not take place on our earth. There are trains, and some basic aircraft. The only ground vehicles are military and government owned. The small buildings you're probably talking about are going to be removed. They turned out a bit too small.