Report, edit, etc...Posted by freeAll on 2005-04-24 at 04:33:08
Judgement Wars
REMIND ME IF THERE ARE ANY BUG OR MISTAKES OF ENGLISH, THANKS
Storyline:
3 years has passed since the end of Brood war...
Characters Files:
Jim Raynor
Terran.
He was once the captain of Sons of Korhal, and he ever helped Kerrigan to establish her Zerg forces. However, he was betrayed by Kerrigan at last. He had to wander in the space,and prepare to found a troop for retaliating Kerrigan. About 1 year has passed since the Brood war was over, he found the Phantom with the help of the Love&Peace company, and he also realized that it was a great mistake that his selfish revenge was, then he changed his mind to save the homeless Terrans in the universe .
Zeratul
Protoss Dark Templar.
The quondam crucial vassal of the leader of Shakurass Raszagal, he was appointed the leader of Dark Templar when Raszagal about to fall. He also has unlimited hatred with Kerrigan who lead his Matrioch to death and lead his own people to serious deaths. But he only intend to revive the Protoss now.
Kerrigan
She was one of the Terran Ghost, the vice-leader of Sons of Korhal, and she was a probable lover to Jim Raynor. Afterward she was infested by the Zerg, and become a multiple creature between Terran and Zerg. She has strong power of body and psycho energies. Sith the Overmind died, she eliminated all the opposed forces, and became the ultimate winner of Brood war. Now, she was based upon on Char, and held together over ten planets, established the Great Zerg empire.
Artanis
Protoss Praetor.
Was once struggled for the peace of the Protoss on Shakurass together with Zeratul during Brood wars. After successfully lustrated the Zerg, he heroically assaulted Kerrigan for revenging Fenix and Raszagal, and was elected the new leader of Protoss. Since Brood wars he has led the people of Protoss constituted the new homeworld.
Magellan Yang AGES:26
Terran.
He joined in the Sons of Korhal after Raynor in the past, and was a member of the information ministry under command of Mengsk. He was recruit into Phantom by Raynor after the Brood war, and took charge of technical support, informational disposal and report and so on. One of the cadremen of Phantom.
Mojo AGES:512
Protoss Executor.
He was the hero who once took part in the first Starcraft, Brood war and unlimited wars. His commanding ability is fineness, and his tactic and tactics are flexible and changeful. Afterward he stayed on Shakurass with Artanis.
Tom Kazansky AGES:28
Terran.
A quondam ace of UED. He is calmness, he always can adapt the situation of the battlefield, and watch for a chance to make an action. He was one of the few surivor of UED. Now he was the header of the special action team(S.A.T.) of Phantom, and the vice-commander. One of cadremen of Phantom.
Lukkaga AGES: Unknown
Zerg Cerebrate.
He has survived since the first Starcraft. Was praised as the most loyal Cerebrate to Kerrigan, and the most foxy Zerg commander. It is he that led on the troops and defeat the united force of UED, Artanis and Mengsk, let Kerrigan take the victory at last. Now he shelters Kerrigan on the Char.
ADDITION:
Arctrus Mengsk
Terran.
Leader of Sons of Korhal. He calls himself as “Emperor Mengsk I”. He was defeated by UED and ran away, then was reasoned to help Kerrigan. After being betrayed by Kerrigan, he whipped together the troops and came back for killing her and at last, he was defeated once again and dispeared.
Beldy Micheals AGES:56
Terran.
The Admiral of UED. He is the commander in chief of the anabasis fleets of UED this time. He was a good friend to Alexie Stukov and Gerard DuGalle. And so he had the personal equations on requesting to be the commander on his own. He is efficient and salted to battle, his tactics go ahead steadily and surely.
Chalias AGES:765
A Pretor of Protoss.
His is the schoolmate of Aldaris when studied Khala. He led the troops rebelled Zeratul and Raszagal on Shakurass together with Aldaris. And at last he came to himself and help Artanis with annihilating the Zerg on Shakurass. He disappeared when assaulted Kerrigan.
John.C.Slavik AGES:43
Terran.
