Odd, personally I think it's much (read: REALLY MUCH) better if you create an thread after you're atleast at 50% or even better somewhere around 75%. This way you are sure you'll finish the map and you can tell something more about the gameplay and such.
Because now you told us how the game starts and that you can order the other guys... that aint that much huh. I don't say this to hurt you or something, it's ment as constructive critism, but everyone can simple say the map will look like this and it's going to be cool and such...
Sorry to say but personnally I think you should delete this post and re-create it after you have most of the triggers, really know what the map is like and maybe some screenshots. Because maybe something doesn't work or costs way to much time or something, and then you'll disapoint other people and such.
I'm currently working on something that has never done before and will totally rock (someone else sayd that too) IF it's going to be like I want. I almost created a thread about it a few months ago but didn't do it, and luckily coz a few days later I couldn't work further coz something couldn't be done I thought. But now, a few months later, I find an way how it can be done really good. Something like this can happen always, so be carefull of when you make an thread about your map.
But enough about that. I kinda like your map, it isn't original at all but the stratigic facter sounds good. Since you didn't and can't tell much about the map I also don't have much critism. But if I was you I whould use desert instead of installation since that is a much better terrain for caves. You can still use the doors with other editers and if you give it some time it will look good with the surrounding terrain. But I don't know for sure if your map is in caves, but you talked about 'orange red dust' and installation doesn't have much 'orange red dust' now has it
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But goodluck with your map.
Edit: I don't know if Zombie means that he got THIS map yesterday or something else, he kinda confusses me since you sayd today (!!) "I haven't actualy started the rpg yet" in the other thread...