Nicely done. It looks like it took a long time, but I do have some minor criticisms:
- The text and the background clash, making it difficult to read some of it.
- Is the design appropriate for a newsletter? What is your target audience?
- The tech borders could be thinner to make the piece appear less cluttered.
Well, I'm probably being overly critical, and the newsletter is decent already and will get a good grade, but it does have a couple of practical niggles.