The Commander of Sons of Korhal on Cancer Man. He advocates the knightlike spirit, though Cancer Man was insular, he still carries on liquidating any outlander. He has a group of myrmidons who think the same as him.
Tondonam AGES:328
Protoss Dark Templar.
Zeratul’s good friend, he is young but his mentality is lofty, even just under Zeratul. He is also a spiffy warrior, once defeated the force of UED and Zerg. He was presumed upon by Raszagal and Zeratul. But he disappeared after Brood war.
Woodika the “Unclean One” AGES：Unknown
Zerg Defiler.
He is the cogent attest to gradual evolution of Zerg. His wisdom has already equaled a Cerebrate, and he could learn and think himself. He was made use as a adviser by Kerrigan, and he takes orders from Lukkaga in peacetime.
Georage Hulkers AGES：51
Terran.
Derivation is unknown. He is both the board chairman and CEO of the company which suddenly grew up after Brood war called “Love&Peace”. He is unobtrusive and kind, and is the good friend without age of Raynor. It was he that helped Raynor to walk out from the hatching of revenge.
Episode I Moving Phantom
1.A Chance Meeting
Be the Phantom commander to see what happened on a planet was abandoned by Sons of Korhal.
2.Follow the Spirit
According to the direction of Zeratul, Phantom get on the planet where the source of responses of Protoss is.
To be Continued...
ADDITION:
Arctrus Mengsk
Terran.
Leader of Sons of Korhal. He calls himself as “Emperor Mengsk I”. He was defeated by UED and ran away, then was reasoned to help Kerrigan. After being betrayed by Kerrigan, he whipped together the troops and came back for killing her and at last, he was defeated once again and dispeared.
Beldy Micheals AGES:56
Terran.
The Admiral of UED. He is the commander in chief of the anabasis fleets of UED this time. He was a good friend to Alexie Stukov and Gerard DuGalle. And so he had the personal equations on requesting to be the commander on his own. He is efficient and salted to battle, his tactics go ahead steadily and surely.
Chalias AGES:765
A Pretor of Protoss.
His is the schoolmate of Aldaris when studied Khala. He led the troops rebelled Zeratul and Raszagal on Shakurass together with Aldaris. And at last he came to himself and help Artanis with annihilating the Zerg on Shakurass. He disappeared when assaulted Kerrigan.
John.C.Slavik AGES:43
Terran.
The Commander of Sons of Korhal on Cancer Man. He advocates the knightlike spirit, though Cancer Man was insular, he still carries on liquidating any outlander. He has a group of myrmidons who think the same as him.
Tondonam AGES:328
Protoss Dark Templar.
Zeratul’s good friend, he is young but his mentality is lofty, even just under Zeratul. He is also a spiffy warrior, once defeated the force of UED and Zerg. He was presumed upon by Raszagal and Zeratul. But he disappeared after Brood war.
Woodika the “Unclean One” AGES：Unknown
Zerg Defiler.
He is the cogent attest to gradual evolution of Zerg. His wisdom has already equaled a Cerebrate, and he could learn and think himself. He was made use as a adviser by Kerrigan, and he takes orders from Lukkaga in peacetime.
Georage Hulkers AGES：51
Terran.
Derivation is unknown. He is both the board chairman and CEO of the company which suddenly grew up after Brood war called “Love&Peace”. He is unobtrusive and kind, and is the good friend without age of Raynor. It was he that helped Raynor to walk out from the hatching of revenge.
Episode I Moving Phantom
1.A Chance Meeting
Be the Phantom commander to see what happened on a planet was abandoned by Sons of Korhal.
2.Follow the Spirit
According to the direction of Zeratul, Phantom get on the planet where the source of responses of Protoss is.
To be Continued...
ADDITION:
TO BE CONTINUED...
REMIND ME IF THERE ARE ANY BUG OR MISTAKES OF ENGLISH, THANKS
Storyline:
3 years has passed since the end of Brood war...
Characters Files:
Jim RaynorTerran.
