Ok I like What i see, and Here's what I have to say:
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1)FF3 Battle system? -The Simple Move Heroes to a Battle zone thing has been done, and overly used.
It's not terrible of an idea to use it, but it might be more intresting to do an
Actual TBC Battle system, or something. It appears as your battle system has
Been overly used by Many Map Makers(If I'm wrong feel free to explain to me)
2)Dart a Marine? -Dart always used a sword...I know Marine will allow him to attack air and what
not, but still I think Dart Should be a Dark Templar. After All none of the
Characters can attack air unless they go Dragoon Mode(Except Shana). That's
just my perspective.
3)Info -Can you Give more of an explanation on how you Plan to Portray the Story
And how you're going to make people not selecting Characters fit in?
4)Special Effects, and Cutscenes -You have to Have Stunning Trigger special effect Systems, and Huge Fighting
Cutscenes. It would Only be Fair
5)Tutorial -Will you Include Tutorials on EVERYTHING for the Players? Show em how to
Use additions, Dragoon, Items, etc. As Well as Tutorial on Missions?
6)The L.O.G. In 1 Map!? -You Sure you can capture the entire aspect of Legend of Dragoon in 1 Map!?
Personally I don't think you can do it In 1 Map. At the Most I would Say you
could Capture the Aspects of Disc 1 and 2 in 1 map, at Most. However from
what I've seen, you appear to Defenitely have the Skill enough to do this, Just
Keep in Mind Legend of Dragoon is a HUGE game, and You Might need to
expand it.
Well That's all I wanted to say to you. I would also Really Like to Test the Map.
Just so i could see how good it is. I do think you can Pull of this Project with flying Colors, goodluck(even if i can't be a tester)