Report, edit, etc...Posted by SiLeNT(U) on 2005-03-21 at 16:57:19
Here is my first try at terrain, I'm not here to be flamed, I know its bad, I just need pointers on how to improve.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by MapUnprotector on 2005-03-21 at 17:19:47
Looks alright, sort of blocky thought. To me it feels like a bridge over a pit, maybe do to the repetative tiles, though it is probably a ramp going upwards.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Clokr_ on 2005-03-21 at 17:24:49
WOW, is it a ramp?
Do you know what it looks like? It looks like a bridge over a cliff!! If you see it that way its pretty cool.
Do you know what it looks like? It looks like a bridge over a cliff!! If you see it that way its pretty cool.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Urmom(U) on 2005-03-21 at 17:25:53
why is there some random bushes on asphault may i ask? fix the blockiness at the top also and itll be decent.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by D_Scypher on 2005-03-21 at 17:51:19
I think that looks pretty cool for a first try.
I'm not very familiar with Ashworld terrain, but what I'd do is go with the idea of a pit/chasm and enhance that. Find darker rocky tiles to place next to the bridge, giving the illusion of depth. And find similar pit tiles like you already have, and scatter them so there are no obvious patterns.
I'm not very familiar with Ashworld terrain, but what I'd do is go with the idea of a pit/chasm and enhance that. Find darker rocky tiles to place next to the bridge, giving the illusion of depth. And find similar pit tiles like you already have, and scatter them so there are no obvious patterns.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by EzDay281 on 2005-03-21 at 18:15:30
It's pretty good.
Looks like a ramp to me.
Looks like a ramp to me.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by TRiGGaMaSTa on 2005-03-21 at 18:47:23
After seeing this and the comment about the bridge, it gave me the idea to make this. Good job though.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by BeeR_KeG on 2005-03-21 at 18:53:57
Artanis, I have no clue what you tried to do, but it looks like a bridge over an endless pit.
If you fix up the tiles a bit to make them not-blocky it'll look very good.
For your first time, it's good.
If you fix up the tiles a bit to make them not-blocky it'll look very good.
For your first time, it's good.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Bringer on 2005-03-21 at 19:03:09
Yea good job for your first try. You have some talent. All of us had blocky terrain when we first started and alot of us have improved alot. Keep up the work and remember practice makes perfect and never let the naysayers get to you.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Rantent on 2005-03-21 at 19:14:27
I never had blocky terrain. 
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I think it looks almost like your walking across a pit of spikes or something. I think it's pretty original to!
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I think it looks almost like your walking across a pit of spikes or something. I think it's pretty original to!
Report, edit, etc...Posted by RexyRex on 2005-03-21 at 19:19:56
I know it's not the place, but great job boneless.
Also, Artanis, that is pretty good. You should see me
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Also, Artanis, that is pretty good. You should see me
.Report, edit, etc...Posted by Fortune on 2005-03-21 at 23:52:26
Yeah, an A for originality. Yet again blockiness has struck and given it something to complain about though—it could use some work.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by D_Scypher on 2005-03-22 at 00:17:09
Nice ramp, Trigga. I'm thinking we'll need a Hall of Ramps pretty soon...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by Sipher on 2005-03-23 at 20:10:08
Not bad, I like the "Ash Look" with the plants in it, makes it like a pretty hell. Just try out different types of terrain that dont look so blocky and you'll be fine. Just experiment really, I doubt many people can tell you how to improve a whole bunch, just keep experimenting and you'll have it :-)