Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-01 at 18:31:24
Well heres the story plot....
A ghost named Dando Yanks and his commander are trying to rid the earth of the zerg. ~1-7~ Dando finds out that the zerg can keep re-spawning and so they never really die as long as the overmind is alive. Dando also finds out that the S.F.A. (SecretFederationAgents) are controlling the zerg and Dando thinks they mean to take over the earth..... ~7-10~ Dando kills the 3 main S.F.A. units only to find its not over yet. ~1-2~ In the Zerg Missions (i need a name for the zerg missions so please give me ideas) a zerg unit named Chakaro needs to regroup his fellow zerg units. The zerg look up to him like he was the overmind. After they regroup though they need to defend themselves as the S.F.A. continue to try and control them. ~3-6~ Chakaro finds a fellow friend named Twono. He and Twono find the location of the S.F.A. controler and they go and destroy it. They discover that 2 of the dead leaders of the S.F.A. have fused there remains to become one. They go to destroy him only to find that 1 leader still survives. ~7-10~ The zerg then find a secret project the S.F.A. were working on. They bring it to the overmind destroying everything in their way. When the being is born the zerg start reaking havoc on the S.E.A. and the S.F.A. ~1-1~ In the Protoss missions (again need a name for the campaign) you are a new S.F.A. commander named Talah and you decide to get some payback by killing some S.E.A. troops and zerg for training. Thats all i have right now so please give me ideas.
Oh and check out my S.E.A. preview. its good!
A ghost named Dando Yanks and his commander are trying to rid the earth of the zerg. ~1-7~ Dando finds out that the zerg can keep re-spawning and so they never really die as long as the overmind is alive. Dando also finds out that the S.F.A. (SecretFederationAgents) are controlling the zerg and Dando thinks they mean to take over the earth..... ~7-10~ Dando kills the 3 main S.F.A. units only to find its not over yet. ~1-2~ In the Zerg Missions (i need a name for the zerg missions so please give me ideas) a zerg unit named Chakaro needs to regroup his fellow zerg units. The zerg look up to him like he was the overmind. After they regroup though they need to defend themselves as the S.F.A. continue to try and control them. ~3-6~ Chakaro finds a fellow friend named Twono. He and Twono find the location of the S.F.A. controler and they go and destroy it. They discover that 2 of the dead leaders of the S.F.A. have fused there remains to become one. They go to destroy him only to find that 1 leader still survives. ~7-10~ The zerg then find a secret project the S.F.A. were working on. They bring it to the overmind destroying everything in their way. When the being is born the zerg start reaking havoc on the S.E.A. and the S.F.A. ~1-1~ In the Protoss missions (again need a name for the campaign) you are a new S.F.A. commander named Talah and you decide to get some payback by killing some S.E.A. troops and zerg for training. Thats all i have right now so please give me ideas.
Oh and check out my S.E.A. preview. its good!Report, edit, etc...Posted by Puni(F) on 2005-03-01 at 19:02:37
I have a couple name's for the campaign name:
1) The Zerg (Pick a different name for 'zerg')
2) Creepy Zerg
Hmm, I'll get back to you when I get some more/
1) The Zerg (Pick a different name for 'zerg')
2) Creepy Zerg
Hmm, I'll get back to you when I get some more/
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-03-01 at 19:10:17
Names For Title:
The Rebelion
Final Stand
Earth Protectorate
BTW:
That preview was Totaly a waste of my time... How long did it take you? 3 minutes?
The terrain sucked from what I saw. Voice Overs Were Crap. No color or anything in the text and it disapeared before the voices stoped talking...
1/10
The Rebelion
Final Stand
Earth Protectorate
BTW:
That preview was Totaly a waste of my time... How long did it take you? 3 minutes?
The terrain sucked from what I saw. Voice Overs Were Crap. No color or anything in the text and it disapeared before the voices stoped talking...
1/10
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Puni(F) on 2005-03-01 at 19:21:50
Yea, You could fix up the terrain a little bit, It doesn't give the map any..."Flavor"... If you spoof up the terrain maybe ODD will give you A 4/10 rating. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-02 at 10:34:11
ok ok ok. i know that my preview wasent the best in the world but i had to finish it quickly cause every time i started workin on it something came up and i had to save it and work on it the next day. I got soooo feed up that i just rushed it and put it up. But i asure you that my S.E.A. maps are better then the preveiw. I will try and work on improving the preview the best i can with ur ideas and help from pizuscag (yes odd i kno u kno him) but i am currently trying to finish up my S.E.A. maps sooo...ya. O and thank u odd and puni for the campaign names....it saved me alot of time. 