He was once the captain of Sons of Korhal, and he ever helped Kerrigan to establish her Zerg forces. However, he was betrayed by Kerrigan at last. He had to wander in the space,and prepare to found a troop for retaliating Kerrigan. About 1 year has passed since the Brood war was over, he found the Phantom with the help of the Love&Peace company, and he also realized that it was a great mistake that his selfish revenge was, then he changed his mind to save the homeless Terrans in the universe .
ZeratulProtoss Dark Templar.
The quondam crucial vassal of the leader of Shakurass Raszagal, he was appointed the leader of Dark Templar when Raszagal about to fall. He also has unlimited hatred with Kerrigan who lead his Matrioch to death and lead his own people to serious deaths. But he only intend to revive the Protoss now.
KerriganShe was one of the Terran Ghost, the vice-leader of Sons of Korhal, and she was a probable lover to Jim Raynor. Afterward she was infested by the Zerg, and become a multiple creature between Terran and Zerg. She has strong power of body and psycho energies. Sith the Overmind died, she eliminated all the opposed forces, and became the ultimate winner of Brood war. Now, she was based upon on Char, and held together over ten planets, established the Great Zerg empire.
ArtanisProtoss Praetor.
Was once struggled for the peace of the Protoss on Shakurass together with Zeratul during Brood wars. After successfully lustrated the Zerg, he heroically assaulted Kerrigan for revenging Fenix and Raszagal, and was elected the new leader of Protoss. Since Brood wars he has led the people of Protoss constituted the new homeworld.
Magellan Yang AGES:26Terran.
He joined in the Sons of Korhal after Raynor in the past, and was a member of the information ministry under command of Mengsk. He was recruit into Phantom by Raynor after the Brood war, and took charge of technical support, informational disposal and report and so on. One of the cadremen of Phantom.
Mojo AGES:512Protoss Executor.
He was the hero who once took part in the first Starcraft, Brood war and unlimited wars. His commanding ability is fineness, and his tactic and tactics are flexible and changeful. Afterward he stayed on Shakurass with Artanis.
Tom Kazansky AGES:28Terran.
A quondam ace of UED. He is calmness, he always can adapt the situation of the battlefield, and watch for a chance to make an action. He was one of the few surivor of UED. Now he was the header of the special action team(S.A.T.) of Phantom, and the vice-commander. One of cadremen of Phantom.
Lukkaga AGES: UnknownZerg Cerebrate.
He has survived since the first Starcraft. Was praised as the most loyal Cerebrate to Kerrigan, and the most foxy Zerg commander. It is he that led on the troops and defeat the united force of UED, Artanis and Mengsk, let Kerrigan take the victory at last. Now he shelters Kerrigan on the Char.
ADDITION:
Arctrus Mengsk Terran.
Leader of Sons of Korhal. He calls himself as “Emperor Mengsk I”. He was defeated by UED and ran away, then was reasoned to help Kerrigan. After being betrayed by Kerrigan, he whipped together the troops and came back for killing her and at last, he was defeated once again and dispeared.
Beldy Micheals AGES:56Terran.
The Admiral of UED. He is the commander in chief of the anabasis fleets of UED this time. He was a good friend to Alexie Stukov and Gerard DuGalle. And so he had the personal equations on requesting to be the commander on his own. He is efficient and salted to battle, his tactics go ahead steadily and surely.
Chalias AGES:765A Pretor of Protoss.
His is the schoolmate of Aldaris when studied Khala. He led the troops rebelled Zeratul and Raszagal on Shakurass together with Aldaris. And at last he came to himself and help Artanis with annihilating the Zerg on Shakurass. He disappeared when assaulted Kerrigan.
John.C.Slavik AGES:43Terran.
The Commander of Sons of Korhal on Cancer Man. He advocates the knightlike spirit, though Cancer Man was insular, he still carries on liquidating any outlander. He has a group of myrmidons who think the same as him.
Tondonam AGES:328Protoss Dark Templar.
Zeratul’s good friend, he is young but his mentality is lofty, even just under Zeratul. He is also a spiffy warrior, once defeated the force of UED and Zerg. He was presumed upon by Raszagal and Zeratul. But he disappeared after Brood war.
Woodika the “Unclean One” AGES：UnknownZerg Defiler.