ADDITION:
and besides am not the best map maker in the world....but i kno more than some people
ADDITION:
o and i just updated it a little. i added some dodaddes and crap and also changed the color of the letters. if you want to see the updated version go in movie/trailers and mine is the first or second......but the words still go away before the talking is finished...i just dont know how to fix it....u got any ideas cause whenever i try and fix it it screws up sumtin else 
ADDITION:
and besides am not the best map maker in the world....but i kno more than some people
ADDITION:
o and i just updated it a little. i added some dodaddes and crap and also changed the color of the letters. if you want to see the updated version go in movie/trailers and mine is the first or second......but the words still go away before the talking is finished...i just dont know how to fix it....u got any ideas cause whenever i try and fix it it screws up sumtin else
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TheOddAngel on 2005-03-02 at 17:01:27
I saw ur message but I am not on my computer right now... This computer doesn't have SC
I wasn't dising your map I was just basicaly saying it need ALOT of work... If you need anyhelp you can post questions in the assistance forum. Before you ask a question you should always Search The Forums to see if there has alredy been a thread about it... You can also check the tutorials data bace for some nifty tricks that can make your map good...
As for the mineral answer... No, i cant give you any minerals... Im curently saving up for 2.300 I think so I can buy the Name glow... Just post long detailed posts (like this one) and you will get alot of minerals... if you post small posts you might not even get 1...
I will watch your new preview when I get on my computer...
BTW: I think you should scrap voice overs... Most of the time it makes the map worse then better... It takes up spance making the download time unberable and sometimes the voices and scripts arnt that great...
PS: Im Pizuscags Cousin
I wasn't dising your map I was just basicaly saying it need ALOT of work... If you need anyhelp you can post questions in the assistance forum. Before you ask a question you should always Search The Forums to see if there has alredy been a thread about it... You can also check the tutorials data bace for some nifty tricks that can make your map good...
As for the mineral answer... No, i cant give you any minerals... Im curently saving up for 2.300 I think so I can buy the Name glow... Just post long detailed posts (like this one) and you will get alot of minerals... if you post small posts you might not even get 1...
I will watch your new preview when I get on my computer...
BTW: I think you should scrap voice overs... Most of the time it makes the map worse then better... It takes up spance making the download time unberable and sometimes the voices and scripts arnt that great...
PS: Im Pizuscags Cousin
Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-02 at 18:44:42
ok. ya pizuscag has told me that ur his cousin at school like 2.....il try and post more and longer posts so i can get minerals...il try and work more on my S.E.A. preview more.......if you want you can change it around urself and then PM it to me and il see if i like it 
i wonder if you can get alot of minerals by just doing this? 
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YES it works! i now have 45 minerals instead of 25! i only need like 5 more minerals to get a zerg pet! pizuscag told me that when you buy a zergling pet you can use it in a battle to get SHIT loads more minerals...........is that tue?
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okokok now i have 49 minerals...i got to make this post count....i only need 1 more mineral.....i wonder if you get more minerals the bigger words you use? right now at school im working on optics and how the pneumbra and umbra are effected as a ray of light gets closer to an opaque object...oh ya....odd srry bout saying that you were dissin me an all its just i think people who want to help are dissing me...lol i have more than 50 minerals now:)........i hope lol
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YES! i bought a zerg pet called baby_zekling and i feed him and he got angry so i put him to sleep. when he when to sleep i started thinking to myself "when are more people going to answer to this?"
Quote:
"Well heres the story plot....
A ghost named Dando Yanks and his commander are trying to rid the earth of the zerg. ~1-7~ Dando finds out that the zerg can keep re-spawning and so they never really die as long as the overmind is alive. Dando also finds out that the S.F.A. (SecretFederationAgents) are controlling the zerg and Dando thinks they mean to take over the earth..... ~7-10~ Dando kills the 3 main S.F.A. units only to find its not over yet. ~1-2~ In the Zerg Missions (i need a name for the zerg missions so please give me ideas) a zerg unit named Chakaro needs to regroup his fellow zerg units. The zerg look up to him like he was the overmind. After they regroup though they need to defend themselves as the S.F.A. continue to try and control them. ~3-6~ Chakaro finds a fellow friend named Twono. He and Twono find the location of the S.F.A. controler and they go and destroy it. They discover that 2 of the dead leaders of the S.F.A. have fused there remains to become one. They go to destroy him only to find that 1 leader still survives. ~7-10~ The zerg then find a secret project the S.F.A. were working on. They bring it to the overmind destroying everything in their way. When the being is born the zerg start reaking havoc on the S.E.A. and the S.F.A. ~1-1~ In the Protoss missions (again need a name for the campaign) you are a new S.F.A. commander named Talah and you decide to get some payback by killing some S.E.A. troops and zerg for training. Thats all i have right now so please give me ideas. Oh and check out my S.E.A. preview. its good! "
and also this
Quote:
"ok ok ok. i know that my preview wasent the best in the world but i had to finish it quickly cause every time i started workin on it something came up and i had to save it and work on it the next day. I got soooo feed up that i just rushed it and put it up. But i asure you that my S.E.A. maps are better then the preveiw. I will try and work on improving the preview the best i can with ur ideas and help from pizuscag (yes odd i kno u kno him) but i am currently trying to finish up my S.E.A. maps sooo...ya. O and thank u odd and puni for the campaign names....it saved me alot of time.
ADDITION:
and besides am not the best map maker in the world....but i kno more than some people
ADDITION:
o and i just updated it a little. i added some dodaddes and crap and also changed the color of the letters. if you want to see the updated version go in movie/trailers and mine is the first or second......but the words still go away before the talking is finished...i just dont know how to fix it....u got any ideas cause whenever i try and fix it it screws up sumtin else "
and that is what i thought.....well.....anyone got anymore ideas? the ideas i got helped me but that doesent mean im done!
i wonder if you can get alot of minerals by just doing this? ADDITION:
YES it works!
i now have 45 minerals instead of 25! i only need like 5 more minerals to get a zerg pet! pizuscag told me that when you buy a zergling pet you can use it in a battle to get SHIT loads more minerals...........is that tue? ADDITION:
okokok now i have 49 minerals...i got to make this post count....i only need 1 more mineral.....i wonder if you get more minerals the bigger words you use? right now at school im working on optics and how the pneumbra and umbra are effected as a ray of light gets closer to an opaque object...oh ya....odd srry bout saying that you were dissin me an all its just i think people who want to help are dissing me...lol i have more than 50 minerals now:)........i hope lol
ADDITION:
YES! i bought a zerg pet called baby_zekling and i feed him and he got angry so i put him to sleep. when he when to sleep i started thinking to myself "when are more people going to answer to this?"
Quote:
"Well heres the story plot....
A ghost named Dando Yanks and his commander are trying to rid the earth of the zerg. ~1-7~ Dando finds out that the zerg can keep re-spawning and so they never really die as long as the overmind is alive. Dando also finds out that the S.F.A. (SecretFederationAgents) are controlling the zerg and Dando thinks they mean to take over the earth..... ~7-10~ Dando kills the 3 main S.F.A. units only to find its not over yet. ~1-2~ In the Zerg Missions (i need a name for the zerg missions so please give me ideas) a zerg unit named Chakaro needs to regroup his fellow zerg units. The zerg look up to him like he was the overmind. After they regroup though they need to defend themselves as the S.F.A. continue to try and control them. ~3-6~ Chakaro finds a fellow friend named Twono. He and Twono find the location of the S.F.A. controler and they go and destroy it. They discover that 2 of the dead leaders of the S.F.A. have fused there remains to become one. They go to destroy him only to find that 1 leader still survives. ~7-10~ The zerg then find a secret project the S.F.A. were working on. They bring it to the overmind destroying everything in their way. When the being is born the zerg start reaking havoc on the S.E.A. and the S.F.A. ~1-1~ In the Protoss missions (again need a name for the campaign) you are a new S.F.A. commander named Talah and you decide to get some payback by killing some S.E.A. troops and zerg for training. Thats all i have right now so please give me ideas.
Oh and check out my S.E.A. preview. its good! " and also this
Quote:
"ok ok ok. i know that my preview wasent the best in the world but i had to finish it quickly cause every time i started workin on it something came up and i had to save it and work on it the next day. I got soooo feed up that i just rushed it and put it up. But i asure you that my S.E.A. maps are better then the preveiw. I will try and work on improving the preview the best i can with ur ideas and help from pizuscag (yes odd i kno u kno him) but i am currently trying to finish up my S.E.A. maps sooo...ya. O and thank u odd and puni for the campaign names....it saved me alot of time.
ADDITION:
and besides am not the best map maker in the world....but i kno more than some people
ADDITION:
o and i just updated it a little. i added some dodaddes and crap and also changed the color of the letters. if you want to see the updated version go in movie/trailers and mine is the first or second......but the words still go away before the talking is finished...i just dont know how to fix it....u got any ideas cause whenever i try and fix it it screws up sumtin else
"and that is what i thought.....well.....anyone got anymore ideas? the ideas i got helped me but that doesent mean im done!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by arglebosters on 2005-03-03 at 12:01:07
Ya.. I saw the preview and it wasn't too good. The voice overs are funny, aka an extremely retarded squeaky voice, but they defiantly are not what you want if you are trying to do if you want people to think you are serious about your map. The map could be okay, but don't rush it like you did this time. The story line sounds okay, but it is confusing between the S.E.A. and the S.F.A. You could try to think up of different names, or try to add another letter to one of them.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-03 at 12:08:42
ya ur right. as i said before, i am not the best map maker in the world. (im not a good map maker at all but im better then some people i know!) Let me asure u that my maps are WAY better then the preview. i just wanted to make the preview to let people know that my campaign is coming out. i need some advice. what should i do? make all the maps have voices or no voices? some people say the voices will screw it up but some people say otherwise....im gonna start a pole on it but i want answers here to plz!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-03 at 14:42:48
im thinkin.............................................................................mabye i should make diferent kinds of maps cause everyone seems to hate my maps already so il make different one 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by The_Zekling on 2005-03-05 at 10:14:47
i deleted my S.E.A. preview cause people said it sucked so much and now im worling on fixing the problems in my maps!