He is the cogent attest to gradual evolution of Zerg. His wisdom has already equaled a Cerebrate, and he could learn and think himself. He was made use as a adviser by Kerrigan, and he takes orders from Lukkaga in peacetime.
Georage Hulkers AGES：51Terran.
Derivation is unknown. He is both the board chairman and CEO of the company which suddenly grew up after Brood war called “Love&Peace”. He is unobtrusive and kind, and is the good friend without age of Raynor. It was he that helped Raynor to walk out from the hatching of revenge.
Episode I Moving Phantom
1.A Chance Meeting
Be the Phantom commander to see what happened on a planet was abandoned by Sons of Korhal.
2.Follow the Spirit
According to the direction of Zeratul, Phantom get on the planet where the source of responses of Protoss is.
To be Continued...
ADDITION:
Arctrus Mengsk Terran.
Leader of Sons of Korhal. He calls himself as “Emperor Mengsk I”. He was defeated by UED and ran away, then was reasoned to help Kerrigan. After being betrayed by Kerrigan, he whipped together the troops and came back for killing her and at last, he was defeated once again and dispeared.
Beldy Micheals AGES:56Terran.
The Admiral of UED. He is the commander in chief of the anabasis fleets of UED this time. He was a good friend to Alexie Stukov and Gerard DuGalle. And so he had the personal equations on requesting to be the commander on his own. He is efficient and salted to battle, his tactics go ahead steadily and surely.
Chalias AGES:765A Pretor of Protoss.
His is the schoolmate of Aldaris when studied Khala. He led the troops rebelled Zeratul and Raszagal on Shakurass together with Aldaris. And at last he came to himself and help Artanis with annihilating the Zerg on Shakurass. He disappeared when assaulted Kerrigan.
John.C.Slavik AGES:43Terran.
The Commander of Sons of Korhal on Cancer Man. He advocates the knightlike spirit, though Cancer Man was insular, he still carries on liquidating any outlander. He has a group of myrmidons who think the same as him.
Tondonam AGES:328Protoss Dark Templar.
Zeratul’s good friend, he is young but his mentality is lofty, even just under Zeratul. He is also a spiffy warrior, once defeated the force of UED and Zerg. He was presumed upon by Raszagal and Zeratul. But he disappeared after Brood war.
Woodika the “Unclean One” AGES：UnknownZerg Defiler.
He is the cogent attest to gradual evolution of Zerg. His wisdom has already equaled a Cerebrate, and he could learn and think himself. He was made use as a adviser by Kerrigan, and he takes orders from Lukkaga in peacetime.
Georage Hulkers AGES：51Terran.
Derivation is unknown. He is both the board chairman and CEO of the company which suddenly grew up after Brood war called “Love&Peace”. He is unobtrusive and kind, and is the good friend without age of Raynor. It was he that helped Raynor to walk out from the hatching of revenge.
Episode I Moving Phantom
1.A Chance Meeting
Be the Phantom commander to see what happened on a planet was abandoned by Sons of Korhal.
2.Follow the Spirit
According to the direction of Zeratul, Phantom get on the planet where the source of responses of Protoss is.
To be Continued...
ADDITION:
TO BE CONTINUED...
Report, edit, etc...Posted by GSG-9 on 2005-04-27 at 06:41:27
After testing each map for NO MORE than 5 minutes, I could say this is quite good (I think) with some hiccups in your grammar. Too bad this isn't getting much attention.
Report, edit, etc...Posted by dust_core on 2005-04-27 at 08:17:46
Yeah, this campaign wouldn't get as much attention than you thought. Because many of the mapmakers, like me had created a hypothetical starcraft 2. Anyway, it is good to see people making their own comments on map making. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by freeAll on 2005-04-27 at 12:30:49
But now it gets, thx you 2. 
Report, edit, etc...Posted by LordVodka on 2005-05-01 at 14:48:43
Dude, this looks pretty sweet. 'Nuff said right there
Report, edit, etc...Posted by freeAll on 2005-05-13 at 16:43:25
I-3 The Dark Fog
It's a stage in a base,enjoy!~
It's a stage in a base,enjoy!~